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Javeria Bilal
Javeria Bilal
Beaconhouse School System
The Moon
Published On Apr 17th 2013
Total Comments : 7
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Rank 8 Out of 10
I am like an open, yellow eye at night,
never blinking, always staring down
from the limitless darkness,
And so cold. Oh, I'm so cold!
And lifeless! It’s true!
Visitors come to see me
but they didn’t stay long
before zooming off as fast as
they could.
No wonder I look so sad.
Alone and sad
in this limitless darkness.
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Comments 7
Gullasht AOA its O.K but i m the one who comment on your story (useless crying) and poems first and i never disrespect you always respect and appreciate you and i really dishearted when you remove me from your friendz list and i always behaves you like my cusin because her name is jaweria and i always ask you BETA and you do thiz 2 me.Sso, now i can't send you any request and i forgive you and bye ALLAH HAFIX!!!!!!!!.......... Gullasht
May 4th 2013
Javeria Im sorry! i was angry at someone! Javeria
May 3rd 2013
Gullasht AOA ARE YOU HAVE DON'T MANNERS THat how speak w8 elders?!!!!!..... and its our right that what we written in your stuff... i think you have no manners becuz you write in your profile that you are 10 years and i m 15 years !!!!!! sooO SorryY!!!!!!!!>..........yaR for this but you are able for that disrespect becuz you are un manner i think you also disrespect your elders !!!!!!! Gullasht
Apr 30th 2013
Javeria Sooo..... Is this a gud poem? Javeria
Apr 29th 2013
Javeria If u. Can't write something nice Gullast Then don't comment.! Javeria
Apr 28th 2013
Gullasht AOA well i agree w8 my last comment in your poem my bed late Gullasht
Apr 20th 2013
Javeria GOOD! Javeria
Apr 20th 2013

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