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Ifrah  (manooo) Shakil
Ifrah (manooo) Shakil
Usman Public School
Published On Jun 22nd 2013
Total Comments : 26
Total Views :  524
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Rank 8 Out of 10
WinkA city where impossible becomes possible
Where a telephone bill, makes a person illYell
SurprisedWhere a person cannot sleep without a pill
Where you will find lots of noiseTongue out
LaughingHere you will really enjoy
Sign boards and banners everywhereUndecided
EmbarassedLots of traffic here and there
This is Karachi my dearInnocent
CoolDonot fear, come here every year!!!

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Comments 26
Ifrah  (manooo) And Rafia i hav changed the pic too ....... it's fine right?????? nd Rafia.............................. Ifrah (manooo)
Sep 17th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Hey Rafia ....... em exteremely sorry ...... i hacked this account ....... say sorry to ur frnd Ifrah right?????...... well, say that i was to hack her id, i am SAAD ABBAS , student of grade 8, u should b thinking that i should b mature and sensible about it but.... however Rafia ur comments were really nice ..... say ur frnd that i was saying that she had wrote an excellent poem and em sorry for that ..... nd Rafia ..... i read ur all comments which were really impressible ..... u r such a kind hearted girl ...... u make frnds in seconds ....... ur each nd everything is sooooo nice ........... nd u know i am also fond of cricket and after ur comments i love it even more .... my fav player is muhammad hafeez too ..... i am exteremely sorry for the past but my future is really nice INSHALLAH .... i will not open this id afterwards but i know whatever will be ur reply, it will be beautiful ..... SORRY!!! and remember me in ur prayers too .... well someday i will join vshine with my own id :) so remember my name and me :) ALLAH HAFIZ!!! Ifrah (manooo)
Sep 17th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) My Comment was to u Rafiiii !!!!!! Ifrah (manooo)
Sep 17th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) ATLAST U TOLD IT!!!!! HOW DID U GOT IT?????? Ifrah (manooo)
Sep 17th 2013
Rafia :))))))) Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Nimra :))) Nimra
Sep 11th 2013
Rafia No problem Nimra .... :) Rafia
Sep 10th 2013
Nimra Oh acha acha.. well rafia thankx alot for telling me about ifrah's id..!!! Nimra
Sep 8th 2013
Rafia Thatz shooooo shweeeeeeeet of u Nimra ....... :):):):) well i wanna inform that ifrah shakil is my one of the best frnds :) nd i study with her in my class too ..... so she said that she is not using her e-mail or vshine .... nd her id is hacked :( the person who is talking with u all is not ifrah shakil ..... but someone else!!!! Rafia
Sep 1st 2013
Nimra Yeah u welcum rafia.. and no need of ur thankxx dear.. :) ohh and hws ur sister rabia is she ok now? btw wht was happened 2 her that she was in operation therater?? soo saddd.. :// btw ifrah whtz going on dear hws ur studies going?? Nimra
Aug 30th 2013
Rafia Really Nimra .......... well that's gooooooody gooooood :):):):):):) nd thnx for saying me not ur frnd but best frnd :D thkuuuu!!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 26th 2013
Nimra Ok dear.. :) but u will also tell than whos ur bst friend..? MY BST FRIEND IS:Isbah Khan..!! (u can see her in my friendx) now u tell me ifrah that whos ur bst friend? i think rafia ahmed? em i rite? :) Nimra
Aug 24th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Ok Nimra ...... so on v shine whose ur bestest frnd?????? be true!!!!! :) and choose only one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):) Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 24th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Thnx Soha ....... Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 24th 2013
Nimra Hehehe of couse dear ifrah.. :)) and actually em not her friend but best friend.. :) :P :D Nimra
Aug 23rd 2013
Soha Gud one! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) OFCOURSE ...... u r the frnd of my bestest frnd :):):):):):):) so em waiting to b ur's too!!!!!!!!!!! :D Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 20th 2013
Nimra Hey ifrah i have red ur about me in that u have written that u love 2 make friends.. soo plz send me a request.. :P :D :) Nimra
Aug 19th 2013
Rafia Welcome dear............!!!!!!!!!!!!:) Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Thnkuuuuuuuu:) Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 4th 2013
Bushra It is ok Manal if it not the real poem but the real one in sara's coment is just amazing u r a true poet Bushra
Jul 26th 2013
Rafia Good 1:) Rafia
Jul 18th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Yes Sara I know b/c that's not the real poem the real one is this: A city where impossible becomes possible, where a telephone bill makes a person ill, where a person cannot sleep without a pill, here u will find lots of noise, here u will really enjoy, signboards & banners everywhere, lots of traffic here and there, this is Karachi my dear, donot fear come here every year.....:( Ifrah (manooo)
Jun 25th 2013
sara It is not really rhyming Sara
Jun 24th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Manal I didn't send the poem that way.. I don't know what happened but that's not the real one.. I ma sending it again check that out:( Ifrah (manooo)
Jun 22nd 2013
manal True! Manal
Jun 22nd 2013

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