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Momina Bhatty
Momina Bhatty
Hurlingham And Chelsea Secondary School
A True Horror Story
Published On Mar 19th 2013
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True story, don't laugh. One day, me and my elder cousins and my younger sister, Eman, were home alone in my house, at Gujranwala. We were sipping coffee, quite bored, and half-heartedly watching a movie. Suddenly, Sana, the eldest of the present cousins, (she is now gonna be 18 years old this year in July, InshALLAH) jumped up and said, "Let's call a jinn!!!" Including Sana, there were five of us in all, Talha, going to be 16 years old in July this year InshALLAH, Ibrahim, going to be 15 this year InshALLAH, and me and my younger sister, going on 12 and 11 this year in October and December this year InshALLAH. So we agreed to it, and went up to my room to do it.
First of all, we took one of my lamps, with princess designs on it and set it in the middle of the room. And, no, we did NOT take it cause of the princess designs, we took it because of its adjustable light, which could be done thanks to a knob on the top. Then, we drew the curtains and sat down in a circle around the lamp (yes, it was on the lowest, and yes, the lights were off) while holding hands. Then Ibrahim said, "So. . . who knows how to actually call the jinn. . . cause I don't.'' We looked at each other. Uh-oh. Didn't think of that one.  Then Talha jumped up. "Oh, oh, I do! I do!" Eman rolled her eyes. "Why didn't you say so, dummy?" Talha ignored her and told us what to say.
We started the chant and the curtains and windows flew open, the wind blew in. We tried to ignore this and continued our chant. Suddenly, Sana asked, "Oh, jinn, are you there?" Probably in answer, a hundred-rupee-note flew out of Sana's pocket and we all screamed and ran downstairs. The grown-ups had come home from the dinner they were attending, and asked us `What the heck is wrong
TO BE CONTINUED . . .
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Comments 44
pretty It was amazing Pretty
Aug 9th 2016
 
 
Irza OMG!!!! MUST BE EXCITING AND SCARY AT THE SAME TIME WOW!!!! WHAT HAPPENED! Irza
Aug 1st 2016
 
 
qurratul It's very SCaRy.........!!!!I'm waiting and praying for your next part to publish sooooooooooooooooon........................May you be get succeed...!!! Dont be dishearted...Insha'Allah...your next part will be published soon...Don't loose hope...Do Persistance..... Qurratul
May 21st 2016
 
 
Saqifa Like it! Saqifa
Nov 20th 2015
 
 
jasmine My favourite horror show is supernatural Jasmine
Aug 15th 2015
 
 
Wafa Love it Wafa
Jan 20th 2015
 
 
fizzah Not really very scary! we should not play games like these. and can you tell me that why you guys alone at home. its a lie. Fizzah
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Soha Ohh mannnnn! Soha
Aug 7th 2014
 
 
Momina Guys i sent the 2nd part to vshine 5 times and no one published it :( i tried today as well :P maybe it will get published and to those who dont believe it's a true story: believe what you want but i know what happened to me Momina
Aug 3rd 2014
 
 
Tooba Not a true story t me Tooba
Apr 11th 2014
 
 
Sara Scary.but aren't you scared. and what did you chant that the ghost really arrived.i will send u a friend request please accept it.and do publish the second part. Sara
Mar 11th 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice plzzzzzzzzzz publish the next part Tooba
Dec 26th 2013
 
 
Samia It dosent look like a reall story not bcz i think it can be.weren't u scared Samia
Nov 25th 2013
 
 
Soha Try to publish the next part once again and save it in the comp as well. Try to send it several times. Maybe it'll get published. Soha
Nov 12th 2013
 
 
Tasneem I think its gonna be intrusting when it goes on...... publish the next part plzzzzz Tasneem
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
Momina Really, really sorry, guys!!!! I was busy as I just moved to London, I'm sure I already sent the second part to Vshine, hope they'll publish it soon!!! Momina
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
Affan Send next part........ Affan
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Taha Publish the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Taha
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
Soha Momina......................... WHERE ARE U???????????????????????????????? Soha
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Tick tock.....waiting....... Gul Noor
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Soha Momina still waiting...........! Now you're in England?? Soha
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Momina Thankx every1!!!!! I have now moved from Pakistan to England!!!!!!!! Thnx again, RAMADAN MUBARIK nxt prt soon Momina
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
FIZZA HEY MOMINA!!! I AM A NEW GIRL HEY!!! I WANT TO ASK YOU THAT ITS YOUR REAL PICTURE OR NOT , I WANT TO ADD YOU PLEASE SEND ME A FRIEND REQUEST AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUBLISH NEXT PART. IT WAS A SCARY MOMENT. Fizza
Jul 25th 2013
 
 
zahra Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz publish next part Zahra
Jul 20th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AsSalam.0.Alekuim!!... "RAMADAN MUBARAK" Dear @MOmina may Allah give you courage you collect too much NAKIYA and May Allah Bless you in this mouth (AMEEN) keep remember me in your's prays. Gullasht
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA dear momina is your real pic? and plz !. publish the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZz! Gullasht
May 14th 2013
 
 
Soha I visited ur site scientist sadiya, It was really nice.. Your aim is to become a scientist right?? Soha
May 12th 2013
 
 
Soha Oh Sad.. :(, Could understand ur feelings! Soha
May 12th 2013
 
 
Momina Inconvenience is that i cannot continue my blog for my account has been blocked!!! :( Momina
May 4th 2013
 
 
Momina Sorry for the wait guys, but my net blew nd i couldnt publish nxt part @Soha we wanted fun so thats why we did it Momina
May 4th 2013
 
 
Andlib Hmmmm, nice one Andlib
Apr 30th 2013
 
 
 Sadia NiCe i have visited your blog it was Nice and plz visit my site too spiceyscience.wix.com/science Sadia
Apr 23rd 2013
 
 
Soha Momina, I visited yor blog! It was splendrific! Soha
Apr 14th 2013
 
 
Soha Come On!!!!!!!! MOMINA, WHERE ARE U??? Publish next part plzzzzz. Soha
Apr 13th 2013
 
 
Gullasht I love horro things and al these are your hobbies Gullasht
Apr 12th 2013
 
 
Soha When will u publish next part!!PLz tell! Soha
Apr 11th 2013
 
 
isbah Its 2 late u havent published the next part! i am waiting Isbah
Mar 28th 2013
 
 
Soha When will u publish next part? Soha
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
Eraj Its really a scary story.Please published the next part.plzzzzzzz.... Eraj
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
Wajeeha Amazing!! m waitin.... Wajeeha
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
Soha What kind of chant?Well if I were you, I'd have never agree to Sana even if she's the eldest.I am not interested in calling a Genie(english word for jinn) or seeing it nor I am scared of them.I do agree that they exist but no need to be worried.Allah is always with us Who's creator of them. Soha
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
rabia THAT WAS AMAZING!please publish next part sooon Rabia
Mar 21st 2013
 
 
isbah Momina gr8! and your dp is pretty 2! Isbah
Mar 20th 2013
 
 
Soha OH SCARY!! Publish next part soon. Am very curios.....! Soha
Mar 20th 2013
 
 

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