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Adventures 012
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Let's Dream
Published On Feb 16th 2013
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Close your eyes and dream,
That you're sitting
On a smooth grassy land,
Just beside you,
There's a stream.
A very beautiful bird sits on your hand,
Juicy fruits are served,
With fresh cream.
A heavy cloud covers the sky,
Gorgeous lilies start to swing.
A loud thunder and,
The splashing of water.
Makes you jump out of bed,
And that's when my dream
Comes to an end!
Now I have loads of work,
And lots of books to read.
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Comments 14
Nimra Your welcome adventure :) Nimra
Apr 11th 2013
 
 
Hiba And what should i say now....by the way what is ur age and where do u live?????????? Hiba
Apr 8th 2013
 
 
Adventures Ur welcome hiba Adventures
Apr 4th 2013
 
 
Gullasht Plz plz plz Gullasht
Mar 27th 2013
 
 
Hiba I have already liked them...and thankyou 4 liking mine Hiba
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
Barbie I love dreaming ...going cave hunting and splashing with water...so like this one 222222 Barbie
Mar 22nd 2013
 
 
Adventures Thanx a lot friends and Hiba i will write loads more so you can enjoy please like them too Adventures
Mar 12th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hi adventure nice one... :) Nimra
Feb 23rd 2013
 
 
rabia Assalam-o-alaikum , you write very well. InshaAllah you will win BEST OF LUCK!!! Rabia
Feb 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Yes,,,superb Hiba
Feb 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Hello , adventures012 what is ur real name? by the way please except my friend request and please keep on writing amazing poems...i will be eagerly waiting 4 the next 1!!!! hope u win and keep writing....... ;D Hiba
Feb 20th 2013
 
 
Soha Great!!!!!!! Insha Allah you'll win:))) Soha
Feb 19th 2013
 
 
Maryam Nice :) Maryam
Feb 18th 2013
 
 
Adventures I hope this works wins!!! do you like dreaming...if so click like ;p Adventures
Feb 18th 2013
 
 

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