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Muhammad Arham Tabish
Muhammad Arham Tabish
Beacon House School System Pechs Campus Karachi
The Mystery Of The Haunted House (part 4)
Published On Apr 24th 2013
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The next day, they all took off for Patliputra from Kolkata. When they arrived there, Steve and Sameer were shocked to see that Patliputra was huntedly vacant. It seemed that no one lived there. They hardly saw some people who were in hurry, running towards their houses. Steve asked Rohit the reason about this.
“These are the consequences of the haunted house. Everyone has locked themselves in their own houses." replied Rohit.
Now the case was getting more serious and dangerous. But somehow they gathered courage and went to the centre of Patliputra, where the haunted house was situated.
As they entered the bungalow some paranormal activities took place which made those three discouraged. Then suddenly, in no time 2 ghosts covered in white cloak emerged from the curtains and surrounded those 3. Sameer and Rohit screamed in fear, but Steve felt something strange.
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Comments 3
selina Interesting...... Selina
Jun 5th 2013
Muhammad Arham Yeah sure.. Next time I would avoide these mistakes Muhammad Arham
Apr 26th 2013
Abdur Rafay u shud have avoided writing "CLOAKS" as it uncovered the whole story before it was even solved.btw nice but u shud work on creating more suspense rather than quickly wrapping a detective story....(Advice) Abdur Rafay
Apr 25th 2013

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