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Hiba Saad
Hiba Saad
Jaffar Public School
The Castle With A Fairy
Published On Feb 16th 2013
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There once lived two children named Katherine and Hammad. They had a marvellous garden and they loved to play in it.
One sunny, spring day, Katherine's blue hair ribbon came out of her hair while she was playing in the garden with Hammad. The breeze blew it down a little path.  Katherine chased after it, with Hammad following her.  They ran down the path for a long time, chasing the little ribbon. Finally it stopped.  Kate picked it up, and looked around. "Hammad" she said, "I don't believe we've been in this part of the garden before". "Neither have I" replied Hammad.  He eyed a little shrub.  It was kind of shimmering.  A silvery mist rose from its branches. He ventured into it. Then suddenly he stopped.  He couldn't believe what he saw "Hey! Kathy" he cried "I say, I've found a little castle!"
Katherine came running. She gasped when she saw the castle.  It was causing the shrub to shimmer and shine like it did, for it glistened like silver.
Meanwhile, inside the castle a little fairy princess named Javeria, was very upset.  She had been frightened by Hammad's large yell, and she had hidden in the far corner of a turret. Then, a big eye appeared in the window.  It was Katherine's eye.  Javeria let out a squeal. Katherine took her eye away from the window. "There's a fairy in there!" she cried.
Hammad ran to the window and peeped in. Javeria needing some defence threw her little bag of magic fairy dust at Harry.  It hit him in the nose and it hit Kate on the leg.  Immediately, they shrank down to fairy-size.
Katherine looked down at herself in amazement.  Then, without thinking, she ran to the little castle door and knocked on it. Javeria answered.  She looked at Katherine in anxiety.  "Go away! You scare me," she said bravely. Katherine smiled, it was a kind smile.  "I won't hurt you," she said.  Her voice was so soothing, that Javeria couldn't help but let her in. Hammad came in as well.
Javeria gave them some chocolate buns and some creamy milk.  They had a fine afternoon. Sadly though, it was soon time to leave, so Katherine and Hammad set on their way home.
Javeria the Fairy Princess is a very good friend of the children's now, but their friendship is  a secret, for no one would ever believe Katherine and Hammad if they said they were friends with a fairy!!!

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Comments 23
Tooba Coolbut a little bit mistakes Tooba
Apr 14th 2014
Nuzhat Nice but mistakes Nuzhat
Nov 7th 2013
Nuzhat Nice but mistakes Nuzhat
Nov 7th 2013
Hiba I em fyn what about u............... Hiba
Sep 13th 2013
Iraj Oh my god! hi apiya how are you Iraj
Sep 8th 2013
Marwa Ur welcome dear :P Marwa
Aug 17th 2013
Hoora Too good story and I must tell you you are a future famous author Hoora
Jul 29th 2013
Hiba Thankuuuu so much marwa ,,,so nyc of u Hiba
Jul 24th 2013
Marwa Okay now it's the third story of hiba u guess i am reading and this is awesome and don't worry in all of them i have hit a like if i remember correctly. :) Marwa
Jul 22nd 2013
Zuha Oh sorry by mistake ... it is hammad... thnx for pointing out the mistake Zuha
Jul 21st 2013
Maha Hammad ran to the window and peeped in. Javeria needing some defence threw her little bag of magic fairy dust at Harry. Harry OR Hammad? Maha
Jul 14th 2013
marium Lovely!!!! Marium
Apr 1st 2013
Gullasht Good story Gullasht
Mar 28th 2013
aasiya Mindblowing!plz add me as ur frnds! Aasiya
Mar 22nd 2013
Barbie Just perfect!!! Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
Barbie Just perfect!!! Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
zahra REALLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zahra
Mar 10th 2013
isbah Awsum Isbah
Mar 8th 2013
Adventures I hav never ead a such an amazing story,,,great job ,keep it up Adventures
Feb 20th 2013
Hiba Thanx alot Sidra 4 liking and i will insha Allah return the favour Hiba
Feb 19th 2013
Hiba Apple pulp is called juice, one who doesn't hit like is called please hit like and get one back Hiba
Feb 19th 2013
Hiba Thanx alot soha ,please if you like this story hit like.... Hiba
Feb 19th 2013
Soha Mindblowing!!!! Soha
Feb 17th 2013

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