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Sameer Piyarali
Sameer Piyarali
Beaconhouse School System
A Treasure Box
Published On Mar 2nd 2011
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Once upon a time there was a child named Raza was very poor and lived in a small village where there were only farms.
One day there was a hole in the ground. When he saw the hole in the ground, the hole was vey deep and suddenly somebody pushed him from back and he fell in the hole.
As he was falling, somebody come with the magic broom and saved him. Raza was very scared with the man but he was a nice. One day when he was finding his way to exit from the hole, a man came with the face of good man and said “Follow me. I will tell you the way of exit". Raza followed him and they reached near a room. The man said "Go inside the room". As Raza went inside the room, the man locked him inside the room. There were many strange creatures in the room which wanted to kill Raza but Raza found a strange stick. The stick was flexible. When he bends the stick, all the creatures disappeared and a treasure box appeared in front of him. He was very happy to see the treasure box but he didn’t found the way of exit from hole.
Suddenly the good man appears and opens the door to free him. He became the richest child in the village and he distributed some of his money to poor people.
After all he lived happily.
 
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Comments 4
KHAN A bit grammer mistakes but still i like it Khan
Feb 14th 2014
 
 
Zahra Why did the man open the door Zahra
Mar 8th 2011
 
 
Ahmed I like it I like it Ahmed
Mar 7th 2011
 
 
Mishal This is the one i like Mishal
Mar 3rd 2011
 
 

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