The next day, they all took off for Patliputra from Kolkata. When they arrived there, Steve and Sameer were shocked to see that Patliputra was huntedly vacant. It seemed that no one lived there. They hardly saw some people who were in hurry, running towards their houses. Steve asked Rohit the reason about this. “These are the consequences of the haunted house. Everyone has locked themselves in their own houses." replied Rohit. Now the case was getting more serious and dangerous. But somehow they gathered courage and went to the centre of Patliputra, where the haunted house was situated. As they entered the bungalow some paranormal activities took place which made those three discouraged. Then suddenly, in no time 2 ghosts covered in white cloak emerged from the curtains and surrounded those 3. Sameer and Rohit screamed in fear, but Steve felt something strange.
Yeah sure.. Next time I would avoide these mistakes
Apr 26th 2013
u shud have avoided writing "CLOAKS" as it uncovered the whole story before it was even solved.btw nice but u shud work on creating more suspense rather than quickly wrapping a detective story....(Advice)