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Hurria Nasir
Hurria Nasir
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Fear Has A Large Shadow But…
Published On Jun 17th 2013
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June 2013
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Mrs. Jacob was alone in her house because Mr. Jacob went to Malaysia for some work. It was a dark night, suddenly it began to rain and Mrs. Jacob became scared. Every small noise made her scared. She was sitting on her bed and was watching television suddenly the door opened and no one came inside. Mrs. Jacob went to close the door when there was a bang on the window. She went near to see who was there but was too scared to go. She noticed that a shadow looking like a human’s shadow was moving like it was dancing. She went back to her bed and wrapped her blanket around her. Again she heard a knock on the window and a scary noise of booming thunder which was shaking the whole house. She again saw the shadow moving and suddenly there was a power off. Mrs. Jacob slowly went to the kitchen to fetch a candle. Now when she got back to her room she saw a hand print on the window glass. She moved the candle near it to take a closer look; she saw a black cat. It was making a strange noise like it was yowling. When the light came back Mrs. Jacob saw that the shadow had disappeared. “Thank God that thing went away “she sighed. She began to pray to God when the phone rang. She immediately answered the call. The call was from her neighbor Mrs. Fred’s house but the person who was talking was Mr. Jacob. He told that his flight to Malaysia was delayed so he came back home. he knocked the door but due to high volume of television she could not hear it, his mobile was switched off because of low battery and whenever he knocked on the window Mrs. Jacob became terrified of the noise and did not opened the door. So he had to go to Mrs. Fred’s house in heavy rain to use her telephone.
When she listened to what Mr. Jacob said, she laughed and apologized that he had to stand in rain.

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Comments 52
Amna Nice story and funny :) Amna
Sep 22nd 2013
 
 
Anam SooooooooooOooooooooooooooo Intersting!And by the way I really do agree with Souson!!!!! Anam
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
 hurria LOve you too Hiba n Eid mubarack to all dear friends Hurria
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
Hiba Eid Mubarak dears :) Hiba
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba Love u sho much hurria <3 Hiba
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
 hurria You all are very sweet Ajwa,Areeba and Hiba <3 Hurria
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Awwwsuuuummm!!!!!<3 it!!!!congratzxzxzxz!!!!! Ajwa
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's nice hurria, I cant help it but I cant stop praising your writing skills, u r very good at writing mashallah Hiba
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Areeba You are welcome dear :) It is always nice to appreciate others. Keep it up :) Areeba
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx you hiba,malaika,areeba and marwa.you all are awsome i got pencils,pens,mathbox,highlighters and these kind of things in the gift .it was nice.there was a letter too. Hurria
Aug 2nd 2013
 
 
Marwa Nice cutie. Congratz cutieeeeeeeee <3 Marwa
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
Hiba No problem love, what prize did u get? Hiba
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
Areeba Congratz Hurria ! UR story is fabulous. keep it up :) Areeba
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
malaika Congratulation Malaika
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
 hurria Finally recived my fabulous gift.it was awsome..thanx vshine. i liked it. Hurria
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx my friend Hiba.i like your picture.:) thanx alina dear :D Hurria
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
Ajwa Congrats!!! Ajwa
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
alina Conratulation......:D Alina
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Nyc one, congrats dear Hiba
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
Hiba Nyc one, congrats dear Hiba
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
 hurria Thank you my dear friends Hurria
Jul 25th 2013
 
 
Takreem Congratz nice story Takreem
Jul 25th 2013
 
 
Noor-ul-ain Nice story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Noor-ul-ain
Jul 22nd 2013
 
 
Ghumaisa Congratzz.........girl Ghumaisa
Jul 15th 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx everyone.you people are awsome! :) Hurria
Jul 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Great story and congrats:) Afifah
Jul 7th 2013
 
 
eesha Ur welcome Hurria :D Eesha
Jul 7th 2013
 
 
Hafsa Great story Hafsa
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Congratulationzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!! Syeda Maryam
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Owsum story.......u deserved winning ..plzzz lyk my stuff tooo Hiba
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Cngratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :) Bushra Hafeez
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
wardah I love this story congratsss huria i want to see more stories Wardah
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
wardah I love you story and you are the winner Wardah
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx my friend Eesha.iam so happy that iam again a winner . this is the third time i am the winner of my page and i am really thankful to God Hurria
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
talha Gr8 story Hurria.........congratulations to be the winner...... :) Talha
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
eesha Congratsssssssssss Hurria!!! :) it was a great story Eesha
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Gr8 Rafia
Jun 26th 2013
 
 
eesha Hey hurria plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz accept my friend request :) Eesha
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx every one. you all are very sweet :) Hurria
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
eesha Cooooool story.keep it uppppppppppppp!!!!!!!! Eesha
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
nazish Hey nyc one.and scary and funny as well.luv it. Nazish
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A..!! U r new 4 me 4r0m every aspect hurriya cox i saw u 4 da 1st time..........;-)..Jzakillah. Izza
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Sidra Nice story and funny!!!! Sidra
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Minahil Excelllllllllllllllllllllllllent dudeeeeeeeeeee:):):):):):):):):):):) Minahil
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx maha,iman and syeda Hurria
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
iman Gr8 cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool Iman
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Maha LOL Gr8! Maha
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
 hurria Thanx souson.so nice of you Hurria
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
 hurria AOA!! Izza thank u for lovely comments i am not new on vshine, i have been writing various stories from my another account.Inshallah i will write more stories after my exams... thanx.. Hurria
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam An Excellent try!! Syeda Maryam
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
Souson scary and funny at the same time!Great Souson
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A...!!! Hope everyone's fine...!!! Hurriya..., welc0me to VSHINE dude....!! I appreciate ur writing skills...I want to see more stories of u....please....huh?? will u? Jazakillah.. Izza
Jun 17th 2013
 
 

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