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Hiba Saad
Hiba Saad
Jaffar Public School
The Rainbow
Published On Feb 25th 2013
Total Comments : 12
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Rank 8 Out of 10
There was a little boy who loved the rain.
He danced in the drops as they landed on her skin.
He skipped rope in the puddles.
He stretched his arms out and spun around with an open mouth to let the water tickle his tongue.
One day while the boy was twisting and turning underneath the raindrops, a beautiful rainbow lit up his path.
He had always heard that there was a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
He did not see a pot of gold.
She saw light streaks of many colours.
Yellow, Blue, Red.
While the boy was looking at the colours of the rainbow, it turned into a bridge.
He began to walk towards the bridge that was all bright and shiny.
He danced across the bridge and disappeared into the red, blue and yellow rays. In that town, you can hear people talk about the little boy who loved the rain.
You can also hear them talk about a bridge that leads to heaven.
The little boy crossed that bridge, and on a rainy day when the sun peaks through the clouds, you can see and hear him dancing, swirling, grinning, and laughing.
You can, just look.

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Comments 12
Tooba Its awesome Tooba
Apr 14th 2014
jandad Good Jandad
Feb 14th 2014
Aneesa Nice.............! Aneesa
Aug 2nd 2013
Hoora Good story and i like your expressing style and I know you are a future writer Hoora
Jul 29th 2013
Hiba Oops sorry.......ill take care next tym and by the way thanx Hiba
May 3rd 2013
Hiba Thankyou tahira Hiba
May 3rd 2013
marium Hiba you have done two mistakes,instead of his and he you have written her and she.Leaving this mistake behind ,this was a nice story!! Marium
Apr 1st 2013
Soha Amazing Soha
Mar 27th 2013
Barbie Keep working with same dedication...i luv the way you expressed the beauty of nature using colours...rainbows are so cool Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
Hiba Thankyou...ur words promote me to wrte Hiba
Mar 19th 2013
zahra Amazing!!! Zahra
Mar 18th 2013
syeda tahira Omg this is soo amazing the adjectives used are very appropiate Syeda Tahira
Mar 15th 2013

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