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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Case Of Meat Shop
Published On Feb 22nd 2013
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Wayne Weasely's shop "Ze Delicious Meat Shoppe", sold the most delicious meat the people had ever tasted. Other butchers also tried to make the same type of meat but none of them could produce the mouth watering taste like Wayne's meat.
Now Chris Stephen, the famous detective, wanted to know what was the secret behind the delicious taste of the meat. So he disguised himself as an employee for the meat shop, under the name "Ronald Goldfield". Stephen knew that Wayne didn't like to talk to police, so he had to disguise himself.
When he arrived at the shop he said To Wayne Weasely, "Sir I want to work in your meat shop and I want to help you in your work."
Weasely said, "Come on in sonny. By the way what is your name?"
"Ronald Goldfield." said Stephen.
"Alright Ronald, I want you to pack the remaining meat every day in crates and then you should put them in the pantry downstairs." explained Weasely.
"Got it!" said Stephen.
So each night Chris Stephen packed the remaining meat in the crates and kept them in the pantry. He used to see that the queue in the shop was like it was never going to end. But still Stephen could not get to the truth what was in the meat that made it so scrumptious.
Then one night when Stephen went down the pantry to keep the crates, he heard the sound of metal clinging to one another and turned around to see Weasely holding a huge cleaver above his head. He tried to chop off the head of Stephen but the detective knew judo karate and dodged him and in no time he pinned Wayne. He phoned Inspector Jonathon Holmes from the telephone in the shop.
"Inspector I have a cannibal pinned in this shop. Please come quick or I will lose my grip on him" he said.
"I am on my way!" said Jonathon Holmes.
At the police station Stephen explained everything, "I knew that Weasely sold the tastiest meat but I knew there had to be a reason so I disguised myself. Weasely allowed me to work in his shop. I couldn't figure out what the meat contained until today. He used to kill his employees in the shop during the night. Night was the best option Wayne had to make his move, because at that time the queues start to finish. He chopped their meat and in the morning sold the meat."
"But why only human meat?" asked Holmes.
"Because my friend, human meat is the only meat in the world which has a distinctive, delicious taste and no animal meat can match the taste. And once you get to taste it, you can never pull that taste off your tongue."
“Wow Chris you single-handedly caught a person responsible for innocent deaths. I'm totally impressed!” said Holmes.
"It's elementary my dear friend." smiled Chris Stephen.

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Comments 16
Soha Hey, this story was published in the magazine and only good stories are published!!!! I appreciate your writing skills :) Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
 
 
Marwa Sorry ! My cousin wrote this . She didn't knew that you are the same publisher ! Marwa
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Marwa Hey this already published in vshines earlier edition . It's exactly the same with same title Marwa
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Uswah Abdur Rehman i loved the story and also THE CASE OF THE MISSING GIRL great job and keep on sending more gud stories Uswah
Jul 12th 2013
 
 
Minahil Congratulations for this story being published in V shine Minahil
May 13th 2013
 
 
Usman Awesome!I love your story. Usman
May 9th 2013
 
 
Abdur Rafay Thnx 4 ur wonderful comments Abdur Rafay
Apr 24th 2013
 
 
fatimah It gave me goosebumps but anyways it was terrific, rly amazing. Fatimah
Apr 14th 2013
 
 
Nabeah Love your story!!:)- you are obviosly a good story writer!!!! Nabeah
Mar 13th 2013
 
 
Abdur Rafay Thnx all ...plz like my story!! Abdur Rafay
Feb 27th 2013
 
 
Khadijah The idea is soooooooo great.And I like the name Stephen. Khadijah
Feb 25th 2013
 
 
Sidra I loved it!! Sidra
Feb 25th 2013
 
 
Soha Superb:)) Soha
Feb 24th 2013
 
 
Eshah Nyc Eshah
Feb 23rd 2013
 
 
Abdur Rafay Every 1 plzz like my story.....the more u like it the happier i will be :) Abdur Rafay
Feb 23rd 2013
 
 
l Bravo! I loved your vocabulary and the idea... L
Feb 23rd 2013
 
 

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