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Talha  Rabbani
Talha Rabbani
Fauji Foundation Model School Sheikhupura
Sunny Days And The Rain
Published On May 27th 2013
Total Comments : 57
Total Views :  1401
18 People Like this!

May 2013

Rank 9 Out of 10
I am facing sunny days
Sun is shining with its warm rays
i am walking on a lane
facing upwards praying for rain
and my prayer is heard by God
Making the playground a bog
Rainy period was pleasant but short
The sun prisons rain in a fort
Because of rain, we should be happy
Because rain is a symbol that God is Great.
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Comments 57
yashfeen Congrats!!! and by the way nice poem. Yashfeen
Apr 3rd 2017
Hadia Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Hadia
Apr 17th 2014
Affan CONGRATULtions Affan
Sep 28th 2013
Irum Awesome! Irum
Sep 11th 2013
Rafia Yup! well it seems u were very eager for the gift :p Rafia
Sep 1st 2013
talha U can see it on vshine magazine Talha
Aug 30th 2013
Bismah Talha can i ask you what was the number of vshine office? Bismah
Aug 22nd 2013
Bismah Ohhh good! congratzzzzzzzzzzz Bismah
Aug 13th 2013
Rafia Oh right!!!!! CONGRATZZZZZZ :) Rafia
Aug 13th 2013
talha Oh sorry.....stationery not stationary Talha
Aug 13th 2013
talha Stationary......... Talha
Aug 13th 2013
Bismah Talha i wanna ask that what was in the gift? Bismah
Aug 11th 2013
Mahnoor A bundle of congo for winning my bro :):) and a nice poem.......!! Mahnoor
Aug 11th 2013
Rafia Oh!!!!! right........ so what was in the gift???????????? Rafia
Aug 11th 2013
talha The phone no. i had given was switched off so they did not contact me.......and then i call vshine office and ask them for gift ...then they told me the reason and then i received the gift after few days... Talha
Aug 11th 2013
Rafia If u don't mind so i wanna ask......what was the reason???????? :) Rafia
Aug 10th 2013
Bismah What reason and what was in the gift ? Bismah
Aug 10th 2013
talha Yes....but late bcz of a reason.... Talha
Aug 10th 2013
Bismah I want to know that when you became the winner did you really got a gift? Bismah
Aug 8th 2013
Azka Congratulations.... Azka
Aug 5th 2013
Rafia Congratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
Bismah Congratulation to be the winner i don't know who are you but i am commenting because i really like your poem. Bismah
Aug 3rd 2013
Bushra Hafeez :D Bushra Hafeez
Jul 8th 2013
Gullasht AOA wahOoo bushra you noted it gooD:) Gullasht
Jul 6th 2013
Emel OH!nice Emel
Jul 4th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Hey gullasht !!!!! ye poem jun 3rd ko nae may me publish hui theee..... :Dhhahahah Bushra Hafeez
Jul 3rd 2013
Gullasht Yes I have riZwan Gullasht
Jul 3rd 2013
Hafsa Why are you guys fighting? cool down please!!!!!!! nice poem Talha.My brother name is also Talha.Keep it up. Hafsa
Jul 1st 2013
rizwan Dr you have decent personality.........HaHaHaHa!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 26th 2013
Abdullah Sorry nice poem talha Abdullah
Jun 26th 2013
 Sadia Congratz Talha !!! hahahaha keep it up DR.Gullasht Sadia
Jun 25th 2013
Aliza Congrats :) Aliza
Jun 24th 2013
eesha Congratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! :D Eesha
Jun 24th 2013
Gullasht AOA riZwan i m Dr. soO, i think i don't talk w8 you becuz i m a decent personality Gullasht
Jun 24th 2013
Abdullah Nice story Abdullah
Jun 24th 2013
fatimah Rly lovely poem, congo!!!!! Fatimah
Jun 23rd 2013
rizwan Kia hua chup kiun ho gai..... Gullasht???????????? Rizwan
Jun 22nd 2013
rizwan Tum kiun jall rahi ho???????????Dr Rizwan
Jun 20th 2013
Gullasht Talha gee app ko too Vshine ne may mein winner bhana diya jab k tumary poem june 3rd ko publish hohe the Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
rizwan Ok Talha sahab....!!!!!! :D Rizwan
Jun 18th 2013
talha Tou mr.rizwan ap likh ke dikhaen phir ek achi si poem........:) Talha
Jun 17th 2013
rizwan Very bad drawing.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D Rizwan
Jun 16th 2013
Hamza Waqas Good poem and congratulations Hamza Waqas
Jun 16th 2013
Abdur.rahman Haahhhhhahaaaaaaa Abdur.rahman
Jun 15th 2013
talha No it is a drawing. Talha
Jun 10th 2013
rizwan Is it a poem.......??????????????? Rizwan
Jun 8th 2013
areeqa CONGRATS AND Its nice! Areeqa
Jun 7th 2013
Salwa Cute poem..congratss Salwa
Jun 7th 2013
mohsin Nice Mohsin
Jun 7th 2013
Mohammad Nice poem and congratulations to be the winner Mohammad
Jun 6th 2013
Usman Very nice poem and congratulations Usman
Jun 5th 2013
afifah Nice poem Afifah
Jun 5th 2013
saad Congrats Saad
Jun 5th 2013
talha Thanks to all Talha
Jun 4th 2013
hurriya Congratz !and a very nice poem Hurriya
Jun 4th 2013
rabia Congrats and wonderful Rabia
Jun 4th 2013
rabia Wow nice poem and congrats to be the winner Rabia
Jun 3rd 2013

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