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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Mystery Of The Coldblooded Killer (part 3)
Published On Jun 17th 2013
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Everyone gathered around Morris. They looked at the weapon. It was a pocket knife smeared in blood.
Stephen said, "Well, it's the murder weapon but we must have solid evidence that this was used to kill David Erasmus."
"Yes we must test the DNA of this blood for further clue." remarked Morris. Then they travelled to the police laboratory and gave the blood sample to their doctors .After few hours, the doctors came and one of the doctors, Cody Thompson said,
"These DNA tests proved that this knife was used to kill Mr. Erasmus. The blood test showed the victim's blood to be O+ but it was not completely O+....the test also showed blood of group AB-, needless to say, that your murderer is an AB- person."
"So this means that we have to find a person with AB- blood group." said Stephen.
"But how are we going to do that? There can be lots of people in this city with AB- blood group." asked John Holmes.
"My friend, I know one thing which can bring us closer to cracking the case." said Stephen, "Excuse me doctor, but did you find any logo of a company engraved on this knife?"
"Oh yes! We found out that this knife was made by a company known as 'Johnson's and Co.' Perhaps you can find help from there." said Dr. Dean Macdonald.
"That's great doctor! We needed just about this much evidence!" thanked Stephen.
Then Stephen and his friends went to the company’s shop. There they met with an old man who sold the company's products.
"Hi we need to know that who bought this pocket knife." said Stephen, showing the cleaned pocket knife.
"Yes I sold this knife but I sold three knives like this." said the man.
"Can you tell us there names please?" asked Stephen.
"Sure just let me bring the notebook in which I wrote their names." When the man bought the notebook he said, "These are the names: Sean Anderson, Daniel Ambrose and Jennifer Ferdinand."
"Great. Thanks!" said Stephen. When Stephen and his friends were on their way to some restaurant, Holmes asked, "Chris what will you do with such information?"
"My friend you shall know about it soon, but first we must dine in at some restaurant, I'm starving!" replied Stephen.
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Comments 7
Soha NICE! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Ghumaisa GR8........ Ghumaisa
Jul 15th 2013
Rafia Awesome u get those fab ideas???:-) Rafia
Jun 28th 2013
nazish Vry interesting story abdur are a vry talented writer.just keep it up. Nazish
Jun 21st 2013
Abdur Rafay Arham "coldblooded killer" means "heartless/ruthless killer" and u shall know about its meaning in the last part :-) btw thanks 4 ur encouragement!! Abdur Rafay
Jun 18th 2013
Muhammad Arham GREAT ABDUR RAFAY! it is an intresting story but uptill reading 3 parts I still cannot over come my doubt that how it's title " THE MYSTERY OF THE COLDBLOODED KILLER " is related to the story. But still hatsoff to you for your effort. KEEP IT UP. Muhammad Arham
Jun 18th 2013
Ahmed Hey guys, I contacted v shine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two to three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that please don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Ahmed
Jun 17th 2013

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