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Tooba Raheel
Tooba Raheel
Divisional Public School, Lahore.
The Bfc (part 1)
Published On Jun 22nd 2013
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Brittany was bored. She had nothing to do. Amelia was asleep and Anne was watching the TV in case something good was coming. After about an hour she came back looking glum. “What’s up?” asked Brittany.
“Nothing” exclaimed Anne “There is nothing to do. What can I do?”
“I don’t know” sighed Brittany “I don’t want to play with dolls!”
“Neither do I” said Anne who wasn’t very keen with dolls. And they both sighed.
Amelia woke up and heard them sigh. ”What’s with the sighing?” she asked.
“We are really bored” said Anne.
“Don’t worry Brittany and Anne. School will start; we will make friends and have parties etc.” Amelia said
Yeah but school is almost two months away!” said Brittany  
Brittany, Amelia and Anne were sisters. They were new in London. All of their friends and cousins were in San Francisco. They had come to London in the school holidays and were bored. London was famous but their father was so busy, they couldn’t tour the place.
Amelia took some magazines and started to read them. She saw an advertisement that read:
 “Want to have enjoyment in your life? Join the Joy club!”
Amelia asked Brittany “There is a Joy club in building number 27 of our street. What do you say should we join it?”
“Well, I think that it is an awesome idea” replied Brittany. Anne agreed.
The Club started the next day. The timings were 6 AM to12 PM. The girls didn’t like the timings but they had no choice. They started to go to the club from the next day. It was really dumb.
On the fifth day of the club they sat and talked about the club.
“I don’t like the club at all!” exclaimed Anne and the other two agreed. They were talking like this when a voice came “Hey do you mind if we sit here?”
Brittany looked up. There were 2 girls. “No” she said
“I am Samantha. My age is 13 and this is my sister. She is 11 years old. What about you?”  Samantha said
Brittany said “I am Brittany and I’m 14 years old. These are my sisters Amelia who is 13 and Anne who is 11 years old we don’t like the club do you?”
“No” they said.
Then Samantha invited them to her house. Like this they met a lot and soon became good friends.
 One day when they were at the park when Brittany (after thinking for some time) said “Why don’t we make our own club?”

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Comments 35
Zainab Nice. I am also waiting for the next part Zainab
Jan 9th 2018
Irza Nice story. To help with your next part,maybe you could add a bit of horror and mystery. I always like stories with that included. Can't wait for the next part. Irza
May 18th 2017
Aliza  Hey r u still using vshine Aliza
Nov 30th 2016
Tooba Thanks alot, Eraj. And Aliza: Finally! Someone gets the PJO reference! Tooba
Feb 18th 2016
Tooba I love everyone who liked this story and commented. Thanks alot guys. Because of your support, I have decided to continue this story. NExt part will come in summer vacations. Once again, I love you guys Tooba
Feb 18th 2016
Tooba @Aliza Sorry for the late reply. Yeah I love English movies and am no fan of Hindi movies (I have watched only three or four). Same goes with songs. I sure hope you become the best designer in the world ;) I love you confidence. A piece of advice for you: Listen to everyone's opinions but don't act on them and don't believe what anyone tells you unless you have solid proof.. I hope you lead a good life! Tooba
Feb 18th 2016
Aliza  Wow do you really watch english movies i mean i thought i am the only one hating hindi movies and plz read my about me i sort of changed it.and blue cookies for you (::)(::)(::)(::) Aliza
Nov 15th 2015
Tooba Hello Ayesha! Yes I have read every single book of Rick Riordan (not the adult ones) and I am waiting (as desperately as u r ) for The Blood of Olympus. Have u read the sneak peek? I have or atleast I hope I have; See there are so many (online) I don't know which one is true. I have already read ur 'About me'. I m really sorry to disappoint you that from ur list I have only read Harry Potter series, Percy Jackson series, Divergent and Hunger Games. Have you read Ella Enchanted? Reply soon btw Ramadan Mubarik! Tooba
Jul 9th 2014
Irum Fatima, have you read Heroes of Olympus series?? I saw your comment on Fatimah Latif's story 'Lucifer' that you had read them. Have you read all of them? Like, have you read House of Hades until now? I am soo desperately waiting for the last book which hasn't been released ..Sorry to be so curious , but I am a big fan of these books and I'm always looking for people who've read the same books as I have. I saw in your 'About Me' that you love books. I'll tell you what, go in my About Me and look at the long list of books I've read and tell me which ones you read and which ones you haven't, okay? Irum
Jul 6th 2014
Eraj Great story fatima!!! Eraj
Apr 1st 2014
Tooba NOT to be Continued Tooba
Sep 23rd 2013
Tooba Sorry people but i am not going to write this story for at least 2 to 3 months....... Tooba
Aug 20th 2013
hafsa Hi. tum khan rahti ho Hafsa
Aug 6th 2013
hafsa Hi fatimah . rozay kaisay ja rahay hain. Hafsa
Jul 27th 2013
Arwa Ramadan Mubarak Arwa
Jul 13th 2013
Tooba @Wafa Aap ko bhi ramadhan mubarak ho Tooba
Jul 11th 2013
Tooba Ramadhan Mubarak! Tooba
Jul 11th 2013
Tooba Well it may take months........(I mean it) Tooba
Jul 11th 2013
hafsa hello. 1 first roza started at 10 july in dubia. Hafsa
Jul 11th 2013
Khadijah So, when are you gonna send the next part? Khadijah
Jul 10th 2013
Jul 10th 2013
sania Its an interesting story Sania
Jul 7th 2013
hafsa how r u Hafsa
Jul 6th 2013
hafsa Hello Hafsa
Jul 5th 2013
Tooba Yes I am here. Tooba
Jul 3rd 2013
hafsa Its very nice story. and fatimah i want to talk to you . r u here Hafsa
Jul 3rd 2013
Maarij Maqsood Write the next part as soon as possible Maarij Maqsood
Jun 30th 2013
Tooba Well i haven't written it...............yet Tooba
Jun 29th 2013
Sana C'mon! send the next part..!! Sana
Jun 28th 2013
tehreem Great fatima....sendthe next part.. Tehreem
Jun 28th 2013
Rafia Awesome.......... Rafia
Jun 28th 2013
Irum Interesting. Irum
Jun 27th 2013
eesha Next pt??????????????waiting Eesha
Jun 26th 2013
Tooba No, I sent an introduction Tooba
Jun 24th 2013
Ahmed Haven't you sent it second time the same episode Ahmed
Jun 23rd 2013

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