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Javeria Bilal
Javeria Bilal
Beaconhouse School System
Fear Of Rain
Published On Apr 9th 2013
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I lay crouched on my bed. It was raining, thunderstorms, lighting, and the thought of it made me shiver. I stood in the doorway listening to the thunder. I was alone at home. I suddenly, heard the doorbell ring. I tottered downstairs. I crept to the front door, in case someone was watching me. I opened the door. And then all of my fears vanished. There stood my mother and father carrying a box of chocolates for me…….
 
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selina Nice but too small! Selina
May 19th 2013
 
 
Javeria Thanks Javeria
Apr 11th 2013
 
 
Javeria Thanks Javeria
Apr 11th 2013
 
 
Hiba Good 1 ....i hav commented on all ur stuff....so lyk mine and commmmmmeeeeeeenttttt ....big long ones Hiba
Apr 11th 2013
 
 
manal Nice twist! Manal
Apr 10th 2013
 
 

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