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Usman Rehan
Usman Rehan
Springfield School
Pride Comes Before A Fall
Published On May 31st 2013
Total Comments : 41
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Ali was a little boy of eight who lived with his parents in a small house. As Ali lived near the beach, he was very fond of swimming. When Ali’s parents saw how keen he was on swimming, so in his summer vacations Ali was trained by professional instructor. After one year of practice, Ali soon became a skillful swimmer. In this way he became famous all over the city. In Ali’s house there was a small pool. Ali usually practiced swimming over there. When Ali discovered that he had become good in swimming. So he stopped practicing in the pool and he teased his friends who were not very good in swimming and stopped taking trainings. One day there was a swimming race on the beach. The instructor chooses ten professional swimmers including Ali. Well, Ali thought that he could easily win the race. So he did not practice and was very proud of himself. Well pride comes before a fall. When Ali was going to school, he tripped over a stone very badly. His leg bone was broken. So now he could not take a part in the swimming contest. When he heard this, he cried so much that everybody felt sorry for him. But it was his fault. From that day he was never too proud of himself.  So my dear friends don’t be too proud of yourself and live a happy life.
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Comments 41
Rafia EEsha my dear as a frnd it was my responsibility to b honest!!!!!! :) Rafia
Sep 27th 2013
eesha Awwwww Rafia thnxx for taking my back....anyways i am sorry if my comment hurt u... :((((((((((((((( Eesha
Sep 16th 2013
Rafia Hey!!!! USMAN u don't know eesha is really nyc :) she don't hurt anyone .... so try to understand her comment plz ... Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Usman Well you said that the comments were more better than the story. Usman
Sep 7th 2013
eesha Is it a bad comment???????????????????it wasn't for u Usman it was for the fighters that spoiled ur poem....y did u say this to me n not to those who have ACTUALLY spoiled ur story??????????????......m against those who spoil others stuff n i was taking ur side...........PLZZZZZZZZZZ try to understand the comments 1st Eesha
Sep 5th 2013
Usman Eesha please donot post bad comments on my story because it hurts my feelings. Usman
Sep 5th 2013
Rafia :D HAHAHHA!!!!! Rafia
Sep 4th 2013
eesha @Rafia............not more than comments :P Eesha
Sep 2nd 2013
Rafia Well story was brilliant :) Rafia
Sep 2nd 2013
Usman Thank you very much Izza. Usman
Aug 31st 2013
Izza A0A..! Good! keep writing..May ALLAH bless U (AMEEN SUM AMEEN).. Izza
Aug 25th 2013
Rafia :D Rafia
Aug 25th 2013
eesha Yep u r ryt Rafia..........THNKSSSSSS n no SORRRRRRRYYYYYYYY Eesha
Aug 22nd 2013
Rafia " no sorry in frndship" I think these were said by Eesha Fatima?????????? nd u r urself saying sorry for absoluetly nothing!!!!!!!:( remember no sorry....... thnx to phir bhi chalta hai!!!!!!:D well I was right isn't it???? comments already told that :) Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
eesha Hahahahaha u r ryt my frnd .......sorry for commenting late :( i didn't come to this page for a long time.... Eesha
Aug 4th 2013
Rafia Hey Eesha........... more nyc than the story were the comments................ :) well Izza u r really nyc :) Rafia
Jul 23rd 2013
eesha Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!nyc story..................Good try. Eesha
Jun 21st 2013
Izza A0A....!!! Hey, I laughed al0t....when I read the w0rd (Aunty) used for myself--nice w0rd bro..!!! the way...did u mind what i said u?? ;-(... Izza
Jun 20th 2013
Ebad Usman irfan ka article aae ga nahi to read kaise karo ge.... Ebad
Jun 19th 2013
rizwan Ok ''AUNTY""!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 19th 2013
Izza A0A...!!! st0p fighting guys...!!please b p0lite 2 each oder...!! b go000d....!! st0p it at-0nce..!!! we all are kind muxlimx..!!! b p0lite 2 each oder & c0mment generally always whether u like or dislike the particular st0ry/article/poem/drawing....b +..! Jazakillah...:-) Izza
Jun 17th 2013
Umer Good one usman Umer
Jun 15th 2013
rizwan Badtamez mai nahi tum ho !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Jun 10th 2013
Khoula Rizwan tum bare batameez ho gaye ho mere bhai ko target karte ho.......aake btaoungi....theek hai....sudhar jao Khoula
Jun 9th 2013
irfan You cant understand(high level vocab) my vocab ! Irfan
Jun 8th 2013
Usman Irfan please dont call me sir and I will not read your article Usman
Jun 7th 2013
irfan Dear "sir" my awesome article will be launched very soon. Read it han....and then don't cry. Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
shiraz Good story usman Shiraz
Jun 7th 2013
irfan OK Sir your order will be obeyed very soon...:p I was kidding ,you are really a good writer....!!!!!!:D Irfan
Jun 7th 2013
Usman Irfan and Ebad you yourself first write a story and then see how difficult it is to write. Usman
Jun 7th 2013
rizwan Usman! Ibad and Irfan are jealoused of you. So don't mind. Rizwan
Jun 7th 2013
Ebad Ooooooooooo!usman you are out of list...... Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
Usman Thanks Usman
Jun 6th 2013
irfan Your latest story is low quality Irfan
Jun 6th 2013
Ebad Jo kahani likhta hai wo character ko poor bnadeta hai yaaar Ebad
Jun 6th 2013
Hamza Waqas Good Hamza Waqas
Jun 6th 2013
Usman What are you talking about? Usman
Jun 5th 2013
irfan The winners are changed you are out of the list usman Irfan
Jun 5th 2013
selina True,the reason behind the peacocks ugly feet was its pride Selina
Jun 5th 2013
irfan Parhta kahan hai Irfan
Jun 3rd 2013
Maarij Maqsood Yummy (mean very good) Maarij Maqsood
Jun 2nd 2013

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