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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Case Of The Missing Girl (final Part)
Published On Apr 11th 2013
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Chris Stephen called the police and few of his trusted detective friends and explained them the whole situation. Then Stephen asked Betty, "where is your hideout? Tell us quick!"
Betty said, "Behind the Cocktail Pub, in its back alley."Stephen told Mr and Mrs Marvey that Betty will have to come with them so that she stays under the eyes of police. When Stephen, the police and the Marveys reached behind the Cocktail Pub, Betty showed them the entrance to the hideout. But Stephen walked around the whole pub and then said to the police members,
"Gentlemen, I want 20 of you to surround this place but please leave the actual entrance of the pub. I will go in through this hideout door. Please load your guns."Then he walked in. The gang leader, Roderick yelled, "Who the hell are you and what brings you to your death spot?"
"I'm...detective Christopher Stephen and you are all under arrest," answered Stephen.
"You shall die on the spot you're standing!" Cried Susan and pointed the pistol on Stephen.
"Save your bullets," said Stephen and clapped his hands loudly. All of a sudden 10 police came into the room through the entrance of the hideout.
"Let's get out through the backdoor!" cried Rodney. The three gangsters reached the backdoor, but they couldn't escape from there too.10 more policemen marched through that door. So Stephen's clever plan of surrounding the place worked and the gangsters were now arrested.
"Tell us where have you hidden the girl or else," Stephen threatened.
"She...she is in in the corner," stammered Roderick. When Stephen opened the locker, Julie fell out from the locker, unconscious, her arm, legs and mouth tied. Mr and Mrs Marvey ran to their daughter. When Julie gained consciousness, she screamed with joy, "Oh Mom,Dad! I'm glad we're again reunited!"
"We are also glad. Now you're safe." said Jonas Marvey, "Thank you for finding my daughter! We couldn't have done without you Mr. Stephen."
"That's my job, Mr Marvey to solve other people's problems. And I'm glad we have found your Julie." said Stephen with a smile.

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Comments 15
Ali I like you dear Ali
Nov 15th 2013
Soha Cool! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
rizwan Good and long story. Rizwan
Jun 9th 2013
irfan Don't inspire with everyone make your own identity Irfan
Jun 8th 2013
Usman Awesome Story. Usman
Jun 7th 2013
rizwan Good story. Rizwan
Jun 7th 2013
mary It was awsome plz write some more Mary
May 26th 2013
Irum Give us a break, Rafay Bhai, not all u r stories have to be published in VShine, give others a chance as well, your story was published in VShine April issue, isn't that satisfying enough? Irum
May 4th 2013
Fatima U sure r inspired by Sherlock Holmes! Fatima
Apr 27th 2013
Eshah AWESOME,bhai!! i lyk it more than ur previous detective stories!! Eshah
Apr 25th 2013
Abdur Rafay Thnx manal and "smiley" :-) Abdur Rafay
Apr 24th 2013
manal Wow!its a mindblower! Manal
Apr 18th 2013
Maarij Maqsood it Maarij Maqsood
Apr 18th 2013
Irum What a looooong story! Irum
Apr 16th 2013
Abdur Rafay Vshine plz publish this story in ur MAY magazine 2013 Abdur Rafay
Apr 12th 2013

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