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Mubarika  Aman
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The Night I Was A Spy
Published On Sep 3rd 2013
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While I was deeply absorbed by the most interesting book, something diverted my attention. I actually ignored it at first but it kept moving so I couldn't really ignore it. It looked somewhat like a shadow. I freaked out at first but when I looked closely, I noticed that it was coming closer. I took my torch and went out from the backdoor to catch that person red handed. As I stepped outside the cool breeze hit my face and the door closed with a bang behind me. I was afraid my parents would wake up or the person will get alert. It was kinda cold outside but now it was too late to get my jacket. I went in my room's direction to see what that shadow was doing outside my window. As i passed the traverse path of my backyard, i noticed that the person was trying to open the back gate. I got a glance of his face but it was not that clear. I hid behind a bush to see what he was doing. After trying hard to open that corroded gate, he just climbed over it. I followed him. It was a dark and cold night but that person went from street to street doing nothing and i kept following him like a spy. I was eager to know what he was doing or just trying to do. He then entered a house in street 39. I was afraid he might be a thief or a murderer. He entered the house and i followed him. I can't believe he banged the door behind him. How am i gonna see what he was doing????
TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Comments 8
Amna Nice story I like this story pls send next part soon Amna
Sep 23rd 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood I just love it.Send the next part as soon as possible Maarij Maqsood
Sep 6th 2013
 
 
eesha Next pt......wanna know the suspense Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Soha SUSPENCE!!!!!!BTW AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOOMEEEEEEEEE! Ohh I meant AWSOME :) Soha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Wow.. Ajwa
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Irum Interesting, but u make it seem like the mystery's not hard an scary, like its a piece of cake, I expect the next part to be much better, Insha' ALLAH Irum
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Minahil Suspense building is good} Minahil
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Gr8 effort .......... send the next part soon !!!!!! :):) Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 

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