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Sidra Abdul Rauf
Sidra Abdul Rauf
Pakistan International School
I Was All Alone
Published On Feb 11th 2013
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I was all alone in the middle of the ocean. The dull sun was sinking in the pale, blue water. I saw a distant object floating, moving towards it I gasped for air. WOAH!!It was my bag full of the stuff I had taken to camp, a little food, a flashlight, a match box and some orange juice. Climbing on a wooden plank floating by I opened a pack of chips and thought about what might've happened. Last night my fellow campers and I were having a canoe race when suddenly water started gushing into my canoe. The canoe must've sunk I thought eating my last chip. We were going back to town the next day so I had to get back to camp.
As I sat awaiting my fate I noticed a small, rocky island and went towards it. A huge bird came towards me, shooing it away I moved toward the mysterious Island. Walking along the shore I found a cave. I went inside scared, hungry and very thirsty so I opened up a tin of peaches and drank some of the lemonade. Satisfied, i sprawled on the ground thinking about but what I should do. A few hours later I dozed off in spite of the uncomfortable, rocky ground.
In the morning, according to my plan, I went to the woods to gather up some logs to make a raft as I had learned at the camp.
Rowing hard with wooden planks as oars, I rowed and rowed for hours.
"Then what happened?" asked Della, roasting another marshmallow on the campfire."Then I finally reached camp and found all of you." I replied with a smile.

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Comments 24
qurratul Good job!nyc Qurratul
Mar 15th 2014
qurratul Good job!nyc Qurratul
Mar 15th 2014
Syeda Laiba Yes i loved your story Syeda Laiba
Jul 14th 2013
Sidra Well thanks anyway :D Sidra
Jun 30th 2013
Tooba Sudden ending but creative... :) Tooba
Jun 30th 2013
Minahil Sudden ending but ofcourse no offense It was a niceeeeeeeeeee one Minahil
Jun 6th 2013
Sidra Oh, hey unaiza! :) Sidra
May 9th 2013
Unaiza I'm maryum's friend(shumayla)sister... Unaiza
Apr 18th 2013
Sidra 7 'C' Sidra
Apr 13th 2013
Farha Hey sidra i studied in the same school in which section you are of grade 7?? Farha
Apr 11th 2013
Sidra Thanks khadijah and yes the posters on my wall ;) *wink* Sidra
Feb 26th 2013
l Nice one.I liked it...So Sidra what's up..!What about the poster of Zyn Malik you got.... L
Feb 23rd 2013
mishaal Very creative!!!the ending gives a smile on my face! Mishaal
Feb 21st 2013
Hiba Not so good but not even bad....;D Hiba
Feb 20th 2013
Syeda Laiba Are you nisma asif`s friend i am her cousin Syeda Laiba
Feb 19th 2013
Sidra Yes i am her friend and i got you request :) by the way do you like my story? Sidra
Feb 18th 2013
Syeda Laiba I want to add u so how can i add Syeda Laiba
Feb 17th 2013
Syeda Laiba Are you nisma asif`s friend Syeda Laiba
Feb 17th 2013
Sidra Thank you zahra Sidra
Feb 17th 2013
Zahra Awww...Awesome ... bye... Zahra Shehzad Zahra
Feb 16th 2013
Sidra Thanks :D Sidra
Feb 16th 2013
Soha Great!!! Soha
Feb 15th 2013
Sidra Thank u :) Sidra
Feb 12th 2013
tehmina Enough good Tehmina
Feb 12th 2013

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