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Aliza Syed
Aliza Syed
Roots Millennium
Messy Room
Published On Feb 9th 2013
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February 2013
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My mom always tells me to clean my room,
As it’s like a temple of doom,
Cloths and paint everywhere,
Come inside if you dare.
My mom came with my bag,
"Clean your room so i don’t have to nag!"
She says I m so lazy,
But clean up simply sounds crazy,
It’s all dirty from a long time,
I would be behind bars if laziness was a crime,
I just like to sit and watch TV,
With hands around a cup of coffee,
But I look at the trash bin with,
Over flooded stuff in it,
And the dirt stuck to it.
Would cleaning it make it a better place,
I doubt it; I would only get a blackened face.
May be, I should cave, and
Clean my mess
But the time it will take is not less.

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Comments 29
manail Nice poem keep writing!!! Manail
Sep 17th 2015
 
 
Tooba Bravo Tooba
May 10th 2014
 
 
Aliza Actually I live in Pakistan Aliza
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
fatimah Well maybe they had a bit of shortage :P Fatimah
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα I got My gift.....but the editor of vshine knows our home in Pakistan sooooo Long story short....when i wuz in pakistan they came to my home jst 4 lik meeting and da next ma gift was there(in the postbox):).....mayb u people should go to Pakistan to receive it LOL...but seriously its da ONLY WAY!!!!!! яυмαιsα
Jul 13th 2013
 
 
Aliza I called them,no answer.emailed them and even left a message on their facebook official page..but no use :( Anyone got their gift? Aliza
Jul 9th 2013
 
 
fatimah Same here, Elize. i too won but they dint gave me any gift eventhough we called and e-mailed them. Fatimah
Jun 25th 2013
 
 
Aliza Well i havent received my gift.. and vshine is not answering my e-mails :( Aliza
Jun 24th 2013
 
 
abdul rafay Whats your gift Abdul Rafay
Apr 1st 2013
 
 
manail Awesom...wats ur gift...!!!!!!????????? Manail
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
Aliza Hey everyone...thanx for da lykes n comments,....nd great support....n ya as soon i ll recieve ma gift, i'll tell u all, but can anyone tell y da gifts late? thx^_^ Aliza
Mar 30th 2013
 
 
manal Truly amazing! Manal
Mar 25th 2013
 
 
 яυмαιsα AWWWWSSSSSOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEE............................... яυмαιsα
Mar 20th 2013
 
 
Aryan Hey frendzz Aryan
Mar 19th 2013
 
 
aasiya Nice poem aliza!keep it up! Aasiya
Mar 17th 2013
 
 
Arouba Very nice,indeed! Arouba
Mar 16th 2013
 
 
Aliza No gift recieved yet,,,... Aliza
Mar 13th 2013
 
 
qirat Nysh ... :) Qirat
Mar 8th 2013
 
 
afifah Nice poem, congrats! Afifah
Mar 8th 2013
 
 
Soha Am fine Moiz!! Soha
Mar 6th 2013
 
 
Eraj Really good poem Eraj
Mar 5th 2013
 
 
Amna Congrats and niceeeeeeeee poemmmmmmmmm Amna
Mar 5th 2013
 
 
Rabita I like it very much Rabita
Mar 3rd 2013
 
 
Irum Wat was ur gift? Irum
Mar 3rd 2013
 
 
Aliza Thnk u all... Aliza
Mar 3rd 2013
 
 
Moiz Nice poem! Congratulations.. And Soha my cousin, how are u?? Moiz
Mar 3rd 2013
 
 
Soha Excellent!! Keep it up:)) I like it... Soha
Mar 2nd 2013
 
 
rabia Awesome Aliza nice rhymings Rabia
Mar 2nd 2013
 
 
Princess Nice poem! Princess
Feb 9th 2013
 
 

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