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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
A Birthday Surprise
Published On Apr 28th 2013
Total Comments : 11
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Once upon a time, there was a young man named Ali who worked in an office. He had a wife and three sons. One day he was going to Baluchistan with his driver. Ali was thirsty so he told his driver to bring juice from the nearest gas station. The driver went to buy the juice. Suddenly two men with a mask on their faces came and kidnapped Ali. They took Ali to their house and hit him as much as possible. They showed Ali a knife and told that he will be killed on Wednesday. After two days when it was Wednesday, the two men came with knives. They went closer and closer to Ali. Then they took out their masks and Ali saw that the thieves were his friends. The two men said in a loud voice, "Happy Birthday Ali". Then Ali remembered that it was his Birthday.
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Comments 11
Berha Frnds beat other frnds.... Since when? Javeria it is not a poem it is a story :p Berha
May 12th 2017
Ali Very funny hahahahahaha lol no really it's that funny Ali
Nov 15th 2013
Marwa NICE Marwa
Jul 13th 2013
Laibah Haeheheheeeheh funny story ^()^ U Laibah
Jul 6th 2013
Maarij Maqsood Ŵöŵ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡ Maarij Maqsood
Jul 4th 2013
eesha Frnds also beat?????????? Eesha
Jun 27th 2013
manal Looks like u finally thought of a name saad...... Manal
May 10th 2013
Hiba Wow this was quite filmy sort...but it should nbe narrative writing ...u have used mixtures of things ... the tense is not to appealing Hiba
May 3rd 2013
talha If they were friends, they should not beat him Talha
May 2nd 2013
Irum If they were his friends then why did they hit him? They should have just kidnapped him, and at reaching their houses, should have taken off their masked cloaks and wished him Happy Birthday. Irum
Apr 30th 2013
Javeria Good poem....:) Javeria
Apr 29th 2013

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