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Khoula Shahzad
Khoula Shahzad
Usman Public School
A Holy Visit
Published On May 30th 2013
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"Children listen! We are going to Baitullah to perform our ummrah as I had owed you all to give you super surprise for the awesome performance."Dadajaan exclaimed in living hall when everyone finished dinner. All children listened to this announcement in great amusement and astonishment with great delight as they were painfully waiting for their surprise gift on their outstanding performance.
It was a nice, warm and sunny day of February in Riyadh, children were giving final touch to their preparation for visit, when Dadajaan entered in room and told them that they all had to go to bought Ihrams, the dress in which they had to perform ummrah.
After prepared fully they went to bus stop at the due date and settled on their seats cosily, mentioned in their tickets which headed towards Makah. As it was their first visit to Makah that's why all of them was extremely excited as their loftiest dream and divine desire was about to complete. They were also asking a lot of questions curiously from prim natured Dadajaan from whom they got satisfactory answers. The whole way they passed their time pondering and admiring to reach there with lightning speed. Dadajaan told them all that it was their precious and worthiest occasion as it was also a form of worship.
The bus stopped at a place and all children get down hastily thinking that they reached to Makah. Having no idea, all children were in dilemma, Saleem being elder among them asked respectfully "Dadajaan we were looking forward for our destiny but this place does not seem so, what place is it?" Dadajaan replied humbly "Children this city is not Makah, the place we are standing is Meqat in Taif , here we have to put on our ihrams and offer two rikats in mosque." They all nodded and acted on Dadajaan's instruction and once again settled on their seats.
After 4 hours Naeem saw a golden crescent he got astonished and poked Kareem and said, "Kareem wake up hurry, see a golden crescent in the sky!!""Oh! It's not in the sky Naeem it's the golden crescent placed on the top of Makah tower ". Faheem connected Naeem merrily with a bridal flush. The bus stopped in front of hotel and they rested there for a short time.                                                                                                                     Dadajaan woke up as he heard adhan called by the muezzin of holy mosque Kaba'a, of Fajr. Children made their way towards mosque in awed manner behind Dadajaan to offer salat-ul-Fajr. After salat-ul- Fajr they started performing their ummrah with great enthusiasm though they felt it difficult as folk of different countries were there and the construction was also continued in Mataf and there was congested place to manoeuvre. Tears dripped from Dadajaan's eyes when he was making obligation during tawaf. After completion of tawaf they offer two rikats on MUQAM-E-IBRAHIM as it was Sunnah of Allah's apostle (S.A.W.W). Then they went towards MASAA to offer SAII in remembrance of Hajra (A.S).
 After completion of SAII Nadeem asked Dadajaan," Dadajaan what will we do now?" he smiled and explained," Children, all thanks to Almighty Allah who gave us chance to visit his house to perform Ummrah. Our ummrah will be completed when we cut our hair and this is called HALAQ". They all performed their ummrah very carefully and properly and put off their ihrams.
They also went Medina to visit MASJID-E-NABVI and from there they bought special dates and water 'AJWA' and 'ZAMZAM' as gift for family and friends. They made their way back to Riyadh city after visiting these two holy cities.
"Dadajaan it was very spell bounding and amazing trip, it mesmerized me" exclaimed Kaleem. "And I love to go Makah once again" said Azeem happily. "Yes my dear grandsons (Saleem, Nadeem, Naeem, Kareem, Faheem and Azeem) if life continued I promise you all to took Makah once again in your vacation INSHA ALLAH". Children gave a mighty cry of "JADI AZEEMUN".
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Comments 87
Irza V nice Irza
Aug 27th 2016
Amn Why r u all fighting???? Your article was awesome irfan keep shining khola and irfan you too Amn
Sep 27th 2014
 Shiza in which class do you study? Shiza
Jun 15th 2014
 Shiza Nice and you know what I also study in UPS campus 3. Shiza
Feb 9th 2014
Arwa Plz bta do ap meri family ko k say jantay ho?? irfan bhai :) Arwa
Sep 24th 2013
irfan You have given the answer..........."i am insaan"!!!!!!!!! Irfan
Sep 22nd 2013
Arwa Me ne irfan bhai say question pocha ha jis ka answer mujhey abi tk ni mila is liay hen ye question mark Ayeeeeesssshhhhaaa :P :) Arwa
Sep 18th 2013
Irum Why so many question marks, Saeeda Fatmaah??? Irum
Sep 17th 2013
Arwa ????? Arwa
Sep 15th 2013
Irum I'm with you guys too, about Mursi. And you guys are soooo right!! Irum
Sep 8th 2013
Arwa I know ebad:P :) Arwa
Aug 30th 2013
Izza A0A...!! Hey,all f U....MORSI is 0ur leader t0o....We altogether salute (akhwan-ul-muslim0on & MORSI)>.....they are fightin' 4 the sake f islam & at-least we xhould pray 4 His succces & also pray dat may ALLAH blexx ux wid s0me kind f MORSI t0o.....who shall figh8 to implement (Sharia'ah..& Quran)........(AMMEN SUM AMEEN)>..............Akhwan-0l-Muxlim0on..& MORSI..!!! we are wid U ppl..we apppreciate U...may ALLAH reward u 4 ur all struggle 4 the sake if ALMIGHTY..nd May ALLAH give us the spirit to do same 4 our c0untry (AMEEN SUM AMEEN)... Izza
Aug 25th 2013
Ebad IRFAN is INSAAN.....!!!! :) Ebad
Aug 24th 2013
Arwa Yes my Father name is Ali Muhammad and my uncle's name is wali , taqi , naqi but who r u?? Arwa
Aug 24th 2013
irfan You didn't give me the answer..............!! Irfan
Aug 24th 2013
Arwa Who r u??? irfan Arwa
Aug 18th 2013
Arwa Who r u??? irfan Arwa
Aug 17th 2013
Soha Sorry Khoula! Soha
Aug 17th 2013
rabia Sorry khola Rabia
Aug 17th 2013
Rafia Em sorry khoula ................... i will not open this page afterwards ......... OK!!!!!! sorry again Rafia
Aug 16th 2013
Soha Ohhh and one more thing, don't take my comment as I start of fight.. Plz bure comments mt bheja kro.. And i appreciated you! Soha
Aug 16th 2013
Soha Agar mein batao to Khoula har kisi se jalti hai. That's why she got lame comments.. But I am not like that and I truely appreciate Khoula :) Keep it up:) Soha
Aug 16th 2013
Khoula Shut you all alll riuned my story..shut up shut up crazy people... :'( :'( Khoula
Aug 15th 2013
Khoula Irfan tum kaisey janty ho naqi,taqi ali ko..??answer Khoula
Aug 15th 2013
rabia Irfan..... u were writting "being" or "bieng"?????????? Rabia
Aug 13th 2013
Rafia But I think it really is!!!!!!!!!!!!! if u minded my comment so extremely sorry.......... but i was surprised becoz i didn't did any type of that comment by which someone would ask my father's name!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry again!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
irfan Thats not a thing to bieng surprised........!!!!!! Irfan
Aug 12th 2013
Rafia Thnx, k ap ne comment ki wazaahat kr di....... i was surprised that is that to me? :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
irfan This is to syeda Fatima Irfan
Aug 11th 2013
irfan Is your father name "Mhammed ali? Do you know the persons naming wali,naqi,taqi,ali? Irfan
Aug 8th 2013
Rafia I read it!!!!!!! it was very informative...... keep the way going :) Rafia
Aug 7th 2013
Ebad Bhi mera article aa gaya bari shiddat se intizar ho raha tha uncle aap bhi mera article prye ga,faida ho ga...... ;) Ebad
Aug 6th 2013
Rafia Go0d 0ne.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wEll kisi ne Izza k C0mmenT ka replY hi nahi kia??????????:( Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
rizwan Masha'allah!!!!!!! Rizwan
Aug 2nd 2013
Arwa Thnx GOD (ALLAH ka bhut bhut bhut shukar ha) meray bhai ki matric ma board ma 2nd position ai ha:) Arwa
Aug 1st 2013
rizwan Shaksiat Qazi hussain ahmed ki iss mai shak nahi.........................................................Kehti hai khalq e khuda insan bohat pyara tha wo!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jul 31st 2013
Arwa Ya!! Qazi hussain ahmed is very very very great man Arwa
Jul 31st 2013
Allama Inaam I like JI and ikhwaan-ul-muslimoon too,Morsi and Qazi Hussain Ahmed GREAT MAN....!!!! Allama Inaam
Jul 28th 2013
rizwan I like JI and IJT toooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jul 28th 2013
irfan No, I love mursi and every muslim doing the struggle for islam and insallah ekhwan-ul-muslimoon bring revoulution to misr..!!!!!!! Irfan
Jul 28th 2013
Arwa Hmm:) i also like ikhwan-ul-muslimoon and JI too:) Arwa
Jul 27th 2013
Khoula I like mursi too much..!!! and ikhwan-ul-muslimoon too.. :) Khoula
Jul 26th 2013
Allama Inaam Beta ap sab k comments se pata chalta hy k ap log news bhi dekhty hn ye bht achi baat hai. Hamen pata hona chahye k muslim countries me kia ho raha hy or reality bhi pata honi chahye. Irfan beta apko Mursi achy nahi lagty kia? or agar nahi lagty to koi baat nahi hamin un k nazriyat or unki dawat to zaror achi lagni chahye..!! Allama Inaam
Jul 26th 2013
Arwa Hmm :) MURSI is a gr8 man yar Arwa
Jul 25th 2013
rizwan Yup Ebad is true MURSI is a great man........!!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jul 24th 2013
Ebad MURSI is a great man i like him... :) Ebad
Jul 23rd 2013
irfan Mursi ki tasweer laga kar un ko kia faida phoncha rahay ho????? Irfan
Jul 22nd 2013
Allama Inaam Beta ap ki ye kahani bhout achi he masha'allah lekin beta ap apni kosheshen jaari rakhn. Allama Inaam
Jun 27th 2013
Khoula Thankyou all Khoula
Jun 26th 2013
eesha Quite different story and a decent one tooooooo.............. Eesha
Jun 23rd 2013
Izza ???????????????????????????????????? Izza
Jun 20th 2013
Syed WOW...!!!this story is AWESOME!!! Syed
Jun 20th 2013
irfan Mai nai khud apna article uncountable dafa bhaij dia hai..... zero ko count karo gay?? Irfan
Jun 19th 2013
Ebad Aur tum ne ye jaga bhi nahi chori, bari hansi aa rahi hai or jab tum Dr bano gi na to marizon ka allah hi hafiz!!!!!!! Ebad
Jun 19th 2013
rizwan Sab ka hafiz Allah hai Dr.!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 19th 2013
Gullasht Ebad tumara artical dar geya hoga ke ao ya na ao q k tum ne sub k stuff per aese comentz like hai k tumara too Allah he Hafix hai ha ha ha Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
Ebad Me apne article do dafa bhej chuka hun lekin pta nahi abhi tak article wale section me nahi aya.... Ebad
Jun 18th 2013
Izza A0A..!! Welc0me to VSHINE...all 0f u...!! what's the big deal b/w u ppl?? can i j0in & kn0w cox em a member of VSHINE fr0m ab0ut 3 years...& I was busy in my fsc-(medical-part.1) exams...n0w they have finsihed & em free....!! n0w I'm hanging out on VSHINE...y u all c0mmentors look s0 aggressive t0 me...from ur c0mments?? please s0me0ne reply if he/she wants to...!! Jazakillah. Izza
Jun 17th 2013
rizwan Abhi tk to nahi ae in dono k articles.....!!!!!!! kab aen gai???????????? Rizwan
Jun 16th 2013
Amna Aap ke articles kahan gae Ebad and Irfan? Mujhe to nai mile articles wale section me Amna
Jun 15th 2013
Ebad Aae ga inshallah,irfan mai tumhare tarah nahi hun khud to bol dia ke mera article aa raha hai or patani kahan chala gia tumhara article.... huh... Ebad
Jun 14th 2013
rizwan Tumhara article aai na jae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HuH...... Rizwan
Jun 13th 2013
irfan Tumhara article awesome aay ga????huh... Irfan
Jun 13th 2013
Ebad Mery story nahi article aaye ga awesome sa sab parhna mera article OK guyS....... Ebad
Jun 13th 2013
Ebad Irfan tumhara article kahan chla gia....... :) Ebad
Jun 9th 2013
rizwan Ebad ki story kab ae gi????????????????????????????????? Rizwan
Jun 9th 2013
Ebad Khoula ko samjh me nahi aa raha ke ab kon se kahani likhe.......confused ;) Ebad
Jun 8th 2013
Khoula Ji nahi itni achi kahani to hai dekho ebad ne kitni tarif ki hai... :D acha ab tmhara articl a raha he...ab hm bhi us me dil kharash tabsry karn gy... :D :D Khoula
Jun 7th 2013
irfan Maira article a raha hai parhna sab. Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
irfan Ugly story kab aay gi???agli nai ugly Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
rizwan Yeh to novel hai wo bhi boring!!! :D Rizwan
Jun 7th 2013
rizwan Agli story kab ae gi???????????????????? Rizwan
Jun 6th 2013
Ebad Rizwan jalo mt... :D Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
Ebad WOW...what a brilliant story khoula.. keep it up...welldone.. shabash... :) Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
rizwan Good story lekin bohat lambi hai :( Rizwan
Jun 6th 2013
rizwan It is very bad story!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 6th 2013
irfan Waiting for your next one Irfan
Jun 5th 2013
faizan Story achi he lekn achi nhi he Faizan
Jun 4th 2013
Khoula I said... Khoula
Jun 3rd 2013
irfan Who said very good story.???? Irfan
Jun 3rd 2013
Usman Very Good Story. Usman
Jun 3rd 2013
Maarij Maqsood Good one Maarij Maqsood
Jun 3rd 2013
Khoula Han me samajh gai irfan..k bohot achi story he... :P ;) Khoula
Jun 2nd 2013
Arwa Oh!! acha :) Arwa
Jun 2nd 2013
Khoula No....i have given my matric exams Khoula
Jun 1st 2013
Arwa Usman public school Saudia Arab ma be ha ?? Arwa
Jun 1st 2013
irfan Good story yar that was owsum.....!!!!!!!!!! but ye kuch........................................samjho..! Irfan
May 31st 2013

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