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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
The Trip In The Book
Published On Jun 22nd 2013
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Once upon a time, there was a group of four children. One day the group went to a picnic. They finished all their lunch and started to read a book. The name of the book was Red Riding Hood. Suddenly a magician appeared and commanded the children to give the book. All the children showed respect in front of the magician because he was elder than all the children. The magician took the book and used a spell to make the book magical. Then he gave the book to the group and disappeared. The children started to read the book again. Suddenly a storm came and the group went inside the book. They enjoyed a lot in the book. After some hours, they were tired so they wanted to go home. The magician appeared and told that the children have to complete the story by a role play. A girl with red cheeks came and wore a red coat pretending to be red riding hood. A boy with long nose came out and wore a wolf suit pretending to be a wolf. Everyone took their roles and completed the story. Suddenly a storm came and all the children came out of the book. They went to their homes and told their parents about the trip to the book.
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Comments 15
afifah Good Afifah
Jul 13th 2013
 
 
Laibah Awesome Laibah
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Jasrah Finally saad story write ker li i will also write after some days and by the way cool pic on gmail and on vshine and facebook Jasrah
Jun 28th 2013
 
 
Maha Its Too Short! isnt it? Maha
Jun 28th 2013
 
 
manal How do u come up with such great ideas for stories saad?? Manal
Jun 26th 2013
 
 
Saad I have send request to join the group,Please accept it. Saad
Jun 26th 2013
 
 
Shehryar Attention All boys here on v shine. You can join an open group on facebook for writers and readers. Its name is “V SHINE Readers and Writers.” Girls can only message if they have any problem about their stories etc but they can’t join the group for now. I’m putting this comment on behalf of admin of V SHINE . You search the group on facebook by “V SHINE Readers and Writers.” Shehryar
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
sara It was just imagination write a true story pleaseee :( Sara
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
Ahmed Too short Ahmed
Jun 23rd 2013
 
 
rizwan Good hai yar........!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Nyc Maarij Maqsood
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
nazish Owsm saad. Nazish
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Shehryar The story is so brief and you haven't defined start,body and conclusion very well Shehryar
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
rabia Nice! Rabia
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Fatima Good Fatima
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 

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