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Shehryar Larik
Shehryar Larik
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The Saviour
Published On Jun 3rd 2013
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Once in a village lived a, boy named Ehsan who was alone and poor. Ehsan was an orphan but was a very strong and wise boy. His best quality was that he never got afraid of any trouble. He was an orphan as his parents died at the age of 12. He used to make toys of clay or wood and sold them to the market to earn some living. This way his life was moving smoothly. The thing that always made him sad was that he had to adjourn his studies after the death of his parents. The people of his village were to mean to hold his responsibilities. Instead of helping him he was an object of mockery for them. The mischievous lads of his village teased him on his poverty and being orphan. He ignored them as he was courageous. One day he was out of the town to sell his materials. When he arrived back he saw that an Earthquake struck his village and everything destroyed. He saw that people were giving painful cries of help. His eyes felt up of tears and heart full of sympathy. As a boy of 14 he was not able to help them all but an idea struck his mind and he rushed to the city. He had to come here twice and he was fatigued and in very hungry state. He went to the rescue workers office. He pictured out the complete scenario to them. They thought it was lie and ridiculed him. He persuaded them a lot but up to no avail. He prayed Allah to help his people and he went to the police. Even though he was ignored at once but a humble inspector decided to have a look. When they arrived there they saw that Ehsan's story was true. The village was in complete chaos. Instantly the inspector called out the rescue teams who saved the lives of many people. Ehsan too helped them a lot. This way many lives were saved. The inspector praised Ehsan for his courage and kindness. Inspector enquired Ehsan about his parents so he answered that he was an orphan. Inspector then asked him whether he studied or not he told him his entire story. The inspector cursed the villagers for not aiding such a brilliant boy and he saluted Ehsan's character. All the people of villagers gathered round Ehsan and said that it was Allah's destruction sent on us for leaving alone an orphan. They all thanked Ehsan for saving their lives, they all apologised him and each of them decided to take his responsibility and mange his studies expenses once the village is settled again. Therefore after a couple of years when the village resurrected, everyone lived happily and Ehsan revived his studies .Now he wasn't a sign of mockery but a pillar of courage and kindness.
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Comments 52
Rafia Ajwa dear ........... they really don't fight ............ that's just TAFREEH :):):) Rafia
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
Ajwa All ppl on V SHINE !!!!!!!!why do u guyz appreciate fights soo much.....?????don't....kay????.....we shud try to stop fights not make em toO .....ya know....fighty.....that's why the num ov fights are increasing in the comments section......plzzz.....try to listen to me...!!! ds anyone agree...???!?!?!? Ajwa
Aug 17th 2013
 
 
Rafia .................... well I open the page to read the story/joke/poem/article or to see the drawing.................. but I get more attracted to the comments fighting!!!!!!!!!:p AWESOME FIGHT!!!!!!!!! it really needs some appreciation :) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Congraaaaaaaaaaaatzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
Hafsa Ooooooo my GOD.Amazing fight.Shahryar very very congrats to win your story in my page. Hafsa
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
eesha Congratz Eesha
Jun 23rd 2013
 
 
Ebad Jannat ki waja se kon dozag me kon jata hai..... Ebad
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Gullasht Irfan i don't talk w8 you soO, don't talked w8 me wese tum jannat to nahi apni waja se sub ko dozaz mein le jaho ge Gullasht
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Ebad Obaid yar aap yahan kia kar rahe hain????? Ebad
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
irfan Don't think all like yourself ...."parhna nahi ata" Irfan
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
mubashra Nice and congratttttttttttttttttzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz on successing ur first step.Wanna be my friend? Mubashra
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Syed Its good one... Syed
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Ebad tumy parhna ata hai wah bhai wah mein too samje the tumy English nahi ate Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
rozhna Sab jealous kyoun ho raha ho acha sheherya kis thing mein win kiya hai story to fit hai :) Rozhna
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
ijlal Congratzzz Ijlal
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
Ahmed Hey guys, I contacted vshine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two ot three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that plaease don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Ahmed
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
bibi 50% good & 50% boring Bibi
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Aliza Congratulations >.< Aliza
Jun 15th 2013
 
 
nazish Very nice story shehryar.you write owsm.just luv it.and very very very congratsss on winning. Nazish
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
Laibah Its just Amazing !!!!!!! Laibah
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
laiba Awesome Laiba
Jun 10th 2013
 
 
Samreen Good job I think irfan and ibad you can also publish your story and we can find that can you both write better than him.... Samreen
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Awesome story. I love it. Khadijah
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
rizwan Why you all are only focusing irfan???????????? Rizwan
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
rizwan Awesome fight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
Ahmed Wow i saw girls normally fighting at v shine but now boys??????????? irfan dont be rude Ahmed
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
rabia Boyz are crazy to insult everyone they never think that other will be hurted nice story keep it up Rabia
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
rabia Boyz are crazy to insult everyone they never think that other will be hurted Rabia
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
shiraz Irfan how can you say winning is nothing Shiraz
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
irfan Who are you shiraz to say as....? Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
Shehryar Thanks everyone :) Shehryar
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
shiraz Ibad dont be jelous and irfan also Shiraz
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Owsum story and congratzz for winning Maarij Maqsood
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
rizwan Irfan and Ibad you both should not be jealous!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
neha WOW AMAZING LOTS OF CONGRATES ON WINNING Neha
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
irfan Oh !we were just kidding it is a best story...Don't mind..han??!! Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
Sidra Marvelous story and congratz on winning! Sidra
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
Shehryar Irfan and Ibad it is my first story which i wrote on 2nd june,same day as i created my id next day i saw i was the winner if i would have known it would publish so early i would have wrote a much better story with more enthusiasm.Thanks for your criticise ,but instead for just donig this write yourself as well. Shehryar
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
shiraz Intresting story Shiraz
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
Minahil Congratulations it was gooooooooooooooooody goooooooooood Minahil
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
irfan WINING IS NOTHING....WRITE BETTER ...OK??????????!!!! Irfan
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
Ebad Itni bekar kahani me ne aj tk nahi parhi.....herat hy win kesey hogay..?? Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
Ebad Good story.....but very long Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
tooba Nice story shehryar. and congrats upon your win Tooba
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
afifah Very good story Afifah
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
talha Good story and congrats to be winner Talha
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
Usman Awesome story. Usman
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
shiraz I like it awesome Shiraz
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
shiraz I like it so much Shiraz
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
areesha Amazing Areesha
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
hurriya Congratz!!! nice story. Hurriya
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
Sana Gud story and congratzz on winning! :) Sana
Jun 4th 2013
 
 

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