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Eraj Javed
Eraj Javed
St. Gregory's High School
A Surprise Birthday Party
Published On Mar 21st 2013
Total Comments : 26
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Carlie was a very innocent little girl. She also helps her mother with her chores. Her mother was ver. fond of her. One day a letter arrived to their house, her mother opened it. It was from their grandmother she was inviting her mother for few days to live with her because of her illness. Her mother told Carlie she have to go and live with grandma while Carlie was responsible to handle the house as well as her siblings."I will pack the food and send to you by night, do you think you can handle it"."Of course mom" Carlie said "I can handle it". After mom had gone Carlie sat down on the couch and read the calendar. Suddenly Carlie caught something, 24th may was her mother's birthday and today was 22nd.She decided to give a surprise birthday party to her mother. She discussed the situation with her siblings. They all agreed. They began to raise money so that they could buy the present for their mother. Their father help them to buy things in the shop. At 24th may they cleaned the house very nicely and decorate the house with ribbon and balloons on it. Their father baked a cake and decorated the table everything was finished until the door bell rang. They all closed the lights and suddenly when their mother entered they said "surprise". their mother was very happy and thanked them for a wonderful surprise.
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Comments 26
Aleesha Loved it! Aleesha
Aug 21st 2016
shehram Typical story -_- Shehram
Jun 1st 2015
Eraj Look Atiya I really don't know if any of my story or poem is published on Vshine magazine until or unless I check the magazine for it.All I do is go to the website of and see the magazine from there!!! Eraj
Feb 5th 2014
Atiya Well i don't get monthly v shine i read it in my school library where i get very less v shines to read but i have seen that in some of your poems n stories there are some people who tell u that your story or poem is published.So how can i know that way Atiya
Feb 2nd 2014
Eraj Well you have to check the magazine to see if any of your story is published in the it Atiya! Eraj
Feb 2nd 2014
Atiya Can you please tell me how would i know if my story or something is published in the magazine Atiya
Feb 1st 2014
Eraj Thank you fatima!!!! I am so glad my story was published in vahine magazine!!! Eraj
Nov 6th 2013
Arwa Nyc ap ki ye story magazine ma b ai ha Arwa
Nov 5th 2013
Eraj Thank u! Eraj
Oct 12th 2013
Areesha That was really a nice story.Keep it up ! Areesha
Oct 9th 2013
Anam Great story;;i loved it Anam
Oct 1st 2013
Hajra Nice Hajra
Jul 28th 2013
Eraj Thanks Areeba!! Eraj
Jul 5th 2013
Areeba Good read.. Areeba
May 31st 2013
Gullasht AOA my pleasure Gullasht
May 16th 2013
Eraj Your welcome Gullasht Eraj
Apr 25th 2013
Gullasht AOA thankyou n i thank you in my story Gullasht
Apr 23rd 2013
Eraj Waliakum-as-salaam Gullasht I have written it in your story Eraj
Apr 21st 2013
Gullasht AOA hi eraj can you tell me plz? how 2 make mutaul frnd ? tell me in my story ant in the castle Gullasht
Apr 20th 2013
Eraj You are welcome Eraj
Mar 30th 2013
Irum Thank You!! Irum
Mar 30th 2013
Eraj i really like your riddles ayesha,and thats very good you have done a really hard work!keep it up Eraj
Mar 29th 2013
Irum I have not taken my riddles from the net eraj.. but i have been collecting my riddles for quite a long time, asking people the riddles and writing them down..... so... thats MY hard work!! Irum
Mar 28th 2013
Eraj Thank you Eraj
Mar 27th 2013
tehreem Gud one..... Tehreem
Mar 24th 2013
hijab Nice story:) Hijab
Mar 23rd 2013

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