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Laiba Jamal
Laiba Jamal
Beaconhouse School System
A Complete White Day
Published On Apr 24th 2013
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Snow flakes
Puddles freeze
ice skates
white trees
snow heaps
stand tall
It’s snowfall
It’s snowfall
snowman
wearing hats
people sleeping
in cosy bed
drinking soup in the mall
it’s snowfall
it’s snowfall
Rainy nose
red as rose
cars stuck
in the road
playing with a ball
it’s snowfall
it’s snowfall. 
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Gullasht AsSalam.0.Alekuim!!... "RAMADAN MUBARAK" Dear @Laiba May Allah give you courage you collect too much NAKIYA and May Allah Bless you in this mouth (AMEEN) keep remember me in your's prays. Gullasht
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AsSalam.0.Alekuim!!... "RAMADAN MUBARAK" Dear @Laiba May Allah give you courage you collect too much NAKIYA and May Allah Bless you in this mouth (AMEEN) keep remember me in your's prays. Gullasht
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Good wood poem Bushra Hafeez
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yaR awesome !!!.......... Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
Arouba Wow, nice! u r good writer! Arouba
May 1st 2013
 
 
 Sadia Okay i was wrong but am not jealous My dear ! :-) Sadia
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
Laiba You both are wrong and you people are jealous with me Laiba
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
 Sadia If it is true laraib then i agree with you Sadia
Apr 28th 2013
 
 
Laiba You are a layer,dear sister,I have written this poem by my self! Laiba
Apr 28th 2013
 
 
laraib I have read this poem some where else.you should write by your own self Laraib
Apr 27th 2013
 
 

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