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Gullasht Feyrozai
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Ant In The Castle
Published On Mar 24th 2013
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March 2013
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Once upon a time there was a happy day. There was a Castle in which a Boo lived. Boo have some puffs. Puff has sweet smell.
An Ant near the Castle smell the puff and want to ate it, and the ant went in the Castle and said the Boo that, "I want to eat some puff, I smell it. Can you give me some puffs?" the Boo said "No, i can’t give you the puff". And Boo shows scaring movements that the Ant scares from the Boo, and she went out from the Castle.
When the Ant come out from the Castle She saw a cloud in which a beautiful Bird was set. The Ant asked the Bird that, "Can you smell some puffs?" the Bird said "No, and you will be run away from here."
The Ant goes from here and after some time. She reached near a nest. The Ant hears some voice like this "anyone can saw my eggs". The Ant recognized the voice that it was the voice of the precious Bird. Then the Bird saw the Ant and said that, "oh, I am really sorry. Please! Can you tell me something?" The Ant said '' yes, i tell". Then she tells that, "my eggs has lost. Can you see?"."Ya Ya Ya! I see yours eggs was in the nest". The bird said, "thank you. I want to give you something".
And suddenly The Ant sleep and she saw a dream in which she was in the world of puffs. And when she touches the puffs to eat, her eyes was open. And she was in wander because she was in the house of Bee. Then a Bee came in the house and said "you help the bird so, it is your gift that you can eat some puffs with honey”. The Ant said "ohhhhhhhh! Thank you". And she eats the puff. So, her dream was not a dream it is real.
Moral "Do good, Have good"
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Comments 149
aiza Many mistakes not its a good try Aiza
Dec 25th 2016
 
 
zarmala YOU'VE GOT TO IMPROVE UR GRAMMER BUT NICE MORAL. Zarmala
Oct 28th 2014
 
 
shehram Man grammar mistakes but nyc story. U have a problem with the tenses in the story read over it again u will find out. Never mind. awesome story!! Shehram
Sep 12th 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 2nd 2014
 
 
yamna Oh!!!!!!! thats great, i know its amazing celebrating bakra eid in pakistan, we were there last year, it was awesome,but here its ok u know!!! no couzins and aunts and all my frnd were at different places anyways its amazing that u enjoyed!!!!!! where is my bbq???huh? Yamna
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AoA Khair mibarak thankzzz you remember me in ur celebration I m too busy in eating bar-B-q ha ha ha happy bar-b-q EID MAY ALLAH EXCEPT OUR BAKRA SACRIFIES (aMeen)!....,,,,,,,,,,, Dear Yamna so cute too you Gullasht
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AoA Khair mibarak thankzzz you remember me in ur celebration I m too busy in eating bar-B-q ha ha ha happy bar-b-q EID MAY ALLAH EXCEPT OUR BAKRA SACRIFIES (aMeen)!....,,,,,,,,,,, Dear Yamna so cute too you Gullasht
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
yamna Eid mubarak!!!! Yamna
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
yamna That's true!!!! again, she had CIA support Yamna
Sep 15th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Yamna Dear!!.. If she was from Swat then how she published her book in America ????????? And I understand ur prob!!.. Gullasht
Sep 14th 2013
 
 
yamna W.s,Wait she was from swat and she was not the agent it was her dad!! i am not trying to defend her!! and you know why she is projected?? cuz they can prove that Pakistani are so brutal that they don't let their innocent children study!(the way she wears her duppata,or she could just wear a scarf) the reason why i wrote that poem was i understood that late! you know or maybe not that our circle is all different nationalities so that they were trying to make us feel guilty(in school) especially Indians, Egyptians & British, so i kinnda felt very bad about it!! and wrote that, and i dun get hurt by all this, i might not live in Pakistan, but i am very loyal to it!!! And One more thing, she did get hurt, but not on head, (again im not supporting her), and one more thing thank u so much for all this, if u have more stuff about it u can send it to me on (yamnaahmed98lh@gmail.com) and ya Dr. afia is my hero!!!! hope you keep commenting on my stuff!!! thanks! allahafiz! Yamna
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht how many marks u got in matrix and plz tell me ur monster name i want to be ur frnd(its a request from me so plz think about it) Mubashra
Aug 2nd 2013
 
 
Marwa Excellent, Gullasht that's an awesome story and congratulations for winning on it, it truly deserves to win . My story has even went for approval since a month I think . I wanted to ask you that when do we get to know about the winners and what did you do get in the gift? To be really honest it was a superb story . :) :P :P :_ Marwa
Jul 29th 2013
 
 
Gullasht O.k Maryam now I busy I only reply for your that you are said that I don't tell you it I inshallah tell you at Friday o.k Gullasht
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A...!! Gullast Janab..!! are u angry at me;( ;0....??? Izza
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Thanks a lot! i need methods to send my stuff!!Did u understand?? Syeda Maryam
Jul 23rd 2013
 
 
Gullasht WalaikumasSalam!!......... Sweeto0O well, Maryam tell me your stuff posting method then, Insa'allah I will solve your prob!... If I understand it Gullasht
Jul 22nd 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Assalamualaikum Dr Gullasht! I want to ask that how do u send ur stuff?? I tried sending through "ADD UR PAGE" but it doesnt go for approval!! Say me two or three ways how to send???? Pls guide me i have joined here 1 month ago!! Syeda Maryam
Jul 21st 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht plz tell me ur moshi monster name so i can snd u a frnd request Mubashra
Jul 20th 2013
 
 
Izza Ummm....;)..m@sh-ALLAH.!!...nice intro....!!! Well...u can read ^ABOUT ME^ in my screen 2 kn0w ab0ut me...;)...H0w is ur ramdan g0ing yar? Izza
Jul 15th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Izza !!.... i m recently cleared my matrix w8 A grade and i m 15 hmmmmm fav sub is bio, fav color purple and i m a found of read books and of cooking and for studing and Yeah!!... a thing i m 4rm balochistan board Gullasht
Jul 13th 2013
 
 
Izza W.Salaam..!! Gullasht...tell me about ur grade? ur age? ur favourites? n0w i think it'll be a bit eaxy 4 u to introduxe urxelf 2 me..;) Izza
Jul 12th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AoA thank you Mubashra !!..... Gullasht
Jul 12th 2013
 
 
mubashra GULLASHT AND MY OTHER FRNDZ RAMADAN MUBARAK TO ALL OF U Mubashra
Jul 12th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Izza how i introduce myself to you?? plz !!!.... eXplain and thnkz Affiafah Gullasht
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yeah! mubushra mishi monster is a safe website for kids Gullasht
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
afifah Ramadan Mubarak...:) hope you will earn a lot of blessings in this holy month. Afifah
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A..!!! Gull@sht...as far as (awp) is c0ncerned...u ppl write (ap) in r0man...but i like writin' (ap) as (awp)...:0..:)..hey, Jzakill@h 4 ur compliment'x........i think i d0n't deserve thexe wordx but ur appr0ach & ur thoughtx are t0o c0ol da8 i seem nice 2 u...thatx all...& i'd b pleaxed if u introduce urxelf 2 me pleaxe...:-$...Tc Jz@k!ll@ah..!! ;) Izza
Jul 10th 2013
 
 
mubashra Tnxxxxxxxx gullasht for liking my stuff please tell that moshi monster is a safe website for children or not? Mubashra
Jul 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA izza what is awp? Gullasht
Jul 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Waleikum AlleSalam @IzZa!!......... i m not angry w8 you yar but i can't understand your coment that you sAId that why you complain me of the boyzZ?? but in your story the difrence you coment me that if you have aNY !!............ prob!!.... soO, tell me thats why i tell you about them well, forget them they are soO, ummanners and illetraite.IzzA you are soO, sweet and i never want to angree on you becuze you always treat me like my siS and are soO, nice young lady and you are soO, islamic mind and when i saw your coment w8 A0A i m impress 4rm you and then i always write AOA in my every comment in Vshine o.K then, Allah HafiZzz!.... plz, rply me Dear Gullasht
Jul 9th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A........!! Gullasht...?? yar awp muj se narax ho qia?? :( ;(... Izza
Jul 8th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA FIRSt affifah tell the reason complete for which you thankz me (i help you in complaining and approving your stuff) o.k its not good way to say thankz and moshi monster is a website for kids Gullasht
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
afifah What is moshi?? Afifah
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht and my other friends my story and poem get approved so please comment Mubashra
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yes Laiba I have moshi monster Id but Dear now-a-days I can't use it well my name in moshi monster is gullasht and cinderellakhan12345 Gullasht
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Laibah Gullasht yes my moshi owner name is "Laibahpinky" and if you have a moshi pls tell me whats your owner name because i would like to add you as a friend Laibah
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Izza A0A...Gullasht Jee...!! reply me on my story "The Difference">...em anxiously waitin' 4 dude...:-( Izza
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
afifah Not a problem doctor:) happy now? yeah and listen gullast my story is approved finally, i'm very happy and for some reason wanna thank you too:) Afifah
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
eesha Hey Congratzzzz Dr :p Eesha
Jun 26th 2013
 
 
saad Very nice Saad
Jun 26th 2013
 
 
Gullasht First you say that I written Allah w8 small a then you say insa ' Allah first you are happy Yar becuz I m use Islamic words in Vshine Yar you are right but plz next time said me anything in cutoo00 way Gullasht
Jun 25th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey gullast sorry but you wrote 'inssa allah' and that's not the right way to write it, ('INSHA ALLAH' these are the right spellings) and you are very cool so please don't mind:) Afifah
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
Gullasht O.k affifah well, can you tell me where i wright w8 small a?!.....????? Gullasht
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Gullasht Why not? Gullasht
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
afifah Hey gullast please never use small 'A' for Allah, okay?? Afifah
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht and my other friends please comment on my drawing''rock vshine'' Mubashra
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
wafa AoA!!! You have done now matric.You are added in my friends.Just Talk Wafa
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thankz mubashra,saad and Areeba Gullasht
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
saad Very nice Saad
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Areeba AOA ! Hey doctor your story is really really nice, with a great moral. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Areeba
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht mujhe tm itne psand ho k mera dil krta hai k mein har waqt tm se batan krte rahon Mubashra
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
mubashra Thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.I think this name is better ''i made in my needlework exhibition'' Mubashra
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Gullasht "I made in my needlework exhibition" it is a name for the doll Dear saw your comment w8 concentrate Inssa'allah you will reconized some interesting nemes in it. Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Dear!....... Mubashra i think "Doll of Threads" OR "Doll made by Needle work" sOo, now what you said Dear well i think you should put any name which i suggest or i will send you more names becuz yaR!...... you made your doll by needle work soO, i think you put these to make more interest people towards here Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thankyou Dear Affifah Gullasht
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullasht,i am going add a picture on vshine and i can't suggest a name for it.it's a doll made of needlework which i made in my needlework exhibition.please suggest a name for it.i will be grateful to u Mubashra
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
afifah Oh thanks again, now i'm waiting and thank you too minahil:) Afifah
Jun 18th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Dear!...... Affifah...... I contacted vshine office as there are no stories and poems and other things at “MY Page” for a long time. The said that many stories and poems are in pending and would be published in two ot three days. They also made me to write this comment on their behalf and said that plaease don’t send things twice or again and again. In this way things are piled up and approving becomes more difficult. Hope you all people would wait for some time. Gullasht
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA THANKS Eisha Gullasht
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Minahil AOA AFIFAH You can try again ,My story also didn't published within a week when i tried once again it was approved after three more days..Try try try but dont cry Minahil
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
afifah Errr okay thanks:), i will do both of these things and then let's see what happens. nice of you yar...:>:) Afifah
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
eisha Congratulations Girl! Keep up the good work! Eisha
Jun 16th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Affifah I think you go on privacy policy and read the conditions in which stories are not publish I think it will help you!... May be Gullasht
Jun 16th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA I have the same problem which is now w8 you and I really don't the reason of it Dear!....... Well I think you should complain to vshine mail Gullasht
Jun 16th 2013
 
 
afifah Ah actually, i added a story on vshine 't12 days ago but it's not approved yet and i am so much worried about it and i don't want it to be wasted. it was my hard effort. can you please tell me what should i do?? Afifah
Jun 15th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA why not? Dear Affifah tell me your problem!...... Gullasht
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey Dr. can you help me out of something? Afifah
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Nice story! Ayesha
Jun 14th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thank zzz Wafa Gullasht
Jun 13th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA no yaR!..... but, my family and me come to cantt atleast a week in Bolan Gullasht
Jun 10th 2013
 
 
wafa REALLY great!You got gift hamper and a degree Wafa
Jun 10th 2013
 
 
Minahil I thought you were saying light is not present so I got scared >well,whatever thank ou 4 information>DO you live in the cantt too? Minahil
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA minahil can i ask!???? why you said that i make you scares???!????>>>> Gullasht
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA yeAH! SAMREEN you are right Gullasht
Jun 8th 2013
 
 
Minahil Don't scare me for cumin' to Quetta my father is in Air Force but we are going for a course in Army so we will be living in cantt...I wish the electricity situation gets better Minahil
Jun 6th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AoA minahil Jee Allah Ka lak lak Suker hai k Bhai !....... Filhal to Karachi aur Lahore chad Ka nazara pash kar rahe Allah Ka lak lak bar Suker hai Yahan light be hai aur Yahan Ka muhul be Acha hai Karachi Ki tarha nai hai k larka ya Larki FB per chatting Ki Waja se noksan attahe (jo noksan attate hai aunki percentage Boht kem hai) O.k wese app Jee can't main aye gee Jahan karAchi Jesa Muhal hai Gullasht
Jun 3rd 2013
 
 
Minahil I have also told you that it is a gift deserving and a wonderful try so you shouldn't take the negative part on heart and instead you should pay heed to the positive part and write such stories which would force me to wrtite AWESOME! I hope yopu got the point-------------------------and actually for me going to Quetta is no less than going to the moon!!!!!!!!!!!!! Minahil
Jun 3rd 2013
 
 
Samreen Dear doctor, full form of AOA is assalamoalaikum am i right or not? Samreen
Jun 2nd 2013
 
 
Arwa Nice Arwa
Jun 2nd 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thank you Affifah and mubashra!...... Gullasht
Jun 2nd 2013
 
 
mubashra I said that you are a superb girl becoz you are a genius and your all stories were awesom Mubashra
Jun 1st 2013
 
 
afifah Nice story, doctor :-) Afifah
Jun 1st 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thank you hanzala and semreem Dear!...... Gullasht
May 31st 2013
 
 
Samreen Sooooooo,nice story Samreen
May 31st 2013
 
 
hanzala Good!! Hanzala
May 30th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA why oohhhhhhh! Wafa Can I ask you? Gullasht
May 30th 2013
 
 
wafa Excellent work you are the winner ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh!! Wafa
May 29th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA minahil if my story contain tOo much grammer mistake soO, it does not approve and i can't win o.K and yeah! i live in quetta Gullasht
May 28th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA FIRST OF all you written that you can't belive that i cOme in Quetta in this way that you wil be going to MoOn YaR!........ Gullasht
May 28th 2013
 
 
Minahil Hey Dr.Gullasht you won't believe it but it is true that i am coming to Quetta for one whole year,I think you live in Quetta right? Minahil
May 27th 2013
 
 
Minahil Too many grammatical errors BUT a wonderful and a gift deserving try. Minahil
May 27th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA if you don't mind soO, I want ask you a question,that why you said that I m a superb girl plz!!.... Tell me Dear!..... Gullasht
May 25th 2013
 
 
mubashra Really nice story you are a superbbbbbbbbbbbbb girl gllasht Mubashra
May 24th 2013
 
 
dua Hey i have a moshi monsters id if you have send me a request i will exept it my name is zanyfish77 in moshi monsters and plz send me a request in v shine too in v shine my nacc me is dua riaz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.send it Dua
May 23rd 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA as you wish Dear Gullasht
May 16th 2013
 
 
fatimah Aaa....forget it, it was long ago so it doesnt rly matters :PPPP Fatimah
May 15th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thankzzzzzzz!........ dear isbah. Gullasht
May 15th 2013
 
 
isbah Congratulations! on winning Isbah
May 14th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thankzzzzzz !....... soO, wanna frndz. Gullasht
May 14th 2013
 
 
mubashra Why not Mubashra
May 14th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA!...... why not mubashraA ? your wish is complete Ameen becuz i agree w8 you Dear ;) soO, lets frendzzzzzzz. Ooh soOry best friend :0 Gullasht
May 11th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA soO, i think Fatima you can't give full information on your settings i.e cell n0. and adress becuz i also, send my father cell soO, i recivce the in very prob!...... plz tell me?......... Cutey Fatima. Gullasht
May 11th 2013
 
 
mubashra Nice story and i am happy that you send me a friend request.i accept the request and hope that we will become best friends in future. Mubashra
May 10th 2013
 
 
fatimah I did dear Gullasht, but i dont know wats the problem with dem Fatimah
May 10th 2013
 
 
mubashra Gullashat i am so happy that you send me a friend request . i accept your request and hope that we become best friends in future. Mubashra
May 10th 2013
 
 
mubashra Hey Gullasht. Mubashra
May 10th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Fatima it's not my problem well you send this msg on vshine email Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA hiba y ask me about my age? Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thankzzzzzzz mairah Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
fatimah U have receined the GIFTTTT!!!!, this aint fair cuz i was a winner too and i still dint received mine. :(((((((((((((( Fatimah
May 7th 2013
 
 
Hiba How old are you gullasht Hiba
May 7th 2013
 
 
Mairah Awsum story keep it up Mairah
May 6th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA soOry!... Laiba soha is my friend I check it In my friend list Gullasht
May 4th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thanks areeqa plz!! can you tell me what is BTW? and gift is too much awesome and it is stationary things and a letter 4rm Vshine Gullasht
May 3rd 2013
 
 
areeqa Hey gullasht....its an amazing story with a nice moral keep it up! BTW what was ur gift?? Areeqa
May 2nd 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA no soha is not my frnd infact she also don't accept my friend request n if u have any moshi monster id Gullasht
May 2nd 2013
 
 
Laibah Good moral and AMAZING story.You really deserved that winner badge.Are you Soha`s friend ? If you are then please tell me if she will accept my friend request which I sent to her two days ago.I have accepted your friend request. Laibah
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thank you again n welcome!!!!!!!!!............ Gullasht
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
Arouba No prob..!! Arouba
Apr 29th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA thank you mohd and arouba for like n coment on my story Gullasht
Apr 27th 2013
 
 
Arouba Wow, it's very nice! congratz on ur success Arouba
Apr 27th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA Eraj thank you for your answer thankzzzzzz Gullasht
Apr 23rd 2013
 
 
Muhammad Congrats and awesome story!! Muhammad
Apr 21st 2013
 
 
Eraj Gullasht I really don't know how to make mutal friend,because when I send a request to someone and that person adds me,and whenever i go to that persons ID it automatically says to me that i'm her mutal friend. Eraj
Apr 21st 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA hi guys i recivce my gift and the gift is wonderfull n awesome i really like it thankyou vshine for gave me an awesome gift thankzzzzzzzz Gullasht
Apr 19th 2013
 
 
Sana In reply to your comment on my article...hi..yeah i know i was younger that time and i admit i didn't know much. i have re-searched more now and i'm in a higher class. Next time i will get my facts straight. sorry for the inconvenience. Sana
Apr 17th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Thankyou all for apperecaiting my skills thankzzzzzzzzzzzzz Gullasht
Apr 12th 2013
 
 
Irum Hi gullasht baji... i just came to tell u that you've written in ur profile in the about me section that ure very sweet.. so if ur sweet then y did u write on my joke'' tommy and his father'' that my joke is rubbish? please.. i dnt want to disrespect u as an elder gullasht baji , but, please dnt write this kind of comment on my page again.. thank you.. =D Irum
Apr 8th 2013
 
 
Linda Wowhohoooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Linda
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
safia Good Story Safia
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
fatima Congratzzzzz!!! Fatima
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra Hi rabita i have also accept your request!!! :) Nimra
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey gullasht you won...i am so happy 4 u....keep it up Hiba
Apr 3rd 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood So nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maarij Maqsood
Apr 2nd 2013
 
 
Rabita Exellent:) Rabita
Apr 2nd 2013
 
 
aasiya Shown the moral beautifully but as a freind i wud say that this story contains many grammatical mistakes! Aasiya
Apr 2nd 2013
 
 
raveeha There were many grammatical mistakes but nyc:) Raveeha
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
Nimra Okkkk gullasht i have also accept your request!!! :) Nimra
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
Fatima Nice.................................................... Fatima
Mar 28th 2013
 
 
Izza A0A...!!! Gullasht,,, how are u...??? firxt f all,,,, welc0me t0 VSHINE (multilingual children portal) ..........I appreciate ur writing skillx......!! keep them up....! thumbs up 4 u giRl..........!!! keep doin'.....bye!! Izza
Mar 28th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Girl and plz you like my story Gullasht
Mar 28th 2013
 
 
Elsa Excellent :) Elsa
Mar 28th 2013
 
 
Nimra R u a girl or boy??? Nimra
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
Hiba Thankyou 4 liking my stuff gullasht,,,keep on liking... Hiba
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
HairBeyar It is very good writter Hairbeyar
Mar 26th 2013
 
 
Nadeem Nice attempt with good moral Nadeem
Mar 26th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Nyc Gullasht
Mar 26th 2013
 
 
Sidra GOOD MORAL Sidra
Mar 25th 2013
 
 

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