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Dawood Junaid
Dawood Junaid
Beaconhouse School System
Kumail And The Cockroaches
Published On Sep 3rd 2013
Total Comments : 12
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One day Kumail went for a walk. He saw three cockroaches there on a bench. He hated cockroaches and ran to smash them. The cockroaches say him and hid under the bench. When Kumail jumped the cockroaches were already beneath the bench. Kumail head bumped with the bench and he became angrier. Now the cockroaches ran to a shop. Kumail again tried to catch him but his head bumped with a fry pan. The shopkeeper smashed the fry pan on his head and Kumail finally gave up and the cockroaches had a feast from a dustbin and enjoyed their feast because of their bravery.
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Comments 12
Rafia SERIOUSLY Ibrahim ...... i m honest!! i was not that!!!!!!!! Rafia
Oct 1st 2013
Rafia Oo000!!!!!! really?????? well let me say that em not always there ..... actually mine nd one of my frnd ifrah's account got hacked .... i am visiting vshine after SUCH along time ...... i don't really know u ... but however sooo sorry coz the comment was from MY ACCOUNT but not by me !!!!! ......... Rafia
Sep 24th 2013
Ibrahim Rafia i am not talking to u everytime i give a comment u r there.u dont let us to talk Ibrahim
Sep 17th 2013
Rafia Hey Ibrahim!!!!!! that depends on the writer if he amkes the hero died or not .... thatz why a film can have happy and sad endings :) Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Ibrahim Dawood hero never die in the films and story but you should have killed the hero because you are the god in the faction story...♥♥Nice story♥♥3 Ibrahim
Sep 9th 2013
Maarij Maqsood Good with a nyc moral Maarij Maqsood
Sep 6th 2013
Rafia Thnx dear Soha ..... :):):) Rafia
Sep 5th 2013
eesha SERIOUSLY???????????????????????????vshine posted this....????? Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
Soha I agree Rafia Soha
Sep 4th 2013
Ajwa Hahaha!!!...its really funny!!! Ajwa
Sep 4th 2013
Irum Ha ha, funny and a story with a moral. Irum
Sep 4th 2013
Rafia Great ......... it's seriously nyc ..... but buhat bura hua bichare Kumail k saath :p ...... however he deserves it for his bad behaviour with ALLAH SWT's creation :) really gooooooood :) Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013

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