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Mahnoor Khalid
Mahnoor Khalid
Beacon House School System
The Red Star
Published On Sep 3rd 2013
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The ambiance is soothing,
The night is cold.
Standing on the side,
I see a star shining bright and bold.
I see the stars shine,
Hundreds of white but just one’s like red wine.
Beautiful and gorgeous,
 As lovely as it can be,
Looking extremely pretty.
It sits alone on one side,
Away from the field of stars that are white.
It stands there and gazes at me all night,
Burning like fire, oh so bright.
It fades away as the sun comes up,
Showing its yellow light,
Finishing all the stars and the black night.
Say good bye to the star like red wine,
And tomorrow night again see it shimmer and shine.
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Comments 9
Irum Wowwwwwwwwww............. great :) Irum
Sep 10th 2013
 
 
Soha Hey Nooria, what do u mean by that?? try to post good comments! Soha
Sep 10th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim SSSSSSSSSSSSo nice ♥♥◘↕ Ibrahim
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
nooria Very bad yuks i will comment your if u will comment me be my friend Nooria
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
Sarah Lovley. :) Sarah
Sep 6th 2013
 
 
eesha Coool !!!!!! Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Soha Great!!!!! Soha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Its gud!!! Ajwa
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Wowwwwwwwwww............. great :) Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 

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