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Ali Raza
Ali Raza
Habib Public School
A Day On The Beach
Published On Feb 16th 2013
Total Comments : 8
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It is a beautiful sunny day...I am walking on a beach...the sky is blue...the water is crystal clear...I hear the sound of gentle waves lapping, as the light breeze caresses my skin...the white sand feels warm on my bare feet and between my toes...I am wearing flowing light clothes and breathing deeply, inhaling the smell of fresh ocean air...a sense of freedom washes over my body...I lie down and let my body sink into the warm soft sand...I am completely relaxed...I sink deeper and deeper into relaxation...
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Comments 8
eya Good but it should be more continued more Eya
Dec 24th 2013
Arwa Ramadan Mubarak Arwa
Jul 14th 2013
RAFIA Good . become my friends .i am rafi Rafia
Apr 20th 2013
Mar 24th 2013
Eraj Its short but nicely written:) Eraj
Mar 8th 2013
isbah Gr8! Isbah
Feb 20th 2013
Hiba Please like my stuff ttooooooooo Hiba
Feb 19th 2013
Soha Hmmm.. Nice Soha
Feb 17th 2013

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