Once upon a time there was a little girl named Lola. She lived in a small wooden cottage with cherry trees nearby. It was 9 o'clock and Lola was very sleepy. She took Cherry her small stuff toy in her arms and soon she was asleep. She suddenly felt that she was lying on something fluffy and soft. She opened her eyes and Surprise! She was sitting on a fluffy white cloud! Then she suddenly saw herself standing in the air! And then what did she see. She had a glittery pair of wings! Lola was very excited. She flew higher and higher until she saw a golden gate and behind the gate there was a castle made of crystals and jewels! She got even more excited! She flew down, opened the gate and went inside the castle. When she went inside the castle she saw a world of ponies! And not just ponies the ponies even had white silvery wings! She played with the ponies and flew round and round. The ponies even gave her a tour of their world. And they told her that their world's name was “The Magical Rainbow”. But suddenly Lola heard the King of Ponies say: Lola ! Wake up! It's time for school! Quick! Or your teacher will scold you for being late! And it wasn't the king's voice but it was Lola's mother's voice! Oh! It was just a dream Lola said in a sleepy voice. It was a dream but the loveliest dream Lola ever had in her whole life!
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