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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
Alien Friend Part 2
Published On Mar 29th 2013
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When Rafay was saying Goodbye to the aliens, he saw some small robots but he didn’t cared and went home. After a month, Hoop came back to Earth again. He told Rafay that the Alien Force has started to catch aliens again. Hoop also told that the small robots Rafay saw in the Alien Force’s lab has created big robots. The robots are so strong that no alien can destroy them. Rafay ran to his uncle’s lab to tell him all about it. He saw that uncle wasn’t there so he searched for his uncle in the house. He couldn’t find his uncle. Hoop told that Alien Force is kidnapping the people who destroyed the old robots. First Rafay didn’t believe Hoop but after some days when he couldn’t find his uncle in the city, he believed Hoop. Rafay knew all about his uncle’s machines so he created a robot named Robo. Then he told Hoop to call all the aliens on Earth so they can easily fight the Alien Force’s robots. After some time, all the aliens landed on Earth. Rafay teleported everyone with the help of his uncle’s machine. Rafay and all the aliens were in the Alien Force’s lab. Rafay could see his uncle locked in a cage. Rafay ran to the cage and tried to open it. When he was opening it, a big robot appeared and attacked Rafay. When all the aliens saw that Rafay is injured, they used their special power to destroy the robot. The robot was damaged a little bit. Rafay opened his eyes and called Robo. Robo stood in front of Alien Force’s robot but Rafay’s robot was too small in front of the other robots. Uncle called Rafay to the cage so he ran to the cage. Uncle told that in his lab, there is a remote in the third shelf. Press the button of the remote and a big robot named Woop will appear. Rafay used the teleporting machine and went to his uncle’s lab. He took the remote and brought it to the lab. Rafay pressed the button and a Woop appeared. Woop was so big that Alien Force’s robots were looking like a rat in front of him. Woop and the aliens used their special power and all the robots were destroyed. Everyone was happy. Hoop opened the cage and uncle was free. Now Rafay’s mission was only to find the creator of Alien Force and talk him or her about these kind aliens.
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Comments 17
manal Be sure to......... Manal
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
manal And be sure to write it! Manal
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
manal You'd better.....! Manal
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
fatima Rafay is a brave boy!! nice story! Fatima
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
Saad Ok I will write the part today. Saad
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
Omer If rafay can't destroy alians I will destroy them Omer
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
manal What do you mean you will do something?write part 3.......thats what you will do!!! Manal
Apr 2nd 2013
 
 
Saad Ummm. I will do something. Saad
Apr 2nd 2013
 
 
manal That is sooooo far away!!!!!! Manal
Apr 1st 2013
 
 
manal April 20!! so far away please write it know this part was amazing.........:) Manal
Apr 1st 2013
 
 
Sajeel GOOD STORY Sajeel
Mar 31st 2013
 
 
Soha Am waiting... Publish next part soon. This one was awesome:) Soha
Mar 31st 2013
 
 
Saad Part 3 will be written in April 20 so get ready! Saad
Mar 31st 2013
 
 
Saad Thanx kumail Saad
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
manal Part 2 is even better than part!! please write part 3 and complete rafay's mission! i am waiting to read it SAAD:P Manal
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
manal Wow!!such an awesome story Manal
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
Jasrah Wwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo saad what a story man by your best friend kumail Jasrah
Mar 30th 2013
 
 

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