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Afifah Maryam
Afifah Maryam
Imsg Islamabad
Two Friends
Published On Apr 8th 2013
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April 2013
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Amna was a fine girl of 13 years whose parents love her very much. She was their only daughter. Amna had a nice furry cat named crook. Crook was her best friend; wherever she had to go the cat would go with her except for the school. She wasn't allowed to take a cat to school. At school she had another friend not a cat but a nice, kind hearted and naughty girl, Tehseen.
Tehseen was her only friend at school .because nobody else in her class wanted to be her friend 'cause all the time she talked of nothing but her cat. Everyone was tired of her cat stories. Tehseen felt sorry for her, she often saw her sitting alone on empty bench in school.
One day, tehseen thought of a plan to make amna cheerful. She asked her whether she can come to her place and have look at her cat. amna was overjoyed to hear something about her cat from somebody else .and she said that tehseen can come anytime, any day..
When tehseen went to her home amna was already waiting for her with her cat in her arms. amna took tehseen to her room. she had just asked her to sit down when amna's mother's voice came from the kitchen, as amna went down into the kitchen tehseen caught the cat and put him in the cupboard. Actually, she had a very nice plan to make her happy but it seemed like it wasn’t going to work. For when amna came in with a tray full of eatables, she started looking here and there.
“What are you looking for” tehseen asked like she didn’t know anything.” crook my cat? where is my cat..?” amna said worried.” He was on the bed when you left” tehseen said. Amna looked at her sceptically.” “What” Tehseen said surprised. “What did you do to him, I know you have done something to him” said amna angrily.” Oh,I got it, you wanted to steal it , right?” she said, now a false smile spreading on her face.” Because you knew he was an expensive cat, I knew this was going to happen, you just…….
“That’s too much amna , I thought you were my friend “ tehseen interrupted.”I was mad that I tried to become your friend and tried to make you a bit cheerful. I didn’t know that you care about nobody except your stupid cat” she said , her temper rising. Tehseen opened the cupboard door and the cat jumped at her. She gave the cat to amna and left the room leaving amna there with her mouth opened
The next day when amna went to school she noticed that tehseen was sitting alone on the bench which amna used to sits on. Tehseen was no longer sitting with her; she was sitting alone in a corner of classroom. When amna came home that day something strange happened that she did not meet her cat and went straight upstairs in her room. amna was feeling very ashamed and lonely. She was realizing that crook is just a cat, he can’t be her best friend, he can only be her pet. But tehseen was her friend whom she had lost now at this thought she left her room went to tehseen’s home .her mother opened the door, she was a kind faced woman just like her daughter. Amna went to her room and apologized to her. Tehseen was a kind hearted girl so; she forgave her and she was happy to have her friend back.

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Comments 143
yashfeen Loved your story and please accept my friend request Afifah and can we be best friends. Yashfeen
Apr 14th 2017
 
 
Ayesha Nailed it you deserve to win Ayesha
Apr 16th 2015
 
 
Ghania I really like it...Can we be frndz?? Ghania
Apr 9th 2015
 
 
summaya This is great Summaya
Aug 19th 2014
 
 
Ashra Perfect Ashra
May 11th 2014
 
 
afifah Almost fine yra what about you? Afifah
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Areej Hey affifah how are you??? :) Areej
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Rafia Yes ali :) lekin kyoun?? Rafia
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Ali Rafia kia ap kubhi bhi khani bany hai Ali
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Rafia I'll reply u dear INSHALLAH on saturday nd i'll tell u the problem .. :) Rafia
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Rafia I'll reply u dear INSHALLAH on saturday nd i'll tell u the problem .. :) Rafia
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
afifah Whyyy yar what's the problem why can't you reply emails yra?? Afifah
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah ..... i am now rafia (seriously) HELP ME YAR! i literally cry as now em not able to contact u much!!!! ;( Rafia
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey rafia do you know who is hiba ahmed? Afifah
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Rafia OMG!!! thank God that finally u r here honey! Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey hi i'm back:) sorrrry yara:) Afifah
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia ?????????? AFIFAH........??? WHERE R U HONEY ????????? :((((((((( Rafia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia AFIFAH DEAR ............ em really worried plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz reply sweetie!!!!!!! :( Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Dear afifah where r u??? i didnt got ur reply honey!! Rafia
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Areej But i don't have cell allowance...!!!!! Areej
Sep 21st 2013
 
 
afifah No problem areej you can text me, you have my number:) Afifah
Sep 19th 2013
 
 
Areej Yaar am not able to mail you :( ...!!!!!! ): Areej
Sep 19th 2013
 
 
Areej Okay now i got my mistake :) Areej
Sep 19th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well mine is on 7th of october .......... :)) tell me about ur routine dear :))) Rafia
Sep 15th 2013
 
 
afifah My birthday is on 13th of may and your? Afifah
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah dear can i ask u when is ur birthday???????? :)))) Rafia
Sep 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia No need of sorry dear .... nd my dearest frnd i also missed u soooooooo much ... nd who is Haleema? :) Rafia
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
afifah I am really really sorry yra i cant tell you how much I have missed you and vshine, i will tell you the details by mail, okay? and well come to vshine, Haleema:) and thanks.. Afifah
Sep 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Where r u Afifah dear???????? em missing u sooooooooo much yaar!!!!!!!! Rafia
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Haleema Wooooooowwwww....um feeling proud:) Haleema
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Nice it got published!!! Gul Noor
Aug 30th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah ......... thnkuuu yar!!!!!!!! u r soooooooooooooo great :) U R MY BESTEST FRND ........... SERIOUSLY .......... nd yup! no matter if we both haven't seen each other ...... i know u will be as nice and beautiful as ur comments r :) Rafia
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks a lot irfah:> and yeah i know that Rafia is a really really great friend, and she is my best friend too no matter that we haven't seen each other. Afifah
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Ifrah  (manooo) Afifah api nd Rafia ...... you both have been sooooooo good frnds ........ nd just on v shine!!!!!!!!!!! great :):):) i mean u both haven't seen anyone yet nd became so good frnds :) Afifah api, u don't know in school, in our library period (when we r doing nothing) nd in break time ... Rafia talks toooooooooooooooo much about u !!!!!!!! the way she talks about u, get's everyone in a mystery that so great u are seriously !!!!!! :) she says u r her bestest frnd in the world :D that's sweet :):):) MAY ALLAH SWT SHOWER ALL HIS BLESSINGS ON U BOTH .... ND UR FRIENDSHIP REMAINS THE SAME .... INSHA ALLAH :):):):) nd i wanna say ..... that Rafia is a really good frnd :) she's really gr8 :) NS THAT'S TRUE as i do study with her in my class :) she's a frnd in need........... :):):):) Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Rafia Wow yar............ so u had a gr8 time........... :):):):):):):) Rafia
Aug 17th 2013
 
 
afifah Yup:>. it was my cousin's wedding. Afifah
Aug 17th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oo000000............ right........... well is there any relative of ur's??????????? :) Rafia
Aug 16th 2013
 
 
afifah Yeah i enjoyed a lot and i didn't want to come back:):> Afifah
Aug 16th 2013
 
 
Arooba Good story affifah I love it I also like harrypotter plz accept my request Arooba
Aug 16th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh yeah, i enjoyed very much and i didn't want to come back:);) Afifah
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Rafia No problem Afifah :) no need of sorry !!!!!!! well did u enjoyed ??? :) Rafia
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks Bismah, and there was a letter from vshine and a maths geometry, pens, a box of lead pencils etc. anything else?:) Afifah
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh i am sorry Rafia actually i was in Lahore for three days, that's why i couldn't reply... Afifah
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Bismah Really marvelous.... great.. accept my request please Bismah
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Bismah Please accept my request and what was in the gift Bismah
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah jani.......... i have sent u an email............ plz check nd reply dear........ em waiting!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well Afifah dear........ kiya hua?????? i mean Saad is really not having interest in v shine...... right?????? :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Yes, Afifah dear.....Rabia Ahmed is my sister..............my elder sister!!!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
afifah Well not very much and Rafia!, rabia ahmed is your sister??? Afifah
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ap century k beintha qareeb hain :) Rafia
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia Aur sunao Afifah jani................ how much eidi u got nd how r u going to spend it dear?????????? :) Rafia
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia InshaAllah Afifah........... if Allah wish then I will InshaAllah come, as nothing can b done without Allah's will :) Rafia
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
afifah You are well come dear:) and i wish that you visit Islamabad. Afifah
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah........... thnx for ur sweet comments.......... nd I am also very lucky to have a frnd lik u :) I don't lie.... so i wanna say that u r my bestest frnd in the world........... If i will visit Islamabad... then i will love to see u :) Rafia
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah........... thnx for ur sweet comments.......... nd I am also very lucky to have a frnd lik u :) I don't lie.... so i wanna say that u r my bestest frnd in the world........... If i will visit Islamabad... then i will love to see u :) Rafia
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia LOVE U AFIFAH :) n tell Saad not to b heart broken........ i also send a million stuff and it didn't get approved........ but still i had believe in myself and then got my jokes published..... tell him that if u have believe in urself, then nothing is impossible or unbeatable :) .... I hope he will join vshine again :) Rafia
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
afifah No irfah, actually saad uploaded a story that was his first story ever but the admin did not approve it, so saad is a little bit heart broken and he does not like vshine anymore:( Afifah
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks dear for writing my name in your best friends:). You too are my best friend and i am really happy to have you as my friend:):> and yeah i am going to check my emails:) Afifah
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah....... I really want to meet you ....... and all my frnds whom I have written in my profile :) Rafia
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah jani......... I have send u an email dear....... do check and reply :) Rafia
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well..... thnxxxx alot Afifah!!!!!! I will send u an e-mail at ur ID so u will get mine too :) em reallllly reallllly happy :) Rafia
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
afifah Well, Rafia my address is "afifah-maryam@hotmal.com":). now you can contact me. Afifah
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
afifah Hahaha dear i was going to ask you the same thing:) Afifah
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome with open heart dear.........!!!!!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Assalam-0-Alaikum Afifah....................... well I want to be in contact with you my frnd, so if u don't mind dear, I want ur e-mail Id as I cannot take ur phone number at vshine....... so I hope you don't mind dear.....!!!!!!!! :) Rafia
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks Rafia:) Afifah
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey don't ask me for every question, you are my friend you can ask me any thing you want:):> Afifah
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Ifrah  (manooo) Afifah Api.........ramadan mubarak and eid mubarak in advance :) wese kia Saad bhai nahi bethte vshine par ???????? Ifrah (manooo)
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah jani.............. I have commented on ur poem "a true wish"............. that was really sweet............ and I really appreciate ur oldest brother!!!!!!!!!!!:) well u r a older sis too and a younger one too......... em too (i have one elder sister and two younger brother and sister) ........ well I wanna ask u a question if u don't mind dear!!!!!!!!!:) Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia N full century k buhat kareeb hain ap :D keep the way going:) Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia 70 comments :) great work Afifah!!!!!!!!! ap ne half century bana le :D Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey, Rafia i also wrote a poem for my parents, 'a true wish'. Afifah
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
afifah Well, i have five brother and two sisters(Masha Allah). every one is older then me except saad, he is the youngest brother:> Afifah
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey, Afifah....... how many brothers and sisters u have??????:) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah, I was reading the comment as usual.... smiling...... but then u made me really sad yaara!!!!!!!!!!!! :( well, InshAllah u will do something for him...... he is really a nyc brother :)Btw dear u have many many great hobbies and aims...... u r really gr8 :) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
afifah Okay:) well.. my hobbies are reading books, painting, opening small gadgets (i want to become a doctor but also love scientists and want to see how machines really work),a little bit art work( like making cards and other things from raw materials). i also love to play games but not all the games, there are some specific ones that i like. i am afraid of water and insects:) my favorite movies are harry potter, pirates of Caribbean, all jackie chan's movies, nanny mcphee, around the world in eighty days and many others:):)). the biggest aim of my life is to do something great and wonderful for my oldest brother.( my parents died about ten years ago and he is the one who look after us all and gave us everything, and he is everything for us, mother and father. that's why i want to repay him:>) Afifah
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Em really happy................:) well, my hobbies r, sometimes baking, exploring the world (like when I go out for a picnic or something i take my camera and take pics of insects, birds and nature) and i love 2 read and study......... especially I concentrates on science coz my aim is to become a doctor.......... well there are many more too........ I really love cricket and harry potter movies and stories....... along with I like Islamabad...... I really love and want 2 visit there and Oxford University in London....!!!!! :) and I don't like much jewelleries( I only like MAXIMUM a necklace and a ring) ...... I don't like vacations much........... I am missing my frnds:(............ but when there is a picnic plan so I love it:p........ well that's it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what about u Afifah????????:) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
afifah Yeah why not:) okay now tell me what is your hobby, what you like most and what you don't like etc.. Afifah
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Frm my class........ Rabita Tariq....... she is also on vshine.......... nd morely all vshine members!!!!!!:) well would u like 2 b my frnd dear???:) Rafia
Aug 2nd 2013
 
 
afifah You well come:). hey now who is your best friend? Afifah
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well ....my Ramadan r also going very nyc....... and that's not my frnd...... I asked her before......... well thnkuuu :) Rafia
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh sorry rafia that fatimah raheel that is on vshine lives in riyadh, so she cant be your friend Afifah
Jul 26th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh mine is going brilliantly, how's your going? and rafia, fatimah raheel is on vshine too, may be she is your friend.. Afifah
Jul 26th 2013
 
 
Rafia A0A!!!!!!!!! Afifah how r ur Ramadan going dear.........?????????:) Rafia
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oh right Afifah......... well dear I was asking about Fatima because first she was here in Karachi but then she shifted Islamabad.....she was my best frnd.............I also lost her contact so I asked if u know so......... well thnx my frnd for replying my comment :) Rafia
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh i am perfectly fine. and yeah saad is my brother, a younger one. all of my brother's names end with alam and my father's too, even my nephew's (from brother side) name ends with alam. and i don't have any friend named fatimah raheel (at school). by the way who is she and why are you asking me about her? Afifah
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
afifah I hope you win:) Afifah
Jul 22nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Well dear...........How are you????? I want to ask that is Saad REALLY ur brother ?????/ I was asking because ur name ends with Maryam and his Alam.........so I am bit confused frnd......:) and I also want to ask that do u have a frnd named Fatima Raheel?(at school)?? Rafia
Jul 22nd 2013
 
 
Marwa A mind blowing one Afifa cause this is a story from which we could learn and a very very congratz to you for winning on this cause it deserves to be the winner . I hope my new published story can be just like your one. A WINNER ! :) :P Marwa
Jul 21st 2013
 
 
afifah Yeah of course:) Afifah
Jul 21st 2013
 
 
Rafia Great Afifah.....................u deserved to b the winner.....................CONGRATZZZZZZ my frnd!!!!!!!!!!:) well I want to ask a question.........can I??????:) Rafia
Jul 19th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks a lot ayesha:) Afifah
Jul 19th 2013
 
 
Ayesha RAMADAN MUBARAK IT IS AMAZING STORY YOU DESERVE THIS YOU WILL BE A GOOD STORY WRITTER Ayesha
Jul 17th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks a lot mubashra Afifah
Jul 14th 2013
 
 
mubashra Ramadan Mubarak Afifah may ur all wishes come true and remember me also in ur prayers Mubashra
Jul 13th 2013
 
 
Laibah Congrats !!!!!! Laibah
Jul 8th 2013
 
 
Wajeeha Congooz afifa =) i really lykd ur story =) Wajeeha
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks hiba Afifah
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Best of luck 4 ur future always keep smiing....and shine always... i wish that u have a happy life ahead Hiba
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks Afifah
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
Areej Oo Greaattt yarr! Areej
Jun 28th 2013
 
 
Hoora Congratz for winning Hoora
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
noor Congratz!! afifah! you know this story is impressive! i <3 it! Noor
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Amna Nyc and congrats...............:) Amna
Jun 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh yes he is Afifah
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh yes, he is. Afifah
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
mubashra It is really nice story and u really deserve prize so congratzzzzzz on successing ur first step Mubashra
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
mubashra Is saad ur brother Mubashra
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks and thank you so much idiot saad:) Afifah
Jun 1st 2013
 
 
Samreen Nice story Samreen
May 31st 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas What a wonderfull story Hamza Waqas
May 31st 2013
 
 
saad I hate this story because this is written by my sister afifa. Saad
May 31st 2013
 
 
hurriya Congratz!!!! i love your story Hurriya
May 29th 2013
 
 
afifah Hahaha, thanks amna:) Afifah
May 25th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yeah! i gOt it!.......... Gullasht
May 23rd 2013
 
 
Amna Hey afifa i had noticed 1 thing that if we red your name from end it also makes AFIFA☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻ Amna
May 23rd 2013
 
 
Amna OHH congratzzzzz afifa♥ nice story Amna
May 23rd 2013
 
 
afifah "kinda" means "kind of", like we use to say wanna instead of want to. Got it?:> Afifah
May 22nd 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA what do you mean by kinda friendz? Gullasht
May 21st 2013
 
 
Muhammad Congrats,, ♥ the story!! Muhammad
May 15th 2013
 
 
afifah oh khadija, i said it before that it was my very first story, that's why there are some mistakes. Afifah
May 15th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey you are on pottermore? Afifah
May 15th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Tehseen is not naughty. Khadijah
May 15th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yeah!.... soO, its time to celeberate the funs of harry potter Gullasht
May 13th 2013
 
 
afifah That's very good:) Afifah
May 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA hi guyxxx I m also fan of Harry potter !!!..... Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks Afifah
May 8th 2013
 
 
Arouba Wonderful story n congratzz....... u deserved it! Arouba
May 7th 2013
 
 
Faizan Good ! Faizan
May 4th 2013
 
 
afifah Yeah i am. you too? Afifah
May 4th 2013
 
 
fatimah Hey Afifah r u a fan of harry potter? Fatimah
May 3rd 2013
 
 
fatimah ConGratzz, loveeee the story <3 Fatimah
May 3rd 2013
 
 
afifah Thanks everyone.... that is so unexpected.:) Afifah
May 2nd 2013
 
 
Soha Heart touching I mean it's mind blowing! Soha
May 1st 2013
 
 
sahar I like this story Sahar
May 1st 2013
 
 
Zerni Your first story has made you winner of APRIL 2013....congratZZZZZ a lot...Comment on my poem too Zerni
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA congralations Gullasht
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh i am great, how are you? Afifah
Apr 29th 2013
 
 
afifah Well thanks.. Afifah
Apr 28th 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα Nyc, Heart-Touching story( I love cats 2) яυмαιsα
Apr 26th 2013
 
 
Arwa AOA, how r u? Nyc story:) Arwa
Apr 26th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh sorry , actually this was my first story and i wrote it in two hours time. Afifah
Apr 12th 2013
 
 
Fatima Nice but in this story Tehseen is not naughty Fatima
Apr 11th 2013
 
 

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