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Usman Rehan
Usman Rehan
Springfield School
The Cruel Aunts
Published On Apr 7th 2013
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April 2013

Rank 9 Out of 10
Once there was a little boy named John. His parents had died and he lives with his two aunts. Their names were Aunt Matilda and Aunt Elizabeth. His both aunts were very cruel and they hated the little boy. They made John do the house work and cut logs for the fire. They never allowed him to play with his friends. As John was only eight years old he could not face these hardships so often he got a beating by his aunt. One day while John was doing the house work and his aunts were lazing in the sun, suddenly two men came and they put a sack on his aunt head. His aunt screamed but it was no use. The man carried them to their car and went away.
Now, what had happened to John? He saw all this but he was so stunned that he could not speak a word. Although John hated his aunt, but he was a kind person and he felt sorry for his aunt. He decided to find his aunt and catch the thieves. So after doing all his work he put on his coat and went out in the village. He had not gone far when he saw the foot prints of the car. He followed them and came to the kidnapper’s house. The men were not at home. He went inside and quickly cut the ropes that were tied to his aunt. Then, with a lot of difficulty he managed to take them home. He quickly phoned the police and told them the address of the kidnapper’s house.
Now what had happened to those two men? When they reached their home, they were very surprised to find the door open and no one inside. They began to search the house. While they were still searching, they got a shock for two police cars came racing. They tried to run away but the police caught them. John got a big present by the government as they were trying to catch these thieves for the last ten years. Another wonderful thing that he earned by doing this was, from that day his aunt were grateful to him and never treated him badly.

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Comments 46
Usman Thanks!!! Usman
Aug 28th 2015
Abdullah Congratulations Abdullah
Jul 7th 2015
Usman Thanks!!! Usman
May 28th 2015
shiraz Great story and congratulation ! usman Shiraz
May 3rd 2015
Amna Nice Keep it up young champ %uD83D%uDE00 Amna
Feb 25th 2015
Usman Thanks Usman
Jan 11th 2015
Umair Amzng story Umair
Jan 9th 2015
Usman Thanks Usman
Aug 21st 2014
qurratul Cool! Qurratul
Aug 19th 2014
Usman Thanks Usman
May 23rd 2014
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 22nd 2014
Ali Copied from james and the giant peach you could have made the aunts names like aunt Spiker and aunt Sponge Ali
Nov 16th 2013
Usman Hey in which class r u in Usman
Oct 24th 2013
S.M. Yar acept my request i am springfielder. S.m.
Oct 24th 2013
Jul 27th 2013
Usman Thanks Rizwan. Usman
Jun 7th 2013
rizwan That's the awesome story. Rizwan
Jun 7th 2013
 яυмαιsα ASA, Dr.Gullasht, i didn't know about that soooooo whateverrrr.................I dont CaRe!!! яυмαιsα
Jun 4th 2013
Usman I got a geometry box and some stationary stuff and a letter. Usman
Jun 3rd 2013
irfan Is nay story chapi hai Irfan
Jun 3rd 2013
irfan What was the gift Irfan
Jun 3rd 2013
mary Some is from james and the jent peach Mary
May 27th 2013
Gullasht AOA that why he send me a request? Gullasht
May 25th 2013
Gullasht AOA soO, what Rumaisa? he doesn't accept my friend request soO, then he send me a request so, i want to know. Gullasht
May 25th 2013
 яυмαιsα AOA Dr.Gullasht but arent u da 1 who told him to be frndzzz!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!? яυмαιsα
May 24th 2013
Gullasht AOA can you tell me the cause of sending me a friend request? don't MinD yaR!................... Gullasht
May 23rd 2013
Gullasht AOA i know the gift was just awesome you are lucky got the gift becuz many of you them can't take the gift Gullasht
May 20th 2013
Usman Thank you VShine very much.I got the gift and it was fantastic. Usman
May 18th 2013
Muhammad Congratulations!! Muhammad
May 15th 2013
May 11th 2013
Misbah The starting is copied from James and the Giant Peach otherwise the story is very nice!! Misbah
May 5th 2013
Usman Oh no I wrote It all with my own words. Usman
May 4th 2013
Faizan Well Attempted ! Faizan
May 4th 2013
Omer Is it your profile picture Omer
May 3rd 2013
Minahil Half story is copied from James and the giant peach. Minahil
May 3rd 2013
Usman Thank you every body very much Usman
May 2nd 2013
Soha Great!! CONGRATs Soha
May 1st 2013
Laibah Nice Laibah
May 1st 2013
Zerni CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner Zerni
Apr 30th 2013
Gullasht AOA congralationssss!!!!!!!!... Gullasht
Apr 30th 2013
Usman Thanks Usman
Apr 24th 2013
Muhammad ExcELLenT!! Muhammad
Apr 21st 2013
Gullasht Oh really!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hi so, wanna frndz Gullasht
Apr 20th 2013
Usman No Usman
Apr 19th 2013
Gullasht AOA r u new on vshine ? Gullasht
Apr 19th 2013
Fatima Good Effort Fatima
Apr 11th 2013

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