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Haniya Qamar
Haniya Qamar
S.m Public Academy
The Haunted House
Published On Jun 22nd 2013
Total Comments : 22
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I am in a haunted house,
Oh look! There’s a mouse,
The spiders are creeping to me,
A snake is wriggling on my knee,
There's an ugly woman,
She is pouring a liquid from a red can,
She saw me and tried to tie me up,
But I threw on her a large cup,
I took her broomstick and flew away,
I can’t forget the adventure I had on 1st May!
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Comments 22
Maleeha Nice Maleeha
Jul 11th 2014
Haniya Thx ev 1! :) Haniya
May 25th 2014
Maha Its very nice Keep it up :) Maha
Oct 12th 2013
Bushra Coooooooooooollllllllllll poem. I like it Bushra
Jul 26th 2013
Areeba AWESOME! Haniya ur work is simply gr8 Areeba
Jul 24th 2013
Crystal Do you like haunted houses? Crystal
Jul 9th 2013
Emel AMAZING! Emel
Jul 4th 2013
Abuzar That`s called a real poem. Abuzar
Jul 4th 2013
Haniya This poem was also published in Dawn's young world! Haniya
Jun 30th 2013
Crystal Wonderful piece of writing. Crystal
Jun 29th 2013
Ahmed I have joined vshine readers and writers group at facebook. They say it’s for boys!!! You just type “vshine readers and writers” and an open group you see. Join it Ahmed
Jun 29th 2013
Rafia Ur welcome dear.....!!!!:) Rafia
Jun 28th 2013
Haniya Thnx everybody! Haniya
Jun 28th 2013
Areej Thats reallyy greaaattt! awesome yaarrr! Areej
Jun 28th 2013
sara Awesome! Sara
Jun 27th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Reallly nyx rhyming wrds and language u hav used :) Bushra Hafeez
Jun 27th 2013
Rafia Awesome.....!!!!!!!:) Rafia
Jun 26th 2013
nazish Gr8 poem. Nazish
Jun 25th 2013
Haniya Thanks! Haniya
Jun 25th 2013
Hamza Good Poem! :) Hamza
Jun 25th 2013
Shehryar Attention All boys here on v shine. You can join an open group on facebook for writers and readers. Its name is “V SHINE Readers and Writers.” Girls can only message if they have any problem about their stories etc but they can’t join the group for now. I’m putting this comment on behalf of admin of V SHINE . You search the group on facebook by “V SHINE Readers and Writers.” Shehryar
Jun 24th 2013
Abeera Nice poem :) Abeera
Jun 24th 2013

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