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Tooba Idris Dar
Tooba Idris Dar
Beacon House School System
Chocolate Day
Published On Jun 3rd 2013
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Life is like a chocolate box
Each chocolate is like a portion of life
Some are crunchy, some are nutty
Some are soft, but all are delicious.
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Comments 21
Samia I am a chocolate lover!:)nice poem Samia
Nov 25th 2013
 
 
Bismah Please accept my request Bismah
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia TooBa tHaT's nIcE!!!!!!!!!!! Rafia
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Emel Its not abad poem.Its AMAZING!!!! Emel
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
eesha Nyc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.i am chocolate lover.life is like a chocolate but from my point of view life is not always delicious.At some bites it also get's bitter like a real chocolate. Eesha
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Ahmed Hey guys, I contacted vshine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two to three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that please don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Ahmed
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas Good poem but too short. Hamza Waqas
Jun 15th 2013
 
 
Simra Hi... nice poem but no rhyme....... nice effort... Simra
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
tooba Saad if you have this poem in the i like corner of your page then why do you hate it up here. Tooba
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
fatima Nyc poem i am also from beaconhouse Fatima
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA soO, TURE Gullasht
Jun 10th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Not rhymin'.... Ajwa
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
safdar Good poem. Safdar
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Sidra Nice!!!!!!! Sidra
Jun 7th 2013
 
 
Washma5 Good.you can try even more better Washma5
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
areeqa Nice but its like a quote !! Areeqa
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
selina I am a chocaholic Selina
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
selina Yummy Selina
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
talha Good Talha
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
saad Bad poem . i hate this poem Saad
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
nazish Nyc poem. Nazish
Jun 4th 2013
 
 

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