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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Mystery Of The Coldblooded Killer (part 1)
Published On Jun 16th 2013
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Christopher Stephen, the renowned detective was sitting quietly reading a book in his cozy armchair when he received a phone call. It was from his friend, John Holmes, who asked him to come to the police station. Stephen quickly arrived at the police station and met some of his friends there.
"What's the matter, gentlemen?" Asked Stephen
"There has been a murder of a person who is called David Erasmus. He was killed at night in Wonderland Park. We recovered his body from a bush. A person called Peter Balkov who is an artist, reported that he saw the victim arguing with a person of about his own height. Peter told us that he turned around and went to his family but when he looked at those two people they had just an instant." said Holmes.
Stephen asked," Can you call Peter here?"
Peter Balkov was presented in front of Stephen. He was a tall fellow, who had blonde hair. He then narrated his story, "Sir, I went near the place where those two people were arguing. I saw that a man had been murdered in the bushes. His throat had been cut by the other person. Sir, I don't know who the person is but I reported it to the police so that they can take care of the matter."
"Thank you Mr. Balkov. By the way I believe you are left handed?" asked Stephen.
"How on Earth did you know that?" asked Peter.
"The wristwatch you are wearing on your right hand side. Since you're an artist you tend to wear your watch on your right wrist as it will get in your way while drawing, if you wear it on your left wrist." explained Stephen. Peter was amused and then he was allowed to leave. Stephen then asked the police to let him see the victim's dead body.
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Comments 7
Soha Amazing! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Ajwa Mysterious...!!!! Ajwa
Aug 17th 2013
Rafia WOAH!!!!!amazing.......!!!!:) Rafia
Jun 28th 2013
Ebad Good hai bhai kahan se lae ho aesi story....awesome,waiting for next one...... Ebad
Jun 23rd 2013
nazish What a mysterious story.hilarous.luv it.:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-) Nazish
Jun 21st 2013
Ahmed Hey guys, I contacted vshine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two ot three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that please don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Ahmed
Jun 17th 2013
Khadijah I really can't wait for the next part............... Khadijah
Jun 16th 2013

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