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Rabita Tariq
Rabita Tariq
Usman Public School
Published On Feb 27th 2013
Total Comments : 25
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"You are messing up all" shouted Elizabeth, "No I am not, I am helping you" cried Jessica. Elizabeth and Jessica were sisters. Jessica was younger than Elizabeth. They lived with their mother and father in Pakistan. They had accepted Islam but had not changed their names yet. All of a sudden mother shouted while watching TV. Elizabeth and Jessica came to look what and they saw a furious earthquake in Islamabad where their father was. Tears rolled down their eyes as they love their father very much. Jessica was more attached to her father so she decided and needy people. She told to Elizabeth and she also agreed with her. But suddenly they saw on TV that her father was helping a small girl and the roof fell on his head, and Blood came out fast. Jessica and Elizabeth cried so much that their eyes were squeezed. They have no relatives as they had came from America when accepted Islam. From that day the moon didn't smile and flowers didn't glow and spring didn't come back...............

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Comments 25
qurratul Good BUT lOOks InComPlEtE! I arRee WiTH MInAhIl!!! Qurratul
Mar 20th 2014
afifah Woah excellent story...:) Afifah
Aug 3rd 2013
Rafia Gooooooooody gooooooood........... Rafia
Jul 13th 2013
Irum No, it's my little sister.... Irum
Jun 1st 2013
Minahil But you tried good my dear. Minahil
May 25th 2013
Minahil Is that you on the profile pic Ayesha? The concept wasn't good Allah helps his true believers and allah sab ko Azmata hai. Minahil
May 13th 2013
Irum I have seen the movie of scarecrow walks at midnight!! You should see it too ! By the way I'm 13 years old! I just turned 13 ..... =D Irum
Mar 25th 2013
Rabita My age is 12 yrs and I have stay out of basement but read yet. have u read scarecrow walks at midnight! Rabita
Mar 19th 2013
Irum By the way whts ur age rabita??? i love all of r.l.stines books! they aare soo gruesome!! Irum
Mar 13th 2013
Irum Yes I do! hav u read stay out of the basement?? do u also read fear street?? Irum
Mar 13th 2013
Rabita Nope! Do you Read Goose bumps! Rabita
Mar 11th 2013
Irum Cool! hav u read happy mothers day lila(sweet valley twins not kids) i dnt read sweet valley kids i read swweet valley twins Irum
Mar 9th 2013
qirat Well ... thatz a gud story at all ... :) Qirat
Mar 6th 2013
Fatima I didnt understand it. looks incomplete Fatima
Mar 5th 2013
Rabita Yes! Its my favorite I read Sweet valley kids and Sweet valley twins also I have three sweet valley twins of my own. 1.Sara's Dad and Sophi's Mom 2.Twins Hollywood 3.If I die before I wake(magna) and I have two of my friend 1. Robbery at the mall 2.The big Party weekend:) Rabita
Mar 5th 2013
Irum Do u read sweet valey rabita? Irum
Mar 4th 2013
Rabita Ayesha what is the problem with you I am not your Enemy and you are breaking my heart continuously. Rabita
Mar 3rd 2013
Rabita Thanks! you have tell me :) Rabita
Mar 2nd 2013
Irum Ok ok, but still its not a good story!!=p Irum
Mar 2nd 2013
mishaal Ayesha!!just if the charaters are the same dosen't mean that the story is the same!!!and what's wrong with having same charaters?!STOP MAKING OTHER PEOPLE FEEL BAD ABOUT THEMSELVES!!!!+.+ Mishaal
Mar 1st 2013
Rabita I know it well since class three and this is not cheating I have only used names not the story pattern! Rabita
Mar 1st 2013
Irum Rabita Tariq, this stories' characters Jessica and Elizabeth are cheated from "sweet valley twins" , which is a favourite of mine !!! PLEASE do not cheat!! Its a bad habit!! Irum
Feb 28th 2013
Rabita Oh thanks! Rabita
Feb 28th 2013
Soha Nice! Soha
Feb 28th 2013
talha I did not like stories but i like this story Talha
Feb 28th 2013

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