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Akifa Hassan
Akifa Hassan
Jinnah College
A Girl Like Me
Published On Aug 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 18
Total Views :  897
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August 2013

Rank 9 Out of 10
I met a girl like me
Simple and styled decently
Always occupied with thoughts
On her ways she usually gets lost
Quiet but not arrogant she was
Didn’t know how to interact with all
Somewhat shy and unconfident too
Having friends just one or two
Arduous to say no to anybody
Conversing with people respectably
Introvert and enigmatic character
As in a shell lays a precious pearl
Enjoys outing to anywhere frequently
With people she could be funky and free
Might be thought aloof or jealous by someone
But in her mother’s view she is a simpleton
Actually she was a concrete image of me
Whenever I see the mirror I find her in front of me.
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Comments 18
Ushna Its awesome..wonderful use of vocabulary n the rhyme of it..luv it i agree with ajwa..that its hard to believe that ppl can actually write like that..:) Ushna
Jan 2nd 2014
shumila Well-written!! Shumila
Sep 30th 2013
sofia Good well done so what you got in the gift hamper ? Sofia
Sep 28th 2013
Muhammad Brilliant use of vacabulary Muhammad
Sep 23rd 2013
Areej Yeah! that was fantabulous....Liked it <3 and congrates...may you have alot more successes in your up-comin life :) Areej
Sep 22nd 2013
Sarah Really nice! Sarah
Sep 21st 2013
mohsin Greatzzzzz afika dear Mohsin
Sep 18th 2013
Ajwa CoNngGratZXxz! Ajwa
Sep 16th 2013
Anam Really nice rhyming Anam
Sep 15th 2013
Soha Coooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!! Soha
Sep 14th 2013
Rafia Ur welcome my dear :)))) Rafia
Sep 13th 2013
afifah Nice and congrats Afifah
Sep 13th 2013
maha Nice one afika Maha
Sep 13th 2013
akifa Thank u kinza, eesha, ajwa and rafia Akifa
Sep 12th 2013
Kinza Nice effort Kinza
Sep 11th 2013
eesha Sooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooody good.i agree w8 Ajwa:) Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
Ajwa Wow!!!!!!its hard to believe that ppl can write like that!!!!! Ajwa
Sep 3rd 2013
Rafia Oooooooo00000000!!!!!!!!!!! really gr8 akifa dear .... :) Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013

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