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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
The Mystery Of The Dinosaurs
Published On Jul 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 27
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July 2013
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Last Friday some doctors were doing an experiment on Dinosaurs bones. Suddenly the computer said that there is a system failure and it can make trouble. The doctors tried their best to repair the computers but it was not working. The computer said that danger is near. All the doctors ran out of the lab. A blast happened and the lab exploded. More than 50 alive dinosaurs came out and started attacking the doctors. Some doctors died and some doctors escaped the place. The escaped doctors told everything to the Police. The Police was shocked to hear the story so they sent some of the officers to fight the dinosaurs. 3 hours passed but the officers didn’t return so the Police realized that it is a tough mission for them. All the Police officers came out and started shooting the dinosaurs but the dinosaurs weren’t getting hurt. Some police officers took out their helicopters started shooting the dinosaurs. Some flying dinosaurs came and bumped with the helicopters. The helicopters were destroyed. The Police couldn’t do anything so they gave the responsibility to the army. After some time, two tanks came and started shooting bombs at the dinosaurs but the dinosaurs dodged and crushed the tanks by standing on them. All army officers came and threw hand grenades at the dinosaurs. Some dinosaurs died but some dodged. The dinosaurs with sharp teeth came and ate the soldiers. No one could finish the dinosaurs. All the soldiers escaped. Now it was up to the government to finish the dinosaurs. A Police officer named Faraz discovered that all the dinosaurs meet at a place at night. Faraz told everything to the government. The government planted three time bombs in the morning. At night when the dinosaurs met each other, some Police officers including Faraz hid behind a bush and watched the dinosaurs. Suddenly a big blast occurred and all the dinosaurs died. The country was saved and the government banned experiments on animals.
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Comments 27
manahil Have you cheat this from some movie?? and by the way I don't like this story.It was not that much good that it should win a prize.I have read much more better stories then this one in V shine. Manahil
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
MUHAMMAD EXCELLENT! KEEP IT UP! Muhammad
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Hareem Very brilliant!keep it up Hareem
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
Azka Goooooooooooooood Azka
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
saman Did you get the gift Saman
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
mohammad Wow Mohammad
Sep 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Goooooooooooooooooood Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
manal Congratzzz saad ;) Manal
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Imaginative.....congratzxzxzxsxzxzxzszszsz!!!!!=D Ajwa
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Soha Really nice and congratz! Soha
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
Usman Awesome story Saad.Congrats for winning Usman
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
afifah Is that "Jurassic park"? hahahaha just kidding:), it's amazing and intresting. Congrats for winning. Afifah
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
talha Congrats Talha
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
raveeha This is AMAZING Raveeha
Jul 7th 2013
 
 
manal Awesome! Manal
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
Uswah Wow saad nyc work! ;) Uswah
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Saad I’ve joined an open group on facebook. It is VSHINE Readers and Writers. Boys are likely to be added. So everyone check out that group. Just type “VSHINE Readers and Writers” in search box and there you are. Saad
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Saad Thanks Everyone!!! Saad
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Laibah Saad, wow really ! amazing story, loved it !!!!!!!!!! Laibah
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
hafsa Nice Hafsa
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
hafsa Nice Hafsa
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
nazish Creative.saad you are the best. Nazish
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Muhammad Hassam NICE ! Muhammad Hassam
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
Sidra Imaginative Sidra
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
Saad Thanks Ahmed Saad
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
Ahmed Nice Ahmed
Jun 30th 2013
 
 

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