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Mahnoor Khalid
Mahnoor Khalid
Beacon House School System
The Evil Doll
Published On Sep 3rd 2013
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Anna was sleeping when suddenly she felt something moving on her bed. She woke up and saw that her ragged old doll had fallen on her bed. She was surprised because she specifically remembered keeping it on the rack behind some other toys. But she ignored this incident and threw the doll on the floor and went to sleep.
The clock struck 12 and by now Anna was in a deep sleep. But she woke up when she heard some footsteps. She looked around to find out what had caused the footsteps but found nothing. Then she noticed that her doll was lying in the balcony. Anna thought it was one of her brother’s jokes so she picked up the doll, kept it on the rack and went to sleep.
Anna had a younger brother named Jake. Jake was always playing tricks on Anna and just loved to scare her.
The next morning Anna went to Jake and said “Your foolish trick last night didn’t work. Haha.” “What are you talking about Anna? I didn’t do anything.” “Oh yeah, you didn’t. Then explain how my doll fell on me and then went in the balcony. I am no fool. Now remember next time you do anything like this, I’ll tell mom.” Said Anna as she left the room.
That night Anna was sitting on the window sill when she heard someone calling her. She turned around and saw her doll coming towards her. The doll said” You have ruined me and my life. You took out my eye, destroyed my beautiful hair andbroke my leg. And now I’ll ruin you and take my revenge.” Anna said” I am sorry, really really sorry.” The doll replied” A sorry won't make me happy.” Then she pushed Anna and said sweetly” Bye, Bye lovely.” And then the doll laughed...
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Comments 19
M Shafay (y) M Shafay
Oct 8th 2014
 
 
zerwah That's okay Zerwah
Mar 5th 2014
 
 
Anam Scaryyyyy oooooooooooOaaaaaaaaaaaaa Anam
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Aisha Cool but you could have made it more suspicious and scary...but still a great work... Aisha
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Areesha Awesome story:)But a bit scary Areesha
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome dear nd Rizwan bhai ap ko har cheez Bekar hi lagti hain !!!!!!!!! Rafia
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
mahnoor Thanx for the comments guys ;) Mahnoor
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA first the story contain too much horror and suspens but in last it was a joke huUhH!,....... Gullasht
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
Areefa Nice Areefa
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
hani Write the next part of the story.its interesting Hani
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
hani I liked ur story it was interesting! Hani
Sep 7th 2013
 
 
Maria Nice!!! Too... creepy. I left dolls right after I saw Child's Play. Maria
Sep 6th 2013
 
 
rizwan Bekar!!! Rizwan
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Sarah I think the doll should have accepted the girl's apology. Sarah
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rafia
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
eesha The Doll killed he girl????nyc.,.......... Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Soha NICE! Soha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Oo00OOoo....suspicious... Ajwa
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Irum Whoa, scary........... Irum
Sep 4th 2013
 
 

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