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Muhammad Arham Tabish
Muhammad Arham Tabish
Beacon House School System Pechs Campus Karachi
The Mystery Of The Haunted House (part 3)
Published On Apr 23rd 2013
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Sameer called Rohit and told him about Steve.
"Rohit, can you tell me your problem in detail?" asked Steve.
Rohit began explaining: "John Mercham was a British leader who came to India for holidays with his family (wife and son). He decided to spend his holidays in our city Patliputra as it seemed a comfortable place to him. During his holidays he also builds his own bungalow in between the city. The Indians hated him as he was a British and also made a plan to kill him, and unfortunately they succeeded and killed John Mercham along with his family. And from that day it was said by people that John Mercham and his family's ghost is still wandering around the city and is giving punishments for the mistake that the people of Patliputra made by killing John Mercham. And each ay some got disappeared from the city. Sir I am helpless and I don't want to take any kind of risk, that's why I am here begging you for help. please don't ignore my request and please help me." finished Rohit  by taking a breath.
The mystery of the haunted house seemed unparalleled to Steve but still they 3 decide to work as a team and solve this mystery together.
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Comments 8
Ali Why India not uk Ali
Nov 15th 2013
Muhammad Arham Iam in Grade 6... Muhammad Arham
May 9th 2013
Muhammad Arham Iam in Grade 6... Muhammad Arham
May 9th 2013
mahnoor Which class are you from Mahnoor
May 3rd 2013
Muhammad Arham Thank you so much my friends for appreciating my efforts Muhammad Arham
Apr 25th 2013
leena Where is last or 2nd last part one more thing its a nice starting Leena
Apr 24th 2013
Abdur Rafay Hey arham welcome to vshine! keep writing the whole story!! - ABDUR RAFAY KHAN(your van friend) Abdur Rafay
Apr 24th 2013
marium Sorry !but you have made some grammar mistakes in all the three parts. Please post and finish your story i want to read it complete. By the way it was a nice story till part3. Marium
Apr 24th 2013

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