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Mushaim Zafar
Mushaim Zafar
Aldersbrook Primary School
A Horror Night
Published On May 31st 2013
Total Comments : 23
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Today I am going to tell you a true scary story. It was Eid 2nd day and the time was 12. I was in my granny home. I was reading a book that. Suddenly I got an evil idea. My mama and cousins were sleeping up stairs and I went upstairs and Tip toed to the Book case and next to the book case was the room where my cousins and mamu were spending night. I knocked the door and ran downstairs. I do this 3 or 4 times and when I was doing this again that door opened and one of my cousin see me and said me that run. I ran to downstairs. And then my all cousins came and start asking me that are you ghost. I said what are you talking about???....Then they went upstairs. When morning came I was eating breakfast that suddenly my 2 cousins came down and looked at me and smiled. I said that what? They said we know you scared us cz we have seen you going down. I said ok I will tell everyone. They said no dun tell anyone. And from that day my other cousins didn’t sleep upstairs.
Was that horror.laughing
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Comments 23
Eraj Good try Mushaim,if you have made a grammatical mistake that's OK ,everybody can make mistakes .So don't mind and try to improve!!:) Eraj
Feb 24th 2014
Minahil Have u made dual accounts,I have read the same story word to word on v shine,you have ruined English and slang is not better than proper English:( Minahil
Oct 3rd 2013
Areeba Good try, my dear! Can u plz accept my friend request! Areeba
Sep 24th 2013
Mushaim Nd maha uh have nawt posted anithing so betta dnt insult anione Mushaim
Sep 15th 2013
Mushaim Rumesa you should mind your own buisness i know wah i am writing but if u dnt knw to encourage anyone dont insult Mushaim
Sep 15th 2013
Mushaim It was my first try to write.....and it is called slang...i am form england and i really dont care what you guys think about me because your attitude can hurt me but mine can even kill you Mushaim
Sep 14th 2013
Ajwa And.....rumaisa...that was ....humiliating...what u wrote about er..!!!!! Ajwa
Aug 23rd 2013
Ajwa All ov u are very rude ppl...don't say anything bout grammatical eng....its not our mother lang..and why did y u guyzz make fun ov mushaim????..shame on all ov u!!!!!!!:p Ajwa
Aug 23rd 2013
Maha English Murdered By Mushaim Zafar! lol :P Maha
Jul 4th 2013
Maha R.I.P ENGLISH! Lol didn't even understand a single word! Maha
Jun 28th 2013
eesha Try again Eesha
Jun 26th 2013
irfan "horror" have nothing horror Irfan
Jun 19th 2013
Ahmed Hey guys, I contacted vshine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two to three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that please don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Ahmed
Jun 17th 2013
isbah Nice try!!! but u cud hv made it better and improved it Isbah
Jun 16th 2013
fatima Not understood a single word!~! Fatima
Jun 15th 2013
nabiha Boring Nabiha
Jun 13th 2013
Gullasht AOA there is nothing horroR Gullasht
Jun 10th 2013
 яυмαιsα "Hi my name is mushaim and I am from england......I came in pak 2 yearz ago....I have participated in spelling bee 2012 and other co curricular activities. I study in aldersbrook primary school ut when Ever i am in pak i live in mirpur and I study in t.g.h" his is wat u rote bout ur delf but i seriously doubt it cause if u r frm england ur grammar should be perrrrrrrfect!!!! яυмαιsα
Jun 4th 2013
Sameen Not interesting Sameen
Jun 4th 2013
Malaika Hey- not to be rude or anything but- I could not understand your grammar, plz be more uhh... 'clear' (I AM NOT BEING RUDE!) Malaika
Jun 2nd 2013
Shehryar Not intersting Shehryar
Jun 2nd 2013
Irum What? Didn't understand a single word.. Use proper English please...... Irum
Jun 1st 2013
Hamza Waqas That was nothing for me!!!!!!!!! Hamza Waqas
May 31st 2013

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