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Mubarika  Aman
Mubarika Aman
The Night I Was A Spy
Published On Sep 3rd 2013
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While I was deeply absorbed by the most interesting book, something diverted my attention. I actually ignored it at first but it kept moving so I couldn't really ignore it. It looked somewhat like a shadow. I freaked out at first but when I looked closely, I noticed that it was coming closer. I took my torch and went out from the backdoor to catch that person red handed. As I stepped outside the cool breeze hit my face and the door closed with a bang behind me. I was afraid my parents would wake up or the person will get alert. It was kinda cold outside but now it was too late to get my jacket. I went in my room's direction to see what that shadow was doing outside my window. As i passed the traverse path of my backyard, i noticed that the person was trying to open the back gate. I got a glance of his face but it was not that clear. I hid behind a bush to see what he was doing. After trying hard to open that corroded gate, he just climbed over it. I followed him. It was a dark and cold night but that person went from street to street doing nothing and i kept following him like a spy. I was eager to know what he was doing or just trying to do. He then entered a house in street 39. I was afraid he might be a thief or a murderer. He entered the house and i followed him. I can't believe he banged the door behind him. How am i gonna see what he was doing????
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Comments 8
Amna Nice story I like this story pls send next part soon Amna
Sep 23rd 2013
Maarij Maqsood I just love it.Send the next part as soon as possible Maarij Maqsood
Sep 6th 2013
eesha Next pt......wanna know the suspense Eesha
Sep 4th 2013
Sep 4th 2013
Ajwa Wow.. Ajwa
Sep 4th 2013
Irum Interesting, but u make it seem like the mystery's not hard an scary, like its a piece of cake, I expect the next part to be much better, Insha' ALLAH Irum
Sep 4th 2013
Minahil Suspense building is good} Minahil
Sep 3rd 2013
Rafia Gr8 effort .......... send the next part soon !!!!!! :):) Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013

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