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Hiba Saad
Hiba Saad
Jaffar Public School
Thoughts Infinite
Published On Mar 19th 2013
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“You look very innocent in your new uniform!” mum commented on Caroline’s uniform which she had just worn and was staring at herself in a mirror trying to find out faults.
 “Mum!  I look like a fourth grader, this is not very appealing and the contrast of blue and white is making me look like a broken piece of sky” she complained. Since she had heard news that her family was shifting to Scotland she was very impulsive and was ready to find faults in one thing or the other.
Although, Caroline lived in Europe before, and only went to Malaysia for three years, she had started hating Europe, her home land, only because of terrorism, corruption and the increasing rate of crimes there. She had heard a lot of unappealing stories about how life in Europe was frustrating and full of dangers and frequent ups and downs.
Apart from this, she had a problem with the schooling system as it was going to admit her without taking a preliminary test and her first terminal examination marks were going to be the benchmark for the belated decision made by the school management.
 “Listen carefully Carol, we are admitting you in a good school, so stop frowning and  show me your teeth  like a good girl.” Her mother sternly ordered and Caroline had no choice, rather than smiling with tears in her eyes.

The next day, it was very difficult for her to keep her temper. She badly wanted to wear her hair open like she used to do in Malaysia but it was against the rules and regulations of her school to be….   
This story is word to word written by me....I will Insha Allah upload the next part quickly as you must be having an urge to read what happened to Caroline and how she managed stuff!!!   
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Comments 128
hibba Lots of hibbas here i love this:) Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Marwa A boy won from my house ! Marwa
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Hiba Best of luck for ur results...what was it Hiba
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Marwa "Alice Hiba " is your account ? right ? Marwa
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Marwa I am soo nervous Hiba Baji, on Monday there are the results of HOUSE ELECTIONS ! Marwa
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Azka She says i am as aaaaaammmmmmmm .......ya arooba she's thats why a rank holder....masha allah..... Azka
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Arooba Good teacher hiba Arooba
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba First of all...onely nahi hota kuch.....corrr 'only' and likeing is....'liking' Hiba
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Taibah I am not reading onely i am likeing Taibah
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Marwa Yes and she says energy with such a long enerrrrrrrrrrrrr Marwa
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Hiba I AGREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Azka Yes miss Zubaida repeats every thing at least thrice Azka
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Hiba Who is ur favourite teacher marwa???and whom do u hate the most also do giv me minute to minute update of house elections....>) Hiba
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
Hiba Iraj.........another of ur jokes Hiba
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
Marwa Oh, so is she nice and does she teach nice ? Marwa
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey hey...that's gr8 ...Meri bhi ms zubaida theen Hiba
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Iraj How silly Iraj
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Marwa Sorry Hiba my cousin's account was open and I didn't knew so I wrote a comment. Sorry :P :P: P Marwa
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Hajra Yes I did like 5 . My class teacher is Miss Zubaida Yousuf . I do like all the teachers but it is like i feel totally different . You know what I mean, like when you are promoted to am other class. And ya the time has also been increased . I must say I like 5 95% . Hajra
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Iraj Shabassssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh ...lots of love Iraj
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Hiba I think all of u are very busy with studies...where are alll the daily users??? my freinds i am missing u guys desperately...waiting for ur responses Hiba
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Hiba So guys now that all ur schools r open...how r they.....ur new teachers...lets disscuss our first day and exiting news here...... marwa do u lyk5 ...who is ur class teacher??? and whom do u lyk the best or hate Hiba
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
Hiba Forgot ttttooooooooooo Hiba
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
Marwa ??????????????????????????? Marwa
Aug 16th 2013
 
 
Marwa Didn't you commented on it ? Marwa
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Hiba Read it its goooooooody gooood Hiba
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Marwa Hiba after reading this comment , now listen to me . Go to Fatimah Latif's screen the one who is our friend. Then go in her friends list and go on the screen of Nimra Baloch and go on her poem ' The Book' . It's not only for Hiba all of our friends can go and see what we have then on that. :P Hope you read , like and comment on it. :P :P :P :) :} If you don't understand then please tell me ! Marwa
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ohh acha acha so thats really gudd mawara.. :) :D and khair mubarak 2 u as well..!! :)) u can tell me like that whtz ur age? in which skul do u read? where do u live? in which class u study? and who's ur bst friend? :))) khair mubarak hiba.. :) oh acha acha.. Nimra
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
Hiba I forgot where did i saved it but still.........ill do it preety sooon in 1 piece Hiba
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba Eid mubarak 2 u alll..... Hiba
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey eid mubarak ...yeah dun with the shopping and school is frm 16th Hiba
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Marwa Thank's and Khair Mubarak and even Eid Mubarak to all my beloved friends ! BTW I want to be your best friend Nimra! What can I tell You about Me . Huh ? :P :D :_D Marwa
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Nimra And mawra if u want 2 be my gud or bst friend than u can tell me sumthing about u..!!! :)) and eid mubarak 2 u as well.. :) Nimra
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Nimra Heyya hiba and all my other friendxx advanced happy eid mubarak 2 u people from me i mean NiMrA..!! :) hope this eid will bring joy and happiness for u people..!! :)) may u all enjoy this eid alot....!!!!! :))) Nimra
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Marwa Waiting for the next part. Hiba plz ask Azka that in which section is she ? Reply soon ! Tell her that I am in section D . Tell me after she tells you ! :P Marwa
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ohh acha acha.. waise tumhari school knsi date say khul rahin hain? and tumhari eid ki shopping hogai hiba?? :) Nimra
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I am still waiting for the next part............................ Khadijah
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba Want likes on my drawings ...Environment and My rights is freedom Hiba
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba Good nimra...but getting bored ...wish the school to open early Hiba
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Nimra Acha hiba ye batao tumhari vacations kaisi jarahi hain? :) Nimra
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra Acha hiba ye batao tumhari vacations kaisi jarahi hain? :) Nimra
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
Marwa :) So many comments. I must say that's magic Marwa
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
Hiba Ohhhhhhhhhhhh Hiba
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
Nimra Hiba tumey meri comment ka reply nahi kia?? Nimra
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Marwa She is not my cousin she is my neighbour's cousin . How would I know about here. By the way can you chat right now ? Marwa
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Thankyou all as ur comments are always too appreciating Hiba
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Cngrats yaar already 100 freinds do u make them every day... Hiba
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Nimra Yeah hoora u r true.. :) yes yes sure i will not be ur good friend but ur best friend for ever..!!! :)) okay?? now happy? :) love u hoora my friend.. :))) waise can u tell me something about u if u dont mind?? :) Nimra
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Hoora Hey Hiba plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz saaray parts bhejo I'm waiting plzz be good frnds whith me hiba and nimra as I'm hiba's cousin live in same house aur tum bhaia sey type karwalo story as I'm really waiting for the rest of the story as it is very good I heard it from you. plzzzzzzzzz post the next part and Hiba for you I wrote tooooo looong comment are you happy now that I liked and comment and by the way notice my name and donot disclose it pllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz its my rqst to you and nimra plz be good frnds with me as I know your kind hearted by reading all of your comments on rafia's JOKES . It was difficult to read all of 128 comments but I read and maked out that your are good becuase some people are good but frm outside but some of them are also from inside Hoora
Jul 29th 2013
 
 
Azka Wow.... Azka
Jul 29th 2013
 
 
Nimra Btw hiba tum mujhe meri pic change krney ka kiun bol rahi ho? achi nahi hai kia?? or bhai mein to srif ik baat krahi thi tum to serious he hogai..!! :/ or han bhai mein ney tumhen mazak karney sai rokha thori naa hai..!! karo mazak magar mazak karna hai to koi or mazak karo.. bahala ye be koi mazak hota hai kia?? :/ Nimra
Jul 28th 2013
 
 
Hiba Aray yar so update it in ur id..in which section is soha ur csin do ask her...and others if she knows Hiba
Jul 26th 2013
 
 
Marwa Yep im the one JPS Marwa
Jul 25th 2013
 
 
Hiba Are u marwa of jafar public school...if i can guess it right Hiba
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
Hiba Thanx marwa but guess what i forgot were i saved the rest of the story.....i hav to typ it again which is very difficult Hiba
Jul 24th 2013
 
 
Marwa Aoa Hiba I must say that's an awesome story and i would certainly wait for the next part and i am certainly saying that you are a genius girl Marwa
Jul 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Nimra pic change karo......... Hiba
Jul 21st 2013
 
 
Hiba To phir kyoon poocha....or tumhe kaisay pata itna sa bhi mazak nahi kar saki :( Hiba
Jul 21st 2013
 
 
Nimra Oh acha to phir tumne jhoot kiun bola k u live at defence..? khair choro waise be mujhe pata tha k u donot live at defence..!!! :) Nimra
Jul 20th 2013
 
 
Hiba Haan she was at my place i also liv near sadabahar.... Hiba
Jul 18th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oye main mamm nai hun and khair mubarak..!!! :) haan yar wo maine galti se cousin likh dia tha jb k mujhe dost likhna tha..!!! i was very nervous thats why i didnt told u this..!!! and waise nuvaira tumhen kahan mili..? and actually ayesha is my good friend we read quran in same madarsa..!! :) or wo meri neighbour ka madarsa hai..!!! Nimra
Jul 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Ramadhan mubarak to u all toooo.... Hiba
Jul 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Maam nimra ia asked novaira rashid and she told me she is not ur cousin....i was shocked Hiba
Jul 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Pehlay aap apna result bataiya maam Hiba
Jul 17th 2013
 
 
mubashra HIBA RAMADAN MUBARAK.MAY ALLAH GIVE U EVERYTHING U WANT BUT REMEMBER ME ALSO IN UR PRAYERS Mubashra
Jul 12th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ramzan mubarak 2 my all friends... :) Nimra
Jul 10th 2013
 
 
Nimra Chalo hiba joke mat maro!!!! main suchi bol rahi hun k main bahadurabad pai rehti hun sadabhar lawan (shadi waley hall ;) :P) ki 2 gali main!!! :P :) yar hiba suchi batao tum kahan rehti ho? Nimra
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Hiba Itne din no reply Hiba
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Hoora Plz Hiba post the second part of the story Hoora
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba I liv in defence...uuuu Hiba
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra ??? Nimra
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra Haha chalo maine to krlia ab tum krlo.. :P ;) :D :) by the way tumhara ghar (home) konse elaaqey (area) main hai..? :) :P Nimra
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Sure...and miss disclose to karain...please Hiba
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Nimra Hahaha.. hiba.. ;) :P :D chalo theek hai ab hum disclose krdetey hain... :) kush?? :P so thatz gud hiba.. :) so wht do u think should we start our friendship..?? :) Nimra
Jun 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Miss hoora ahson welcome to vshyn....tahoora now come on meri saari stories lyk karooo...oor lambay lambay comments maro....shuroo ho jaooo.... Hiba
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba Yes ofcoarse..by the way...what was urs disclose it first... ;D...nimra please yaar i am getting goosebumps now dear Hiba
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
Nimra ??? Nimra
Jun 29th 2013
 
 
Nimra U welcom yar... :) btw will u be my best friend? actually hiba we donot have positions i mean ranks like 1,2,3 etc we only have percentage and grades... :) what about ur percentage..?? Nimra
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
Hiba Like my poem SO MANY QUESTIONS Hiba
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
Hiba Thankyu so much....waisay what was ur result Hiba
Jun 27th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oky hiba i mean (mahnoor) :) oky hiba thats great ayesha told me that u came first and also u were the captain of blue house thtz great em also in blue house... :) :D and waise maine tumhari story bht pehle he like arli thi.. :))))))) Nimra
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey alll plz like my poem SO MANY QUESTIONS Hiba
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba I am back on my own ....guys now disclose ur results Hiba
Jun 22nd 2013
 
 
Mahnoor Actually i am hiba and i will be using mahnoors..cousin account...she never uses it but no prob we can still chat Mahnoor
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Mahnoor What about u guys?????? Mahnoor
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Mahnoor I stood first....hey hey got 9/9 distinctions plus scrabble champion of jps... Mahnoor
Jun 21st 2013
 
 
Nimra Oye linda ajao no problem... :P or waise main to mazak karahi thi aur maine gullasht ko idher aney se roka ya mana thori kia hai kai main tumhen be rokon?? or main to aise he ik baat karahi thi.. by the way tum mujhe friend request send karoo.... :) Nimra
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Linda Nimra yaha mein be ao mujo roko mera be too result nahi hai Linda
Jun 20th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hey gullasht tum kahan sai beech main agai??? :P result to mera or hiba ka tha.... tumhara be result tha kia gullasht? and hiba maine aisha sai pooch lia wo tumhen janti hai or tum logon ka result 14 june ko tha.... Nimra
Jun 19th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA han han bhai kia result aya ya MQM ki waja se bhotO ne ghayab kar liya hai............... Gullasht
Jun 17th 2013
 
 
Nimra Yar ab jawab be dedo... Nimra
Jun 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hey hiba kia result aya tumhara? yaa phir result cancel..? mqm ki hartal ki waja sai?? ;) :P Nimra
Jun 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra Result kia aya tumhara?? ya phir mqm ki strike ki waja sai result cancel..? :P Nimra
Jun 15th 2013
 
 
Nimra Heyyy hiba i know k sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.... and by the way my result is also on 14 of june and hey guys those who like me and r my close friends i want ur duas.... (fatima,elsa,amna,areeqa,hiba,sehar) e.t.c all of u i wnat ur duas plzz pray for me i will be very thank ful 2 u people..... and hiba sure as u r my close and best friend on vshine first i will pray for u.... but u will also pray for me.... and now u r my bestest friend in the world!!! :) Nimra
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba Khadijah i forgot were i saved it ... but dont worry exams are over know hav paper review tomorrow and result on 14 june ....need ur duas....if my result will be good maybe i will typ it all over again...hahahah Hiba
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba Itne beesabri..thora intezar to karo....sabr ka phal meetha Hiba
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba About myself...yaar about me mey parh lo buhut likha hai,,,,by the way...i am hiba saad and also am in 6 jaffar public school...kind of good at studies and arts...and luv to write stories...we are 4 siblings including me and i am the eldest Hiba
Jun 5th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I am still waiting for the next part............................ Khadijah
Jun 4th 2013
 
 
Nimra Reply to krdo!!! reply to kia nai mere msg ka abi se friend banna hai!!!! donot mind i am juxx joking!!!! Nimra
Jun 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra Em nimra hanif of progresive public school (P.P.S) and em of 11 and in grade 6 and i have like your story... by the way ca u tell me sum thing about u... and we r now gud friends but in future we will be best friends!!! :) ;) Nimra
May 31st 2013
 
 
Nimra Know i dont remember.... by the way they 3 sisters ayesha,nuvaira and batool... yaa sure.... Nimra
May 31st 2013
 
 
Hiba Nimra now we are frnds so lyk my stories Hiba
May 31st 2013
 
 
Hiba Nimra ew tell me sumthng about u... Hiba
May 31st 2013
 
 
Hiba Thats gr8....infact nuvaira was my childhood remember??? i was the big and normal sized and nuvaira was small alice... gosh we had so much fun...missing out classes and rehersing talking away most of the tym Hiba
May 31st 2013
 
 
Nimra Oohhhh...... :) actually she is mine cousin.... Nimra
May 25th 2013
 
 
Hiba Yeah i know ayesha rashid a good freind of mine.... Hiba
May 24th 2013
 
 
Hiba Ur welcome.... Hiba
May 24th 2013
 
 
mubashra Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for accepting my friend request Mubashra
May 17th 2013
 
 
Sana Vshine ppl wont approvre my stuff either....:( Bt ur stories are very good Sana
May 15th 2013
 
 
Alice I thought u wer 10 or 12 not more than that now i must say you are my aaapi Alice
May 10th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hey hiba do u know any ayesha rashid studying in jaffar public school???? reply me as soon as possible!!!! waiting for your reply!!!! :) from your friend nimra :) Nimra
May 10th 2013
 
 
mubashra Nice and i am still waiting for nxt part.i want to be your friend please accept my friend request. Mubashra
May 10th 2013
 
 
Gullasht AOA can I ask that y you asking about my age? Well I m 15 Gullasht
May 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba Gullasht how oold are u? Hiba
May 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba What should i do???? please tell me how much time it takes for your pages to get approved Hiba
May 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Ur welcome...hey guys my articles, poems and stories are not being approved........i wannna cry Hiba
Apr 25th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Thankyou for appericating my skills Gullasht
Apr 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey freinds ...dont u like it i am not getting enough likes nor comments and i am really very dissapointed... please please like and give me longgggg comments u can do spamming u r allowed only if u like it lots then i wil upload the next one........... waiting for ur sincerity Hiba
Apr 14th 2013
 
 
Hiba Sure gullasht ...but ur screen is not opening as soon as it would open i would like it... Hiba
Mar 31st 2013
 
 
Soha Awesome!!!!!! Soha
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Hi hiba plz you like and comment on my story ant in the castle Gullasht
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I am waiting 4 the next part. :) Khadijah
Mar 26th 2013
 
 
Mariam Nice story............i am waiting 4 the next part:) Mariam
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Thankyou barbie...i am so greatful to u as ur message encouraged me alot and i am not an author but love writing... Hiba
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
Barbie Excellentooooo Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
 
 
Barbie AOA! Hiba do you really write novels? are you an author? moreover, tell me the names of ur previos novels...i hate books but loved ur beginning .when will you update the next one...again i say ur talented as this work is so good it is difficult for me to express how i feel about it. it is surely an honour talking to a future best known author...when you whill become an author i would shout and proudly tell my bros that i was the first one to have a glimpse at her hard work...splendid Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
 
 
marium The story looks amazing from the beginning i cant wait to read the second part .post your story as soon as you can. Marium
Mar 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Hey i wrote a novel and this is how it starts ..if you like it hit like, as i want u to encourage me and comments and likes will be a victory... Hiba
Mar 21st 2013
 
 

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