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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
The Haunted Island (part 5)
Published On Apr 30th 2013
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The look on his face was kind of funny after I told him my story.
“So these, these things are real. What are we going to do?” his eyes wide open.
“I have thought of an idea, why don’t we build a raft, you know the ship like thingy” I said brightening up.
“Nice but I don’t think that we have the materials to build it”
“Yes we do, we have lots of fallen trees, empty tin cans and stones” I said enjoying myself.
“So?” he said confused.
“ so, we can use tin cans as nails, like first cut out the bottom part of it and turn it into a nail like shape, it won’t be that strong but it will be just fine. We can use stones as hammer and logs to make a raft” I said excitedly.
“Oh! Nice thinking but it will be hard task and it may take a lot of time” he said.
“I don’t care because I will do anything to get off of this island. Let’s start tomorrow, shall we?” I asked because I was totally worn out.
“Yeah! I feel really sleepy” he said yawning.
“Stupid old worthless tin cans” I said as it sliced my finger and blood came streaming out. The pain was dreadful. By thinking of this I remembered my swollen leg. I looked at it and was totally astonished, not a single part of my leg was bleeding nor was it swollen. There was some kind of leave tied to that part with a piece of cloth. I guess Jamie took care of this too.
James came back after a very long time as he had gone out in search of some useful materials which could be used to make a raft.
“I found some really huge logs but…............ what on earth are you trying to do?” he said looking at my bleeding hands.
“I was trying to make nails out of these useless tin cans”
“What do you think you are, iron man or something? You had almost broken your leg and now this. I am not a doctor and can’t always help you whenever you cut or break any piece of your body” he said as if he were my brother or father.
“Well then how are we going to make a raft?”
“That’s what I came to tell you, listen, I found some huge logs and…… and I saw something else too” he said excitedly and almost in a whisper.
“What? Tell me, fast” I was almost impatient.
“You won’t believe your eyes, just follow me” he said leading the way.
Jamie took us further and deeper into the forest and then suddenly came to a stop.
I looked at him, surprised but he didn’t look back at me he just stared ahead. I turned to see what he was staring at and my mouth fell open.
“Where are we? What is all this stuff?” I said fearfully but somehow there was excitement in my voice.
“I told you, you would be surprised. It’s some kind of a village I think, except that it does not have any huts, cottages or any kind of shelter”.
This place actually looked like an eerie burned down village because it had all kinds of stuff like bonfires (which were not actually lit), not one, tens or twenties of them. There were ropes, logs, some strange things (which I think were part of a ship) and knifes.
“Do you think that there are survivors after all?” James said.
That’s when it hit me. I gulped two times “no! It belongs to THEM”
“You mean those monsters” without a doubt he went closer to examine the knives.
“Yes off course. If there were any survivors we or at least I would have seen them. Look at these bonfires there must be thousands of those monsters”
“OR humans” he said picking up a knife and examining it more closely as if it would help him know that this belonged to humans.
“Would you please drop it already, THERE ARE NO HUMANS ON THIS ISLAND” I almost shouted at him.
“How can you be so sure?”
“You don’t believe me, do you?”
“NO I do. It’s just that I don’t think that this place belongs to them because you said they were some kind of human eaters, then how are they very well organized?”
“What do you mean?”I asked totally confused.
“ look at the way they kept their stuff and the bonfires look as if they are made by humans and these knifes are so very sharp as if newly bought, I mean that if they do eat humans then why would they need knifes when they can use their claws” now he made a point.
“Well if it does belong to your ‘so called’ humans, then where are they?”I said.
“Went in search of food, I guess. Look I say we wait here till these people come back”
“or we can just take the things and get out of here before it’s too late because something tells me that something is going to happen, something really bad” a shiver went down my spine as I really did felt what I said.
James was about to say something when a loud and rather alarming scream alerted us. It was late, very late.
My blood drained from my body and the ground under my feet vanished. Everything was becoming blurred. I took hold of Jamie’s arm for support. James was as stiff as a rock and he was sweating all over. Just then something as black as the night appeared in front of us, out of nowhere, then another appeared and another. It felt as if it was raining monsters. They all stared at us out of their hungry eyes. I was too frightened to move but Jamie took my hand, turned in the opposite direction and was about to run when we realized that they had circled around us and were closing in……..
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Comments 48
Fatima Totally amzing Fatima
Oct 2nd 2015
 
 
Soha Amazing Soha
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Arooba Its amazing story please add me as a friend fatimah. Arooba
Jul 31st 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα Naruto is a Anime(japanese cartoons) and naruto shippuden is a sequel to it...and yeah they r series filled with emotion, fighting, friendship.......its sooooooo awsum anime and i love it........u should watch it Fatima!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! яυмαιsα
Jul 16th 2013
 
 
fatimah Any time my dear Fatimah
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
eesha Thankxxx.I was confused which series i should read :) Eesha
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
fatimah Hmmmmm......well thats a complex question, but i would say......Shivers. Fatimah
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
eesha Do u like fear street or shivers???????Which is more scary?? Eesha
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
fatimah Yes.i kinda remember one part i read it was "hide ans seek" Fatimah
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
eesha Fatima have u read fear street???? Eesha
Jun 28th 2013
 
 
fatimah Rly Eesha, ur comment made me scream for joy.well i have already send the next part but i dont know when will they post it on my screen. Fatimah
Jun 28th 2013
 
 
eesha NEXT PARTTTTTTTT.Great story.Rly u can write a novel!!!!!!.I LUV creepy,scary and ghost stories.U r excellent in this yaaaarrrrrrrr :D Eesha
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
fatimah I am done with the next part and have send it ^_^ hope u like it Fatimah
Jun 23rd 2013
 
 
fatimah No Rumaisa,is it a serial or something? Fatimah
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα Fatima do u watch naruto or naruto shippuden???? яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα Khadijah.....Goosebumps are horror series written by R.L Stine.....they r not that much scary but they have a lot of suspense...u could have searched on da net....! яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Khadijah I simply can't wait.........I am a little impatient Khadijah
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
fatimah I am soooo sorry Khadijah,u see, Vshine have some kind of problem in posting stuffs, cuz i have send my poem about 4 times but they still dint posted it but i am trying to complete the next part as soon as i can cuz my monthly tests r going on and i dont usually get time to write.now dont u worry, i will try my best ;) Fatimah
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA oHHh !... soO, sad Gullasht
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I have been checking everyday for the next part............... Khadijah
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Actually I don't even know what are goosebumps series. I really want know. Khadijah
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
fatimah Well Khadijah, they r just like Goosebumps series but a thousand times scarier than them...^_^ Fatimah
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
fatimah OH no! dear Gullasht i dint meant that, wat i actually meant was ,as u know, Vshine was not working properly last few week and as i was trying to send some of ma poems they were not being posted cuz of some problem in the website, any ways thnx for the tip but i think i am gonna leave the website soon, but first i will try to complete this story for u guys......thnx. Fatimah
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Are SHIVERS Kind of novel stories? Khadijah
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Fatima you can't understand my comment mean i want to tell you that how complete your story on Vshine as you said that your last part is not approved soO, you can complete your story sending small small written in comments Gullasht
Jun 2nd 2013
 
 
fatimah No thanx Gullasht, i have already decided the ending.. thanx anyway :) Fatimah
May 31st 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Fatima i want to give you a tip that how you complete your story if you want soO, i tell you Gullasht
May 30th 2013
 
 
fatimah Looks like i will never be able to end this story, just cuz of Vshine........sorry guyz :(((((( Fatimah
May 25th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA don't mind Dear Fatima I written all this in a fun and naughty moOd I copy your ( about me ) and then paste here soO, soOrY!...... Gullasht
May 25th 2013
 
 
fatimah Thnx alot Rumaisa, rly ur words just touched ma heart. yes i USED to read goosebumps, but they wornt that scary so i started reading SHIVERS series, well i have just read 1 and believe me it seriously gave me shivers they r totally prefect for me am gonna buy some more. (^_^) Fatimah
May 24th 2013
 
 
wafa GE8 JOB! Wafa
May 24th 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα It really is amazing.................I LOvE ghost stories..........ur stories are awwwwwsum..............Do u read Goosebumps?!?! яυмαιsα
May 23rd 2013
 
 
fatimah Y did u right that ?????? Fatimah
May 23rd 2013
 
 
Gullasht I am 14 years old.I love to write poems,stories,articles etc.And am a HUGEEEEEEE fan of Harry Potter movies including Daniel Radcliffe and Emma Watson.My fav.singer is david archuleta and i LoVEE Owl city Songs but i Hate 1 direction so that kinda makes me a NoN-Directioner......and dont forget to send as much requests and i will always be there to accept them (^_^)..... just remember to keep on ROCKKKKK-ING............... Gullasht
May 21st 2013
 
 
Gullasht Vep ^ _ ^ Gullasht
May 18th 2013
 
 
fatimah Yep ^_^ Fatimah
May 17th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA so, i m Right Right Gullasht
May 16th 2013
 
 
fatimah Dr.Gullasht u are 100% correct. i am in love with ghost stuff. there is not a SINGLE horror movie i havnt seen. i dont know wat would life be like without ghost stuff. :D Fatimah
May 15th 2013
 
 
fatimah Yea, that was emma watson, Khadijah......and thx. i will try to upload more of her pics if u want..... :D Fatimah
May 15th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Fatima, your previous ID picture with the hat on the girls face standing is the picture I liked most. Khadijah
May 14th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA fatima i think you are interested in ghosts so, why? u written every thing on them!............. Is I am coreCt ? Gullasht
May 14th 2013
 
 
raveeha AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Raveeha
May 11th 2013
 
 
Sidra OMG!!! I can't wait for the next part!! You are an amazing writer! Sidra
May 9th 2013
 
 
Marwa Nice 1 !!!!!! Marwa
May 7th 2013
 
 
fatimah Sure dear, i will try and thnx alotttt <3 Fatimah
May 4th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I really can't wait plz, plz, send veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyson because I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadijah
May 4th 2013
 
 
Minahil Nice Minahil
May 3rd 2013
 
 
Sana AwEsOmE!!!!!!!!send the next part sooon Sana
May 2nd 2013
 
 

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